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  • Awesome part!!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Well since this part is a mission I might change it up a bit. Dark Angels Part 1:The Mission Chapter 3 Lynne Bowen We got some rest

  • Thanks! And Sparker is the character that @Markd4547 made so it's expected :)

    That was one awesome part! I really like Sparker, that guy is just entertainingly crazy. And Elsa making a Frozen pun was hilarious Poor Hopeless though... Chase Jack, because I'm sure that Sparker could be a bit much for Jordan on his own

  • When the Team Ally will arrive to the story?

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Thanks

  • Thanks :)

    supersagig posted: »

    Awesome part!!

  • Saltlick123 posted: »

    Well since this part is a mission I might change it up a bit. Dark Angels Part 1:The Mission Chapter 3 Lynne Bowen We got some rest

  • When will the Team Ally arrive to the story?

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Thanks

  • Soon :)

    supersagig posted: »

    When will the Team Ally arrive to the story?

  • edited November 2014

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    I caught up and that was awesome but wtf Sparker is insane, psychotic and only interested in killing and chaos it is like looking in the mirror reading this story :'D

    Chase Jack

    Chase Spark your dead it's not worth the risk

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Well since this part is a mission I might change it up a bit. Dark Angels Part 1:The Mission Chapter 3 Lynne Bowen We got some rest

  • XD No I gave you a blank canvass your talent drew the picture of what he became and will become so thank you bro

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Thanks! And Sparker is the character that @Markd4547 made so it's expected

  • Thanks :), I wasn't sure if I made him good enough so I was planning to make him better but since you said he's good enough, I don't have to do that anymore.Alt text

    Markd4547 posted: »

    I caught up and that was awesome but wtf Sparker is insane, psychotic and only interested in killing and chaos it is like looking in the mirror reading this story :'D Chase Jack Chase Spark your dead it's not worth the risk

  • Just an update, at the end of each part I will give a brief description of what would have happened if the other choices were selected. :)

  • Well Fuck, I kinda wanted hype to build but I'm so bored right now i'm gonna write another part.

    Dark Angels Part 1: The Mission Chapter 4

    Lynne Bowen

    The mission went wrong, Jordan went chasing the fucker who shot Hopeless who we all once knew and was a good friend, so that left me and the team trying to give first aid to Hopeless, I feel bad, he said this mission felt different and it was, it went horribly wrong and he was hurt maybe even killed right next to me,II felt stunned and I feel like there's something behind that, I don't know what....

    Elsa Houten: Stay with us! Don't Die!! Javier, you were a medic once right!?

    Javier: Yeah, But he's lost too much blood, If he's gonna have a chance we need to get him to a hospital FAST.

    Elsa Houten: How about the back up? We have an extraction team right?

    Arin Osco: No, it was too risky to contact Agent 123 for backup so we voted against it.

    Jacob Voice: Guys? What the fuck is going on down there?

    Elsa Houten: Not the time Jacob!!! Call an ambulance!

    Jacob Voice: It's gonna be at least 20 Minutes, Is that good enough?

    Lynne Bowen: Maybe if we can stabilize him...

    Arin Osco: Javier, can you do that?

    Javier: I'm trying!

    Elsa Houten: Oh My God how did this happen?

    Jordan Wilkerson

    I chose to chase that fucker Jack down, he was a good friend who we thought was killed during a mission but he survived and started dealing with guys like Sparker, He's not the guy I once knew, I have questions and I want answers, No one fucks with my family like he just did.

    Sparker cackling in the background

    Jordan Wilkerson: JACK!!!!!!!!!!! JACK YOU SON OF A BITCH!!!

    I was chasing Jack all around, he was trying to throw trashcans and other shit back at me but I didn't care, No One fucks with me like he just did but when I went around a corner I felt something hit me

    Jordan Wilkerson: Ah! Jack you motherfu-

    Sparker: Morning Sunshine, That wasn't Jack, that was me HAHAHAHAHA

    Jordan Wilkerson: YOU PIECE OF SHIT!

    Jacks voice echoing in the backround: Watch your language Jordan.... Didn't your mother ever teach you manners or was she too busy Fucking the first guy that walked through the door all the time*

    Sparker: He has a point you know, and that would explain why you didn't try and get me, Because you have no balls, Hell even Jack has more balls than you even that Pretty Princess Elsa has more balls than you, That's right, Jack told me everything about your little team, And i'm coming for them next. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    Jordan Wilkerson: Fuuckk.... You....

    I tried to punch that Psychos teeth out but instead I saw his foot jump up and hit me in the face, I saw, felt and tasted my own blood while I saw Sparker approach me laughing like a Maniac and there was nothing i could do... .

    (No choice for this part)

  • Excellent it's getting better every chapter I like where this is going I can't wait for more >:D

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Well Fuck, I kinda wanted hype to build but I'm so bored right now i'm gonna write another part. Dark Angels Part 1: The Mission Chapter

  • Thanks, I'll probably make at least 1 more part tomorrow, I just wanted to keep the suspense going :)

    Markd4547 posted: »

    Excellent it's getting better every chapter I like where this is going I can't wait for more >:D

  • Great :D

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Thanks, I'll probably make at least 1 more part tomorrow, I just wanted to keep the suspense going

  • edited November 2014

    Well there's gonna be 5 chapters per part, I don't know how many parts there will be though, Maybe 5 or 10.....

    Dark Angels Part 1: The Mission Chapter 5

    Elsa Houten

    After trying to stabilize Hopeless we weren't sure if he was going to make it or not, the ambulance finally arrived and they're trying right now to save him, Arin felt like something was wrong with Jordan not coming back so he went to look for him but all we could do was hope for the best...

    Javier: Doc, he going to be okay?

    Doctor: I can't say, the bullet grazed a few main veins in his neck and he lost a lot of blood over the time he was hit to when we picked him up, so we moved him to immediate surgery and the operation is going on right now.

    Javier: Thanks for the update

    Lynne Bowen: Keep us updated.

    Doctor: Of course.

    Elsa Houten: Oh My God, we should have contacted Agent 123 and have gotten back up for this one...

    Lynne Bowen: I guess, Hopeless said this one would be different... He was right and I didn't listen.

    Elsa Houten: It's not your fault.

    Lynne Bowen:I don't know, I don't usually do missions with teams and now on this, someone get hurt.

    Javier: Not just someone a fucking Bro Scout

    Elsa Houten: Bro Scout?

    Javier: Don't Judge...

    Elsa Houten: I couldn't care less right now. Let's just Hopeless still has some Hope.

    Lynne Bowen: Glare

    Elsa Houten: Sorry, I didn't mean it that way.

    Javier: I wonder if Jordan and Arin have caught this son of a bitch yet....

    Jordan Wilkerson

    After Sparker kicked me, I was on the ground coughing up blood, All I heard was that laugh, that fucking creepy laugh of his getting closer and closer to me...

    Sparker: Get up, Don't make me feel lonely... Jordan attempts to get up but Sparker kicks him back down C'MON GET UP! GET THE FUCK UP!

    Jordan Wilkerson: Coming right up bitch!

    Sparker kicks Jordan once again and continues to punch him

    Jordan Wilkerson: Ugh, Why, Why the fuck are you doing this?

    Sparker: Why Not? EH HAHAHAHAHA

    Arin Voice: JORDAN, WHERE ARE YOU!?

    Jordan Wilkerson: Over He- Sparker hits with the back-end of his knife

    Sparker: IF YA WANT HIM COME AND GET HIM, HA HA!!!!!!! Pulls out pistol and loads it waiting for Arin as he gets closer

    Jordan Wilkerson: NO! Jumps up and grabs Sparkers gun

    Sparker: Oh, Feisty!

    While they are struggling, the gun is thrown across the ground, And Jordan punches Sparker

    Sparker: Not Bad, hopefully you won't mind Draws out Knife

    Jordan Wilkerson: Bring it asshole

    Sparker falls to the ground and is Unconscious

    Arin Osco: Huh, hope you won't mind if I bring a gun to a knife fight, What happened to you Jordan?

    Jordan Wilkerson: I got my ass kicked, I went to get Jack but this fucker jumped me and Jack got away...

    Arin Osco: Oh well, This guy was the mission anyways.

    Jordan Wilkerson: For Now.... Let's get Mr. Clown right here to the plane. Where's the others?

    Arin Osco: They're with Hopeless at the Hospital

    Jordan Wilkerson: He going to be okay?

    Arin Osco: I don't know... But to save time we can get this piece of shit back to HQ and the others can get picked up when Hopeless is ready...

    Jordan Wilkerson: And if he's even alive still.

    Arin Osco: Yeah, Lets get this guy outta here but do you want to search for Jack? You said he was nearby so he could not have gotten far.

    Just take Sparker to the Plane and go to HQ or Look for Jack

    Lynne Bowen

    Hopeless is still in Surgery, I feel like this is my fault somehow.....

    Jacob: Hey guys how's he?

    Lynne Bowen: He's still in surgery, Where were you?

    Jacob: I was cleaning some things up from, you know...

    Elsa Houten: I can't believe this happened...

    Lynne Bowen: Did Jordan and Arin check in yet?

    Javier: Yeah, How are our Amigos? They catch the diablo that did this yet?

    Jacob: The last update I got from them was Jack got away but they caught Sparker, they told us to take our time and to take care of Hopeless...

    Doctor Enters

    Lynne Bowen and Elsa Houten: He gonna be okay?

    END OF PART 1 Will Hopeless survive?, Is Sparker screwed? and what will Jack have in store for the team now?

    Please Leave feedback! and if you were disappointed by this part, this was mainly to build up for something bigger :)

  • Look for Jack
    Great Part!!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Well there's gonna be 5 chapters per part, I don't know how many parts there will be though, Maybe 5 or 10..... Dark Angels Part 1: The M

  • I think it's fantastic and never imprison the sparker he would never let you unless it was part of his plan >:D

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    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Well there's gonna be 5 chapters per part, I don't know how many parts there will be though, Maybe 5 or 10..... Dark Angels Part 1: The M

  • We'll see :)

    Markd4547 posted: »

    I think it's fantastic and never imprison the sparker he would never let you unless it was part of his plan >:D

  • And just to tell you, some of the Team Allies will either be introduced in Part 2 Chapter 1 or Part 2 Chapter 2 :)

    supersagig posted: »

    Look for Jack Great Part!!

  • Name: Warren Roldan

    Age: 48

    Appearance: white short curly hair , blue eyes , 3,2 feet tall , caucasian

    Personality: Crazy , Maniac , Sarcastic , Obsessed

    Evil Roles
    He is a scientist that make robots to socialite and defend himself

  • Name: PeGaSuTy 89240

    Age: 2 years from his creation

    Appearance: Robot one xd

    Personality: Intelligent , Calm , Doesn´t understand sarcasm

    Team Ally

    He was created by Warren.R but he was made with so much brain that he made his own awareness and he/it free himself from Warren. He can create grenates , missiles and other cool stuff and used to attack other people (evil in this case)

  • Name: Audrey Delgado.

    Age: 20.

    Appearance: African American/Mexican, thin, with short, dark hair and dark eyes.

    Personality: Has ADHD (gets really hyperactive sometimes, gets jittery, has a hard time paying attention, ect.) and is sarcastic. She loves to quote things, usually Forrest Gump ("Life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what you'll get.")

    Other Random Stuff: She's a character I've planned to use for a TWDG fanfic and is a Lesbian.

    Team Ally?

  • Well reply or like this comment if you're still reading this, If there's less people than I thought i'll start writing less often and possibly take away choices depending on the situation. If there's a good amount then i'll keep going at the pace i'm going.

  • I'm still following this, it's pretty awesome! >:D

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Well reply or like this comment if you're still reading this, If there's less people than I thought i'll start writing less often and possib

  • I´m still here :P

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Well reply or like this comment if you're still reading this, If there's less people than I thought i'll start writing less often and possib

  • edited November 2014

    Dark Angels Part 2: The Hunt Chapter 1

    Jordan Wilkerson

    I got my ass kicked by that Jackass Sparker but me and Arin caught him, so we tied his hands and feet and went out to look for Jack since he couldn't have gone far...

    Jordan Wilkerson: I hear something approaching around the corner...

    Arin Osco: Be Careful bro.

    Jordan Wilkerson approaches and jumps around the corner, pushing someone to the wall with the end of his gun

    Jordan Wilkerson: Constance?

    Constance: Hey Jordan, Mind lowering that?

    Jordan Wilkerson: Depends on what you're doing here.

    Constance: Hopefully not taking out you're target again.

    Jordan Wilkerson: It's alright Arin, Come on out now, Lowers Gun

    Arin: Constance, that you?

    Constance: Yeah, Got a problem kid?

    Arin: Maybe you if you're trying to beat us to or mission

    Constance: Relax, I'm just trying to take out some fucker called Sparker.

    Arin: Well we have him already so beat it

    Jordan Wilkerson: Relax Arin.

    Arin: I was just playin

    Constance: Where's the rest of your team?

    Jordan Wilkerson: At the hospital, I wonder how they're doing now, But C'mon Constance we'll give you a lift to our HQ.

    Elsa Houten

    The mission went wrong, and Hopleess was shot, the Doctor just came out to give us an update

    Elsa Houten and Lynne Bowen: He gonna be okay?

    Doctor: We preformed immediate Surgery on him but he went into arrest and his heart stopped, We tried to revive him but our attempts failed, I'm sorry but your friend is dead.

    Lynne Bowen: GOD DAMMIT!

    Javier: Fucking Shit

    Jacob: What happened?

    Elsa Houten: He was shot... by Jack.

    Jacob: Jack was the one who shot him, Damn...

    Elsa Houten: It doesn't matter now, We're gonna find him and kill him.

    Jacob: I heard that Jordan and Arin are leaving, There's gonna be a team to pick us up.

    Doctor enters again

    Doctor: I found a note in your friend's pocket, I think it's best if you open it.

    Lynne Bowen: Motherfuck, If we had backup he would probably be alive.... (If you guys chose to contact Agent 123 the same events would have happened except Hopeless would have gotten help sooner and would have lived)

    Arin Osco

    No Update on Hopeless yet, and we couldn't find Jack but we got Sparker and ran into an old friend Constance, We went on the plane and took off, We're going to HQ

    Arin Osco: Want to wake the son of a bitch up?

    Constance: Easy Way or Hard Way?

    Jordan Wilkerson: Hard Way Punches Sparker

    Sparker: Woah, GOOD MOORNAN VIEETNAAAAAM!

    Jordan Wilkerson: Cut the shit

    Sparker: In half or thirds faggot?

    Constance: You shouldn't play around with the Man if you wanna stay alive.

    Sparker: Stay Alive? What's the point of living if you can't feel alive, All you Americans are the same.

    Elsa Houten Voice Jordan? Arin? You guys there?

    Jordan Wilkerson: Stay here, I'll go to the front of the plane cause Elsa is calling

    Sparker: Oh, that cunt, You can just let it go....

    Arin:Say that one more time...

    Sparker: StupidAssFuckSayWhat?

    Arin: What?

    Sparker: HAHAHAHAHA

    Jordan Wilkerson: Relax Arin, Don't kill him, Same for you Constance...

    Jordan goes up front

    Jordan Wilkerson: What is it Elsa?

    Elsa Houten Voice: Hopeless is dead

    Jordan Wilkerson: What?

    Elsa Houten Voice: Docs did the best they could but it was too late, if Meds could have gotten to him sooner or if we had backup, he would have had a good chance...

    Jordan Wilkerson: Oh My God.... Thanks for the update

    Jordan goes to the back of the plane

    Jordan Wilkerson: SON OF A BITCH!!! Starts hitting Sparker

    Sparker: EH HAHAA What is it? Your bitch pregnant?

    Jordan keeps punching

    Arin: Jordan! Chill!

    Constance: The bastard deserves it.... but I guess this is too soon

    Arin: Ya Think????? Jordan I know you're pissed but get it together!!!

    Jordan Wilkerson: HOPELESS IS DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keeps Punching

    Arin: What?

    Constance: The kid? Holy Fucking Shit, They die younger and younger these days, he had potential...

    Sparker: C'mon i'm not even bleeding yet, Your girl Elsa can hit harder C'mon, HIT ME, HIT ME!!!!!!!!!

    Jordan Wilkerson: AHHHHH Keeps Hitting

    Arin: Jordan! Think about what you're doing!!!

    Arin will let Jordan

  • Heeeeey.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Well reply or like this comment if you're still reading this, If there's less people than I thought i'll start writing less often and possib

  • Let Him

    I was the first to die XD

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 2: The Hunt Chapter 1 Jordan Wilkerson I got my ass kicked by that Jackass Sparker but me and Arin caught him, so we

  • And you were killed by your other character xD

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Let Him I was the first to die XD

  • Was that your idea of a joke!? >:P (I'm joking)

    Anyway, awesome part. Looking forward to the next part!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    And you were killed by your other character xD

  • Alternate Choices

    If you guys chose to contact Agent 123 for backup then the same thing would have happened except Hopeless would have gotten care faster and would have lived.

    If you guys chose to chase Sparker then the same scenario would happen except Sparker would be the one running and Jack would be the one to jump Jordan and get captured.

    If you guys chose to just go to HQ then the plane thing would have happened like it did but they would not have found Constance.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 2: The Hunt Chapter 1 Jordan Wilkerson I got my ass kicked by that Jackass Sparker but me and Arin caught him, so we

  • Get Jordan off of Sparker Sparker should live XD
    Awesome chapter!!!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 2: The Hunt Chapter 1 Jordan Wilkerson I got my ass kicked by that Jackass Sparker but me and Arin caught him, so we

  • .

    supersagig posted: »

    Name: Warren Roldan Age: 48 Appearance: white short curly hair , blue eyes , 3,2 feet tall , caucasian Personality: Crazy , Maniac , Sarcastic , Obsessed Evil Roles He is a scientist that make robots to socialite and defend himself

  • .

    supersagig posted: »

    Name: PeGaSuTy 89240 Age: 2 years from his creation Appearance: Robot one xd Personality: Intelligent , Calm , Doesn´t understand s

  • Thanks! And Expect more Team Allies to be introduced soon, and I got the other ones. :)

    supersagig posted: »

    Get Jordan off of Sparker Sparker should live XD Awesome chapter!!!

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    Let him, Sparker really deserves it

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    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dark Angels Part 2: The Hunt Chapter 1 Jordan Wilkerson I got my ass kicked by that Jackass Sparker but me and Arin caught him, so we

  • edited November 2014

    Dear Guys, I can't thank you enough for everything you have done for me, you're all like a 2nd family to me, sometimes we run into some bumps but no matter what happens I love you guys, Your Friend and Brother-In Arms, Hopeless

    Dark Angels Part 2: The Hunt Chapter 2

    Arin Osco

    Sparker is a real asshole, I can tell why Jordan was pissed so I let that bastard have it

    Sparker: HA HA!!!!!!!!!!! That's it! Pathetic...

    Jordan Wilkerson: Not even close Punches in the stomach then keeps hitting

    Arin: He deserves it.

    Constance: Yeah, but not this way and not now

    Arin: Debatable.

    Sparker: Oh, think you found my ticklish spot there Jordan! and Arin you think that I deserve any harm? You all had potential until you were corrupted by the lies of politicians and fighting wars you have no business in...

    Jordan Punches one more time

    Sparker: And you Jordan.... I'm gonna kill your friend Arin here and make you watch as his heart falls out of his chest and then by the time you see that you'll be dead right after and you'll be missing a foot..... For you Grandpa, After i'm done with them, i'll shove Jordans severed foot so far up your ass it will look like you grew a pair of tits...

    Constance: Keep dreaming Clown, There's no way that type of fucking Fubar will happen to us...

    Jordan Wilkerson: You killed Hopeless you fucking piece of Shit

    Sparker: You think I care what his name was? and you have a bad memory Jordanious, Jack shot your friend and taking all that PMS you have now and taking it out on me isn't gonna work. I'm just a dog chasing a bone, I'm just at the bottom of the chain, Think I plan all of this shit?

    Arin: Yeah

    Sparker: No, I just do things, I'm not a schemer like you guys are, I mean look at what happened back there, Vicente got away, And Jack killed your friend, sounds like that little plan of yours didn't go so well....

    Constance: Well I wasn't in that shit, so you can't pin that on me asshole.

    Sparker: So? You follow the same formula, you're the same type of guy, In the end you're all the same. But then again, what would I see from some guys who have a person on their team named Elsa?

    Arin: That's it.

    Jordan Wilkerson: Good Night Knocks out Sparker

    Lynne Bowen

    This is one of the reasons why I hate working with teams, I don't like seeing friends get hurt, No one likes seeing that but at least I'm not going to see more of this, After we learned Hopeless died, we read his letter to us and it made us feel even worse,Then we were picked up and brought back to the teams HQ

    Lynne Bowen: Long few days, right?

    Elsa Houten: Yeah....

    Javier: But the Past is in the Passsttttt

    Elsa Houten: Not the time....

    Javier: Sorry, I was just trying to lift the fucking mood.

    Elsa Houten: WE DON'T NEED FUCKING PUNS!

    Lynne Bowen: Don't be a cunt Elsa...

    Elsa Houten: Fuck you Lynne, I bet you don't even care about what happened...

    Jacob: Chill out guys....

    Javier: Yes, chill out ladies!

    Lynne Bowen: We don't want someone else to get hurt. So relax Elsa.

    Elsa Houten: Yeah I'm sorry, Let's just find Jordan and Arin.

    Jordan Wilkerson

    Well I knocked that Psycho out, we arrived at HQ and we sat him down in an Interrogation room then went behind the glass

    Agent 123: What happened?

    Jordan Wilkerson: The mission failed, 2 dealers got away, and one of our guys was killed.

    Agent 123: I don't give a shit. You completed the mission, and we have the bastard in custody.

    Jordan Wilkerson: Don't be a dick...

    Agent 123: You're calling me a dick when there's that one waiting for us in that room. People like your friend live, do shit, and die all the time, Don't act like you or him are or were more special then the rest of us. Besides what was the dealers name?

    Jordan Wilkerson: One was Jack a former member of our team and the other was Vicente Carmine.

    Agent 123: Vicente Carmine? You're sure?

    Jordan Wilkerson: Yeah we ran a facial recognition on him, Who is he exactly?

    Agent 123: Vicente Carmine is one of the biggest Arms dealers in the world, If he was working with Sparker, then we're fucked.

    Arin: Hey guys, want me to do the interrogation?

    Jordan Wilkerson: No, I should do it.

    Agent 123: No, Both of you are too close to this so I'm doing this.

    Arin: You sure?

    Agent 123: Yeah

    Agent 123 walks into interrogation

    Sparker: Heya Agent 123

    Jordan: How does Sparker know him?

    Arin: I don't know, something feels wrong

    Sparker: Last time I saw you, You were in an ally and your friend, 305 was lying on the ground with 5 bullets in his chest.

    Arin: What????

    Jordan: 123 never said that, he said 305 was labeled "Too Salty" for the job.

    Agent 123: I'm doing the talking now., what were you planning with Vicente Carmine?

    Sparker: Fireworks for the 4th of July

    Agent 123: Keep giving shitty answers like that and I might have to Saltlick you....

    Sparker: Wow I'm so afraid.... I hate how you Americans always have to use violence as a threat when you can't back it up.

    Agent 123: Just try me.

    Sparker: So you want to know what I was doing with Vicente, We were talking about how to rape your mom cause she is SMOKINNNN

    Arin: This is not gonna be good.

    Agent 123: Punches What were you doing with Vicente?

    Sparker: Okay, Okay, Fine, We are starting a talent agency and we want to get the Irish actor Liam Neeson to side with us

    Agent 123: Funny, Liam Neeson is American you asshole

    Sparker: That's a common American Myth.

    Agent 123: LIAM NEESON IS AMERICAN ASSHOLE!!!!!!!!! STOP LYING!!! Punches Sparker Again

    Sparker: EH OH HAHAHA!!!!! Me and Vicente were talking about the 4th of July Okay?!

    Agent 123: Fuck this shit.... Pulls out Gun WHERE IS HE!? WHERE IS VICENTE!?

    Sparker: Up your ass HAHAHA go ahead HIT ME, HIT ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Agent 123: WHAT WERE YOU TWO PLANNING, TALK OR DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Jordan goes into interrogation room

    Jordan: Drop it 123! We need him! Pulls out gun and points at Agent 123

    Agent 123: Not until I find out what I need to know, TALK OR DIE!

    Sparker: You're not gonna pull that trigger, The gun isn't even loaded you American Piece of shit HAHAHAHAHAHAH EHHEHEHEH HA HA!Agent 123 knocks Sparker out with the butt of his gun

    Arin walks in

    Arin: What the fuck was that?

    Agent 123: He's damn good and he was right, my gun wasn't loaded, and I figured you wouldn't shoot me Jordan.

    Jordan: Well then, What now?

    Agent 123: Well he won't break despite my techniques so he's just gonna get locked up for a long time, You and your team are gonna go on another mission but get some rest, Since you told me you're a man down take a good mercenary with you. But do you wanna go after Jack or Vicente?

    Jordan: I'll think about it and do you Have one in mind?

    Agent 123: Yeah, his name is Constance.

    Jordan: He's already with us... And you probably know that already

    Agent 123: Smiles Now you're catching on. Walks out

    Arin: What's that guy's fucking problem

    Jordan: No Idea.

    Lynne Bowen comes outside the door

    Lynne Bowen: Hey Jordan, Can I talk to you for a sec?

    Jordan: Sure

    Arin: Get Lucky dude

    Lynne Bowen:: Screw you Arin.

    Jordan walks out of room

    Jordan: What's on your mind?

    Lynne Bowen: A lot of things but I think you know that we're even so I'm leaving.

    Jordan: Yeah, I know, Take care

    Lynne Bowen: You too, I'm so sorry about Hopeless

    Jordan: I know. Lynne walks away

    Me and the team are going to either go after Vicente or Jack after we get some rest but which one?

    The team will target Jack

  • Jack

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dear Guys, I can't thank you enough for everything you have done for me, you're all like a 2nd family to me, sometimes we run into some bump

  • Awesome chapter!!!!!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Dear Guys, I can't thank you enough for everything you have done for me, you're all like a 2nd family to me, sometimes we run into some bump

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