LeeTheProfessional
We had finally made it inside the warehouse."Alright, that camera spotted us for sure. We need to move quickly!" CiD t… moreold us.
"Lead the way, CiD. But you're still our hostage." I told him.
"Yeah, hurry up, man!" Salt shouted.
I held CiD at gunpoint and made sure he took the lead. The others followed behind us.BANG! Out of nowhere we heard a gunshot."What the fuck?" Clayton said.
"Are there more people in here trying to save your group?!" I asked Azlyn.
"No! It's just me, I swear!" She replied.
"I don't know what's going on either. It's probably Tobi killing one of us." CiD told us.
"Alright, just keep going, we can't stop." Password said to us.
"Right, hurry, CiD!" Puncake told him. We went down and empty aisle, suddenly a few guards showed up."Shoot 'em!" Puncake shouted. Everyone shot at them and took them out before they could shoot back.
"Fuck. Azlyn, stay behind me and CiD. Don't run away … [view original content]
"Women first." Mark said.
Azlyn, Shiina, Valky, AC, Broken and Guetta got in the car.
wait where did I go at the end? AM I DEAD?
i just reread this and now i'm sad gustav pls ;_;
You didn't know what necrophilia is? Or are you just a sick person who googles necrophilia? xD
Well every day is a school day! I hope that Tobi will let your body ribs in peas, especially if you're alive x)
..I got out from hiding and crouched my way over to the vehicle he was hiding in."Where the fuck are you, you bastard?!" I heard the guard s… moreay. I slowly and quietly made my way around."Come out from hiding!" He shouted. I got closer and peeked out, I noticed that he was looking towards the woods."You won't get me!" The guard shouted."Just come on out so I can kill you!" He said.
I got right behind him and had my knife ready."Psst! Over here!" I said to the guard.
"What?!" He turned around and I quickly jabbed the knife into his forehead with all my strength.
He had his mouth open and stopped moving. I took the knife out and cleaned it."Guess these noodle arms of mine aren't so bad after all, hehe." I said to myself.
"C'mon, hurry up! Tobi needs help! Fuckers already killed a few of the guards!" I heard a man shouting behind me.
"Shit!" I said and quickly hid behind the side of the van. I watched as a few of them ran right past … [view original content]
Now I have to ask the question should I try to catch up on this story or is it too far ahead that I would be committing confuzzled suicide. When I saw all the pages I was like ...but if I choose read I could be like .
You can try to catch up, I have them all on google docs,but yeah it's A LOT of parts, lol. If you start reading from the latest chapter you won't know whats going on and you won't know any of the characters.
LeeTheProfessional
We had finally made it inside the warehouse."Alright, that camera spotted us for sure. We need to move quickly!" CiD t… moreold us.
"Lead the way, CiD. But you're still our hostage." I told him.
"Yeah, hurry up, man!" Salt shouted.
I held CiD at gunpoint and made sure he took the lead. The others followed behind us.BANG! Out of nowhere we heard a gunshot."What the fuck?" Clayton said.
"Are there more people in here trying to save your group?!" I asked Azlyn.
"No! It's just me, I swear!" She replied.
"I don't know what's going on either. It's probably Tobi killing one of us." CiD told us.
"Alright, just keep going, we can't stop." Password said to us.
"Right, hurry, CiD!" Puncake told him. We went down and empty aisle, suddenly a few guards showed up."Shoot 'em!" Puncake shouted. Everyone shot at them and took them out before they could shoot back.
"Fuck. Azlyn, stay behind me and CiD. Don't run away … [view original content]
You can try to catch up, I have them all on google docs,but yeah it's A LOT of parts, lol. If you start reading from the latest chapter you won't know whats going on and you won't know any of the characters.
PostApocalypticPaul
(!) No. You need to get out of here, and go check on Rafoli.
"No. You need to get out of here, and go check on Raf… moreoli." Tali told me."It's too risky for you to stay here."
"Fine. You have a point. Tomorrow we'll think of something." I told him, and then went out the door. I quickly got out of the offices before anyone could spot me. I closed the door behind me and made it into the working area. Nobody was around, it was almost past curfew. With Tali watching the cameras, I didn't have to worry about getting caught. I ran over to the medical station and I saw Rafoli sleeping in bed."Hey, Rafoli! Wake up." I whispered.
Rafoli looked up at me."PAP? I'm awake, I can't sleep."
I closed the door behind me."Good. Just checking up on you. Look what I have." I showed him the walkie-talkie.
"Holy shit! Nice, man. That will be very useful." He said while getting off of the bed."I found a scalpel. I was going to keep… [view original content]
Now I have to ask the question should I try to catch up on this story or is it too far ahead that I would be committing confuzzled suicide. When I saw all the pages I was like ...but if I choose read I could be like .
LeeTheProfessional
We had finally made it inside the warehouse."Alright, that camera spotted us for sure. We need to move quickly!" CiD t… moreold us.
"Lead the way, CiD. But you're still our hostage." I told him.
"Yeah, hurry up, man!" Salt shouted.
I held CiD at gunpoint and made sure he took the lead. The others followed behind us.BANG! Out of nowhere we heard a gunshot."What the fuck?" Clayton said.
"Are there more people in here trying to save your group?!" I asked Azlyn.
"No! It's just me, I swear!" She replied.
"I don't know what's going on either. It's probably Tobi killing one of us." CiD told us.
"Alright, just keep going, we can't stop." Password said to us.
"Right, hurry, CiD!" Puncake told him. We went down and empty aisle, suddenly a few guards showed up."Shoot 'em!" Puncake shouted. Everyone shot at them and took them out before they could shoot back.
"Fuck. Azlyn, stay behind me and CiD. Don't run away … [view original content]
LeeTheProfessional
We had finally made it inside the warehouse."Alright, that camera spotted us for sure. We need to move quickly!" CiD t… moreold us.
"Lead the way, CiD. But you're still our hostage." I told him.
"Yeah, hurry up, man!" Salt shouted.
I held CiD at gunpoint and made sure he took the lead. The others followed behind us.BANG! Out of nowhere we heard a gunshot."What the fuck?" Clayton said.
"Are there more people in here trying to save your group?!" I asked Azlyn.
"No! It's just me, I swear!" She replied.
"I don't know what's going on either. It's probably Tobi killing one of us." CiD told us.
"Alright, just keep going, we can't stop." Password said to us.
"Right, hurry, CiD!" Puncake told him. We went down and empty aisle, suddenly a few guards showed up."Shoot 'em!" Puncake shouted. Everyone shot at them and took them out before they could shoot back.
"Fuck. Azlyn, stay behind me and CiD. Don't run away … [view original content]
I assume, my character is on foot now?
Every time my character appears, I get one line, thats cool though, I could be Tdog Jr. He lasted 3 seasons and that is good enough with me! 8)
..I got out from hiding and crouched my way over to the vehicle he was hiding in."Where the fuck are you, you bastard?!" I heard the guard s… moreay. I slowly and quietly made my way around."Come out from hiding!" He shouted. I got closer and peeked out, I noticed that he was looking towards the woods."You won't get me!" The guard shouted."Just come on out so I can kill you!" He said.
I got right behind him and had my knife ready."Psst! Over here!" I said to the guard.
"What?!" He turned around and I quickly jabbed the knife into his forehead with all my strength.
He had his mouth open and stopped moving. I took the knife out and cleaned it."Guess these noodle arms of mine aren't so bad after all, hehe." I said to myself.
"C'mon, hurry up! Tobi needs help! Fuckers already killed a few of the guards!" I heard a man shouting behind me.
"Shit!" I said and quickly hid behind the side of the van. I watched as a few of them ran right past … [view original content]
Yeah, with like over 40 characters in the story, I try to give everyone some lines but when more people join I have to give some new people lines as well.
Damn that was intense.
I assume, my character is on foot now?
Every time my character appears, I get one line, thats cool though, I could be Tdog Jr. He lasted 3 seasons and that is good enough with me! 8)
Yeah, I understand that. I was joking anyways. I dont mind not showing up all the time, I rather have a nice flowing story than to be in the story at all times.
Yeah, with like over 40 characters in the story, I try to give everyone some lines but when more people join I have to give some new people lines as well.
LeeTheProfessional
We had finally made it inside the warehouse."Alright, that camera spotted us for sure. We need to move quickly!" CiD t… moreold us.
"Lead the way, CiD. But you're still our hostage." I told him.
"Yeah, hurry up, man!" Salt shouted.
I held CiD at gunpoint and made sure he took the lead. The others followed behind us.BANG! Out of nowhere we heard a gunshot."What the fuck?" Clayton said.
"Are there more people in here trying to save your group?!" I asked Azlyn.
"No! It's just me, I swear!" She replied.
"I don't know what's going on either. It's probably Tobi killing one of us." CiD told us.
"Alright, just keep going, we can't stop." Password said to us.
"Right, hurry, CiD!" Puncake told him. We went down and empty aisle, suddenly a few guards showed up."Shoot 'em!" Puncake shouted. Everyone shot at them and took them out before they could shoot back.
"Fuck. Azlyn, stay behind me and CiD. Don't run away … [view original content]
LeeTheProfessional
We had finally made it inside the warehouse."Alright, that camera spotted us for sure. We need to move quickly!" CiD t… moreold us.
"Lead the way, CiD. But you're still our hostage." I told him.
"Yeah, hurry up, man!" Salt shouted.
I held CiD at gunpoint and made sure he took the lead. The others followed behind us.BANG! Out of nowhere we heard a gunshot."What the fuck?" Clayton said.
"Are there more people in here trying to save your group?!" I asked Azlyn.
"No! It's just me, I swear!" She replied.
"I don't know what's going on either. It's probably Tobi killing one of us." CiD told us.
"Alright, just keep going, we can't stop." Password said to us.
"Right, hurry, CiD!" Puncake told him. We went down and empty aisle, suddenly a few guards showed up."Shoot 'em!" Puncake shouted. Everyone shot at them and took them out before they could shoot back.
"Fuck. Azlyn, stay behind me and CiD. Don't run away … [view original content]
Before I start about how awesome my lines were first a rant to protect my characters reputation XD because stuff and thangs and I'm bored
"Great... It's this fucking asshole." Gamer said.
"At least he doesn't smell like shit anymore." King said.
"Yeah, man. Sit the fuck down. We don't want to hear any of your bullshit."
Making eye contact with my character gets you killed and they have the cheek to even speak my name how they survived is a miracle they are in a room with a supposed psycho then they try to wind him up and criticize him when they know well he uses violence and murder in boredom or simply to entertain himself imagine him upset the level of stupidity I cannot comprehend. Admirable but mistaken I recommend they don't sleep or even blink as be there LAST.
"Calm down, Sheep. I know he's not our friend, but maybe he can help us." I told him.
facepalm MANIPULATE ME?Like I am your little biatch like you are Tobi's for no reward pure arrogance :O
"You're a psycho yourself, Mark. You as a leader? Don't make me laugh
You think mark survived that long being just a psycho villain alone? and obviously next big question is do you think morals will save you or sanity favor you in ZA?
Survival is the most important thing to ensure it you have to do sick things and twist your mentality to survive such disturbing daily occurrences do you really think being a good normal guy makes you immune to walkers or killers then R.I.P .* You See I'm Not A Monster I'm Just Ahead Of The Curve*
"Forcing people to follow your every command is already proof enough that you would be a bad leader
Look at cornpopper my ambition is not to control or submission simply survival and strength in numbers it will be a team I'm not a dictator don't brush every villain with the same brush
All I'm Tobi stuff
Even if I was Tobi a person you FEAR I'm confused to why you think it would good idea to piss Mark off
For a guy like Tobi who you see as wrong he sure made you all his little biatch while maintaining food and shelter while you are a prison helpless and moaning don't question his methods but his results your almighty leader Shiina is sure doing a great job. I don't want to lead sheep but soldiers you have not proven yourself capable yet to deserve my services.
Who's kills Tobi
I'm sick of reading comments about people saying they will kill Tobi while they keep choosing the safe decisions in every story in my opinion if the decision came to even punching Tobi they would chose not to in case they hurt their hand. I'm the only one who can or will I refuse submission and will do anything necessary to kill him even if it kills Mark while the other characters wont' even raise their voice and went to bed early in fear of Tobi they don't have the grit when push come to shove they don't have the bottle to do it like my character.
What the difference between Tobi and me?
Tobi never had it hard like Mark with endless servants bowing at his feet as soon as any threat occurred he lost his mind his only threat is raising his voice and beating up women. Mark survived in the wilderness he can relate to the people his only friend the dark yet still survived all threats his unpredictable and a innovator of chaos making him unstoppable he can adapt to any situation or change and is calm under pressure Tobi can only survive sheltered. Mark never hit women or children and can lead and will be brave enough to make the hard decisions and he fights for what he believe in no matter the circumstance I'm no Tobi m8. This story deserves a higher class of villain
"Shut up, man! You've caused nothing but trouble! Next time, I'll make sure I kill you." Twistee told him.
I save your life on endless occasions and you still disrespect me your my bro so your death will be quick and painless my character doesn't play games
My reaction while they spoke to me like that I couldn't believe it MindFK ^**
I needed that rant dayum in terms of chapter loved it few things I loved
It's this fucking asshole
lmao The first day I got back from my ban I said oh no not this asshole back again that's my NO.1 self description of my character well played XD
"Hahaha! I love it!
Not sure if it's an easter egg because I say that a lot but was awesome XD I love it
The not harming women and children, I respected Tobi's work, Twistee bro and the Joker quote at the end just awesome just genius writing you remember all my random bullsh** :DDDD
Overall
The good guy users are doing nothing that could potential kill them/risky or is scary in terms of picking decisions but then they think they will be the hero or badass in the end of the story this is not a disney film this is TWD either die a hero or live long enough to become a coward and Tobi's biatch your choice you can't be the hero you want but can be the hero TWD deserves. ;D
Done dayum
1) We should wait for the others, and then we can decide.
Tobi-Is-A-Good-Boy
I Started revving up the chainsaw."What the fuck, Tobi?! A chainsaw? What the hell?!" Broken shouted.
"Tobi, stop t… morehis! Enough!" Shadow yelled at me.
Guilty was laying down on the floor, holding his thigh."You've lost it... no matter what we tell you... you won't listen."
The others stayed quiet I was grinning at them. Pur moved back."Valky, since Guilty had his turn. You'll be next. Just giving you a heads up here... I may get out of hand, haha." I said to them.
"Fuck you, Tobi! Finish me off instead, you fucking coward!" Guilty shouted.
"No! I'll take her place!" Sardines told me.
"Shut up! I made up my mind. Valky is next. Pur, do your fucking job." I said to him.
Pur aimed his gun at them."Stay back! Let Valky through!"
"Shit..." I heard Shadow.
"I'm sorry..." Broken told her.
"No, Tobi, please!" Valky shouted.
"Get over here, now." I said with a serious face.
"Oh no..." AC said wh… [view original content]
Comments
ribs in peas sardines und gustav is kill ;_;
This here are my thought before I join Sardines and the crew.
'That guy, Tobi, he's kept my alive for a long time now... Or.... Pretty girls, damn pretty girls... FUCK IT, PRETTY GIRLS!'
Lol, so many people! If you see any more errors let me know.
I got one, Gustav was like... Shot.
Yes, that will play a role later on...
Like... My death?
Well if it isn't my death..
GUSTAVDINES CONFIRMED
I found one and I had a laugh over it.
NECROPHILIA CONFIRMED
sry Gustav ;_;
Ew... Ewwww... EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why did I google necrophilia... and I'm probably going to die, yes.
You didn't know what necrophilia is? Or are you just a sick person who googles necrophilia? xD
Well every day is a school day! I hope that Tobi will let your body ribs in peas, especially if you're alive x)
I didn't know what it was... I'M NOT THAT SICK.
hehehehe.... noodle arms ^-^
Damn, I'm badass. I slit his throat anyway. >:3
Lol, them noodles! Of course you are, we've been training, mwuahahahaha! >B]
Now I have to ask the question should I try to catch up on this story or is it too far ahead that I would be committing confuzzled suicide. When I saw all the pages I was like
...but if I choose read I could be like 
.
You can try to catch up, I have them all on google docs,but yeah it's A LOT of parts, lol. If you start reading from the latest chapter you won't know whats going on and you won't know any of the characters.
God damn....... I'm still alive, so that's good.
But Gustav </3 ;-;
lol wtf is your profile pic now, do you want to be a cat? XD
Alrighty then...a marathon of reading tomorrow...I got this!
Lol, thanks. I added a kitty mouth this time.
YES I WANT TO BE A CAT
I learned from the best!
Fuck yeah, my part:
If only PAP stayed in the security room, though. He would have kept Tali from telling Tobi about the group and he wouldn't have gotten injured.
It' worth the read! Pro has all the parts on google docs, link is
docs.google.com/document/d/10IS2QBpLFn-MwGZT1rVqAYAcqmEcJG1X5pvNzWI477E/edit?pli=1
THAT WAS WHAT I VOTED FOR! You shitbirds, you made PAP get shot!
I'll bet. So many pages it better be worth it! Lol
RIP people. :c
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1vHRMeRszw4&feature=kp
(Lilly voice) HE'S NOT DEAD! DAMN IT, HE'S NOT DEAD!
Damn that was intense.
I assume, my character is on foot now?
Every time my character appears, I get one line, thats cool though, I could be Tdog Jr. He lasted 3 seasons and that is good enough with me! 8)
Yeah, with like over 40 characters in the story, I try to give everyone some lines but when more people join I have to give some new people lines as well.
Yeah, I understand that. I was joking anyways. I dont mind not showing up all the time, I rather have a nice flowing story than to be in the story at all times.
Well, the great Pokemon master Gary Oak survived. Hopefully i will get to kick some ass!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RxkHuecEpgw R.I.P Clayton "Chuck 2" he will be missed
i had a laugh too xD
But then Tobi wouldn't have stopped torturing people...
I SURVIIIIIVEEEED! YESH!
Oh yes, yes I am.
Before I start about how awesome my lines were first a rant to protect my characters reputation XD because stuff and thangs and I'm bored
Making eye contact with my character gets you killed and they have the cheek to even speak my name how they survived is a miracle they are in a room with a supposed psycho then they try to wind him up and criticize him when they know well he uses violence and murder in boredom or simply to entertain himself imagine him upset the level of stupidity I cannot comprehend. Admirable but mistaken I recommend they don't sleep or even blink as be there LAST.
facepalm MANIPULATE ME?Like I am your little biatch like you are Tobi's for no reward pure arrogance :O
You think mark survived that long being just a psycho villain alone? and obviously next big question is do you think morals will save you or sanity favor you in ZA?
Survival is the most important thing to ensure it you have to do sick things and twist your mentality to survive such disturbing daily occurrences do you really think being a good normal guy makes you immune to walkers or killers then R.I.P .* You See I'm Not A Monster I'm Just Ahead Of The Curve*
Look at cornpopper my ambition is not to control or submission simply survival and strength in numbers it will be a team I'm not a dictator don't brush every villain with the same brush
Even if I was Tobi a person you FEAR I'm confused to why you think it would good idea to piss Mark off
For a guy like Tobi who you see as wrong he sure made you all his little biatch while maintaining food and shelter while you are a prison helpless and moaning don't question his methods but his results your almighty leader Shiina is sure doing a great job. I don't want to lead sheep but soldiers you have not proven yourself capable yet to deserve my services.
I'm sick of reading comments about people saying they will kill Tobi while they keep choosing the safe decisions in every story in my opinion if the decision came to even punching Tobi they would chose not to in case they hurt their hand. I'm the only one who can or will I refuse submission and will do anything necessary to kill him even if it kills Mark while the other characters wont' even raise their voice and went to bed early in fear of Tobi they don't have the grit when push come to shove they don't have the bottle to do it like my character.
What the difference between Tobi and me?
Tobi never had it hard like Mark with endless servants bowing at his feet as soon as any threat occurred he lost his mind his only threat is raising his voice and beating up women. Mark survived in the wilderness he can relate to the people his only friend the dark yet still survived all threats his unpredictable and a innovator of chaos making him unstoppable he can adapt to any situation or change and is calm under pressure Tobi can only survive sheltered. Mark never hit women or children and can lead and will be brave enough to make the hard decisions and he fights for what he believe in no matter the circumstance I'm no Tobi m8. This story deserves a higher class of villain
I save your life on endless occasions and you still disrespect me your my bro so your death will be quick and painless my character doesn't play games
My reaction while they spoke to me like that I couldn't believe it MindFK ^**
I needed that rant dayum in terms of chapter loved it few things I loved
lmao The first day I got back from my ban I said oh no not this asshole back again that's my NO.1 self description of my character well played XD
Not sure if it's an easter egg because I say that a lot but was awesome XD I love it
The not harming women and children, I respected Tobi's work, Twistee bro and the Joker quote at the end just awesome just genius writing you remember all my random bullsh** :DDDD
Overall
The good guy users are doing nothing that could potential kill them/risky or is scary in terms of picking decisions but then they think they will be the hero or badass in the end of the story this is not a disney film this is TWD either die a hero or live long enough to become a coward and Tobi's biatch your choice you can't be the hero you want but can be the hero TWD deserves. ;D
Done dayum
1) We should wait for the others, and then we can decide.
You're lucky... You're lucky... Luckier than me... That's for sure...
How my character feels: