Dark Angels

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  • that was so poeticly beutifull

    Markd4547 posted: »

    XD No I gave you a blank canvass your talent drew the picture of what he became and will become so thank you bro

  • i just started recently...........

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Well reply or like this comment if you're still reading this, If there's less people than I thought i'll start writing less often and possib

  • Why do i feel like i gave you the perfect place to lock up sparky

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dear Guys, I can't thank you enough for everything you have done for me, you're all like a 2nd family to me, sometimes we run into some bump

  • Great chapter, as always :)

    Sure, We're gonna need a lot of Help

    I don't think Audrey is Spark's insider, if he even has one, since she is barely a member of the team, not some high-power contact.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 3:Out for Blood Chapter 5 Javier Mendoza Me, Anslem, and Elsa were together but Rick and a beautiful but evil compani

  • Awww.. i kinda wanted Sparks to incarcerated in Limbo but this is amazing still good job

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    @Markd4547 Dark Angels Part 2: The Hunt Chapter 5 Constance: So, What about you kids? Gonna get some rest here? Javier: Si, Si....

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    Jacob: Son of a Saltlick.

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    SALTLICK is the worst word to ever get called you took things way to far I'm offended by that horrible word

    Sure, We're gonna need a lot of Help

    Sparker is based on me so I can tell you either way your dead either way your being watched and every move monitored so enjoy the moment anything you pick or do will prove worthless

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gDoNoHXaC6M

    YES AWESOME claps ^

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 3:Out for Blood Chapter 5 Javier Mendoza Me, Anslem, and Elsa were together but Rick and a beautiful but evil compani

  • Part 4: All Angels Fall Preview

    Sparker

    Sparker: How are ya kids?

    Elsa Muffled ILL KILL BHA

    Sparker: Now sweetie it's not polite to mumble... What about you Techno Boy?

    Jacob: Fuck Yourself

    Sparker: Kids these days don't know how to speak English Takes out pocket knife Speak English dammit, Not "American" ,English!

    Ethan: How about you go kill yourself and we get let go, That good you psycho?

    Sparker: Want to know something I think about?

    Ethan: No.

    Sparker: What God Damn language is that? Stabs Ethan in the Leg

    Ethan: AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

    Anslem: Wait till I got my fucking hands on you.

    Sparker: Chill out, WHY SO SERIOUS!!?!? EHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    Vicente Carmine

    Vicente: So, You're Warren Roldan? What's this new weapon you wanted to show me?

    Warren: Nice to meet you Vicente, I have made a "weapon" that you and your company will love and it will revolutionize our world

    Vicente: What is it?

    Warren: Meet PeGaSuTy 89240, It's the first Machine to be able to preform and act like a human being, It's only a prototype so it's kind of shitty right now Hits Robot but I'm currently working on more, I just need the funding. So what do you say?

    Vicente: Let me look at it more and see how it tests out

    Warren: Sure.

    Vicente: Can't wait to see this in action, Let me call a associate for a second, Dials Number Heya Sparker.

  • Name: Wilson Smith

    Age: 14

    Appearance: black short heddle hair , brown eyes , caucasian , 4,3 feet tall

    Personality: Shy , Talkative , Smart(er than Javier) ,

    Group/Alliance: Team Member

  • Cool!

    supersagig posted: »

    Name: Wilson Smith Age: 14 Appearance: black short heddle hair , brown eyes , caucasian , 4,3 feet tall Personality: Shy , Talkative , Smart(er than Javier) , Group/Alliance: Team Member

  • Personality: Shy , Talkative , Smart(er than Javier) ,

    Nobody is smarter than Javier, amigo :D

    supersagig posted: »

    Name: Wilson Smith Age: 14 Appearance: black short heddle hair , brown eyes , caucasian , 4,3 feet tall Personality: Shy , Talkative , Smart(er than Javier) , Group/Alliance: Team Member

  • Name: OKMHG810

    Age: 1 day

    Appearance: like a robot

    Personality: robot one

    Group/Alliance: Evil Roles

    Any other info: he´s a robot :P

  • Robo "Pal" for the other one :)

    supersagig posted: »

    Name: OKMHG810 Age: 1 day Appearance: like a robot Personality: robot one Group/Alliance: Evil Roles Any other info: he´s a robot :P

  • The "Evil one" XD

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Robo "Pal" for the other one

  • Sparker: Chill out, WHY SO SERIOUS!!?!? EHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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    AH I LOVE IT this is the best

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Part 4: All Angels Fall Preview Sparker Sparker: How are ya kids? Elsa Muffled ILL KILL BHA Sparker: Now sweetie it's not polite

  • I think it's unfair till we see more of the rest but I'm interested in all the stories :D

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    http://www.strawpoll.me/3118185

  • Yeah i kinda agree with mark its too soon man

    i seriously one of those dosent even have a prolouge

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    http://www.strawpoll.me/3118185

  • Jurasic park

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Yeah i kinda agree with mark its too soon man i seriously one of those dosent even have a prolouge

  • edited December 2014

    is a new part coming?

  • Today Yes,I was busy yesterday and didn't get a chance to go on here, False Alarm Guys, I'm not dead YET

    Zachiscool posted: »

    is a new part coming?

  • Dark Angels Part 4:All Angels Fall Chapter 1

    Elsa Houten

    This son of a bitch was playing games with us and for some reason he put a rag in my mouth but not anyone else's, For the first time in Forever, I actually felt afraid, Should have killed him when we had the chance..........

    Elsa: Ugh. Mphhhhh.

    Sparker: What are you saying? HEY KIDZ I THINK ELSA WANTS TO SING A SONG! WHICH ONE DO YOU GUYS WANT TO SING!?

    Jacob: How bout the one that's Up Your Ass.

    Sparker: Poor choice of words Takes out Tazer

    Jacob: Hey, that my Tazer?

    Sparker: Finders Keepers Tazes Jacob in the balls

    Jacob: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OH MYYYYYYYYYY GODDDDDDDDDDDD AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU FUCKING CUNT!!!!!!!!!

    Sparker: How bout we sing a song called "You die if you misbehave again"

    Ethan: Hey, How about you give me a knife, Hear me out, Hear me out, And I use it to cut my hands free then I get my friends out here.....

    Anslem: That's a good idea, Clown you agree with that?

    Sparker: I like jokes a little now and then but even for a guy like me that was pretty fucking stupid and like I said earlier, What fucking launguage are you speaking? Irelandesse or some shit? Maybe it's American. Speak English Batsy!!!

    Sparker tazes Anslem and puts a knife to Ethan's throat

    Ethan: Do it you piece of Shit

    Sparker: You din't listen to the song........ You broke the rules, You wanted a knife skurb, Now you get one....

    Vicente Carmine

    Vicente: I think we have a deal.

    Warren: Berry Good then instead of this piece of shit prototype, I'll leave you with a better model, OKMHG810.

    Vicente: Cool, Dials Number Hey Rick, Get your guys ready, Those Spooks pissed at Sparker are coming after us so get ready.... Hangs Up, Think this is gonna work Sparker? What do you think Kiddies?

    Sparker: I just shoved some Horse Shit into their mouths and taped them shut, Except for this princess right here Pats Elsa If they don't come to pick them up, Then they die.....

    Vicente: Good, I have some deals to go make and I want to bring down that Agency those guys after us work for.............

    Jordan Wilkerson

    To finish off Sparker once and for all, I was gonna need some serious Help, I went to an Old friend Peterson Hunt but he said he was out of this stuff, I'll try seeing if there';s anyone else............

    Javier: So Audrey? You single?

    Audrey: Yeah, I'm taken and it's none of your business.....

    Jordan: Calls Agent 123Hey 123, They have some hostages and we are gonna need more guys........

    Agent 123 Voice: Well due to you guys fucking up I have had to pull in all operatives, Not much for you guys but I know of someone who is in the area who has a damn good resume, His name is Wilson Smith, And in the good words of Jesus Christ, Live Long and Prosper, or some shit like that...........Hangs Up

    Melanie: So, What did he say?

    Jordan: Not much near us but there's a guy named Wilson Smith who's close.

    Anthanasius: Hey guys, What did I miss after my piss?

    Jordan: Did you just rhyme? Don't do that again.

    John: Not much, Just hanging out Anthanasius.

    Jordan: I'll go, You guys just make sure no one steals the plane.....

    Jordan drives away

    Jordan: You're not an easy guy to find....

    Wilson: Not hard enough............

    Jordan: What's with your voice, You 18 or something?

    Wilson: 19

    Jordan: Would have maybe believed ya if you said 16

    Wilson: Then i'm 16

    Jordan Glares

    Wilson: Fine, I'm 14 but that doesn't matter, I can get the job done.

    Jordan: You sure Looks at Wilsons Height

    Wilson: Yeah I can you fucking piece of shit, What about you? What's with the eye? You trying to go Pirate or something?

    Jordan: Some psycho who i'm after now did this and killed one of my guys and is responsible for another's death along with Abducting a few others.

    Wilson: I really don't care, When do we start?

    Jordan: Well, with your "Physical Qualities" I'm not sure.......... Let Wilson help out OR You're too young and I'm not gonna get you hurt...

  • Let wilson help

    Btw: are you posting anything for shadow of november?

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 4:All Angels Fall Chapter 1 Elsa Houten This son of a bitch was playing games with us and for some reason he put a ra

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    Let Wilson help out

    They are going to need every help they can get

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 4:All Angels Fall Chapter 1 Elsa Houten This son of a bitch was playing games with us and for some reason he put a ra

  • Let Wilson help out

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 4:All Angels Fall Chapter 1 Elsa Houten This son of a bitch was playing games with us and for some reason he put a ra

  • Let Wilson help out

  • Let Wilson help out

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 4:All Angels Fall Chapter 1 Elsa Houten This son of a bitch was playing games with us and for some reason he put a ra

  • Let Wilson help out

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 4:All Angels Fall Chapter 1 Elsa Houten This son of a bitch was playing games with us and for some reason he put a ra

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    You're too young and I'm not gonna get you hurt...

    I love this fanfic :D and if he comes his dead so DON''T mess with my plans >:D

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 4:All Angels Fall Chapter 1 Elsa Houten This son of a bitch was playing games with us and for some reason he put a ra

  • Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 2

    Anslem Sanders

    Anslem: You piece of fucking shit.

    Sparker: Shut up skrub, Hey Alex you awake?

    Alex Mason: Yeah, What do you ya need?

    Sparker: This one's being Salty.....

    Alex Mason: Fucking Newb, Punches Anslem

    Jacob: Analyzing the situation...The offenders are dipshits

    Zack: And you're the offender Pulls out Mini-Gun

    Alex: Chill out shorty

    Zack: Fine........

    Sparker: I don't need Bonnie and Clyde here, so you can meet up with Rick and get ready for the attack of the Fat, Dumb and Parasite Muricans...

    Zack: Will do, Bra

    Sparker: I'm not your "Bra", I'm in charge of this shit, I think your height is getting to your head

    Zack: Mgh!! Mother Fu-...

    Jacob: You guys done yet?

    Sparker: Not even close Tazes Jacob in the balls

    Jacob: AGAIN??? WHAT THE FUCK YOU FAG!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

    Elsa: Mgh!!! BHHHH!!! BMBBVHBNC!

    Sparker: Speak English instead of Snow Princess crap EHAHAHAHA And for you Ethan, I don't like you, you give off this bad vibe too me... oh well guess more fun for me..... Picks up Machete

    Vicente Carmine

    Vicente: Hello Becs, You look as beautiful as ever

    Rebecca: Thank you Vicente, Did the deal with Mr. Roldan go well?

    Vicente: Yes, Berry Good Darling, I think we'll have some of the newest equipment soon.

    Rebecca: That's refreshing, Now let's celebrate..........

    Jordan Wilkerson

    Jordan: Fine kid, you can come

    Wilson: Great choice, you got this one in the bag now.

    1 hour later

    Jordan: I'm back

    Melanie: Who's the kid?

    Jordan: This is Wilson and he's here to help, don't worry, he's more than qualified.

    Melanie: Whatever.

    Anthanasius: So Sorry Jordan but one of my kids is sick.

    Jordan: You got kids?

    Anthanasius: And 2 Ex-Wives

    Jordan: Sorry to hear that.

    Anthanasius: No i'm sorry,, I can't help you take these chicken fucks down.

    Jordan: I know, I know.

    Javier Mendoza

    Jordan: How are you?

    Javier: What do you mean?

    Jordan: I mean, how are you holding up with knowing that we're all that's left of the original team, Jack, Hopeless, and Arin are gone, then Elsa and Jacob are with that crazy bastard..... And we don't know what could happen to them.

    Javier: Tried not to think about it like that, It's hard to deal with that, That everyone you knew at a point are all ... gone.......

    Jordan: I'll leave you to your thoughts, I'm gonna check in with that kid Wilson, and get the plane ready.

    Javier: Adios....

    Anslem Sanders

    Anslem: NO!!! ETHAN!!!

    Sparker: Aw, C'mon WHY SO SERIOUS!!!!!!! Seriously, You are way too tense, same with the rest of your friends, so to LIGHTEN THINGS UP

    Ethan: Screw you.

    Jacob: Fuck Yo Ma!!!!!! OHHHHHHHHHHHH

    Elsa: BAHSGGUSGFYUGSUDGGSC

    Sparker: Elsa, Please let yourself go EHAHAHAHAHA, Anslem, You look like the Badass out of this bunch, so I'll let you choose, One of you is dying here Right Now, Cocks Pistol But you get to choose which one, Elsa, You, Ethan, Jacob, or a surprise option!!!!! You have 25 seconds to decide HAHAHAHAHAHA

    Elsa

    Anslem

    Ethan

    Jacob

    Surprise Option

    Tell me what you guys think :D

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    Jacob , your time is gone.

    The surprise option will end up with more than one person dead

    Excellent Chapter!!!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 2 Anslem Sanders Anslem: You piece of fucking shit. Sparker: Shut up skrub, Hey Alex yo

  • Elsa is muffled right now while the others are not, That's cold xD, And the suprise might be that, Or maybe not..... :)

    supersagig posted: »

    Jacob , your time is gone. The surprise option will end up with more than one person dead Excellent Chapter!!!

  • Else - It's time to let her go.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 2 Anslem Sanders Anslem: You piece of fucking shit. Sparker: Shut up skrub, Hey Alex yo

  • Surprising xD, The former favorite Character :) I like your insanity

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Else - It's time to let her go.

  • Don't forget Rick is my last character, and he's a bad guy. >:3

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Surprising xD, The former favorite Character I like your insanity

  • Im tempted to vote Anslem.......... But i do allways love a suprise >:)

    Option 4 pls

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 2 Anslem Sanders Anslem: You piece of fucking shit. Sparker: Shut up skrub, Hey Alex yo

  • Changed my vote and Elsa was already hurt before going to hunt down Vicente in Dubai

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Elsa is muffled right now while the others are not, That's cold xD, And the suprise might be that, Or maybe not.....

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    Surprise Option

    Jacobs balls deserve a break and Elsa already has it bad enough, since she wouldn't even be able to give Sparky a witty one-liner before she dies. And Ethan... I just realized how little I know about Ethan.

    So, In my opinion it would be a seriously jerkish, if not downright evil move if Anslem would suggest anyone except himself. That would be more befitting to someone like Alex or Zack, not one of the supposedly good guys.

    But we know one thing about the Sparker: He does not make any sense at all. So every option could be a surprise option. And he also does not say that the Surprise Option includes shooting anyone. I mean, it's a surprise option after all. Anything's possible :D

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 2 Anslem Sanders Anslem: You piece of fucking shit. Sparker: Shut up skrub, Hey Alex yo

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    UPDATED COUNT.

    Elsa-1

    Anslem- 0

    Ethan- 0

    Jacob- 3

    Surprise option- 2

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Im tempted to vote Anslem.......... But i do allways love a suprise Option 4 pls

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    XD YES this is the best chapter so far your improving every day this was perfection tazing balls, calling people salty, Joker serious quote and now going to kill someone randomly I cannot comprehend the awesomeness :D

    Surprise Option

    To hard to pick because I want to kill them all so suprise me >:D

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 4: All Angels Fall Chapter 2 Anslem Sanders Anslem: You piece of fucking shit. Sparker: Shut up skrub, Hey Alex yo

  • Okay, the vote is for Jacob now, got it, And Elsa wouldn't be there if you guys didn't vote for her to come along, Like it or not my choices have consequences :)

    supersagig posted: »

    Changed my vote and Elsa was already hurt before going to hunt down Vicente in Dubai

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