Since I'm afraid you're going to kill out Tim I've decided to submit another character
Name: Stranger
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Appea… morerance: Wears a black hoodie that overshadows half of his face, tattered jeans, black boots, 7 ft
Personality: Always pissed off for some reason
The reason for being there: Unknown but is seen lurking in the shadows
name: Sydney Harris
age:24
appearance: long brown hair. blue eyes.
personality: kind and friendly, very open to others, bubbly and happy.
came here to check on her boyfriend, Felix Davis...
Drake and Jacob are looking for Felix from the third floor
Jacob: I'm so fucking pissed off right now! We almost got the killer's assistant!
Drake: Yeah, we did. I have to admit, I'm a little scared because I'm walking with you. I mean, you were in the room.
Jacob: What? Are you blaming me? He looks at Drake with an angry face
Drake: I'm not blaming you, but I can't be too sure when walking around with the people that were in that room...
Jacob: You were in that room also...
Drake: But I'm not the assistant.
Jacob: Well me neither! Let's just stop talking about this, okay?
Jacob: I wonder where the cops are? They should've been here ages ago.
Drake: Let's keep our hopes up. They might have some trouble tracking this place down or something.
Jacob: I sure hope so...
Drake: What are we even looking for?
Jacob: I... I don't know. We just need to find some other way into that place or something.
Jacob: Where the fuck did Tim disappear? I've been filming this whole shit, but I haven't seen a clue of him afer he went looking for Felix from the library.
Drake: Tim? Do you know what his last name was?
Jacob: Frost. His name was Tim Frost.
Drake: Holy shit. How... How is he here?
Jacob: What do you mean?
Drake: Don't you know who he is? He brutally murdered a boy 12 years ago. Poor boy he killed was found in a forest with his guts out and his fucking brains splattered to a tree! He was sent to insane asylum for his entire life. How the hell is he here?
Jacob: I have a bad feeling about this....
Felix Hector and Amy
Felix and Amy are looking for another way in from the second floor
Amy: I'm sorry Felix... I didn't know what he was up to..
Felix Hector: There's no need to apogilize. You did what you had to. It was a messed up situation.
Amy: But without me we would know who the assistant would be.
Felix Hector: Come on now Amy, don't blame yourself. It wasn't your fault.
Amy: sigh
They're walking trough the hallway
Amy: Oh my god Felix look! Amy is staring at a wall
Felix Hector: sigh what n.... What the fuck!?
There's a message in the wall which is written in human blood
Felix Hector: ”Live as if you were to die tomorrow” What does that mean?
Amy: F...Fel....Felix! Look! She points at the floor
Felix Hector: Felix turns his head down and looks at the floor ….... And I thought it couldn't get any more worse...
In the ground there a two bodies. The other one is a cop's body. The other one is Leroy, the chef
Amy: How did Leroy end up dead? Looks like the cop you guys called here didn't make it...
Felix Hector: How the fuck am I supposed to know?
Amy: Why are everybody being so mean!? I try to be nice to everyone, but all I get back is shit from you! I know, that it's probably hard to keep calm right now, but can't you even talk nicely to someone?
Felix Hector: Look Amy.... I'm sorry. It's just a hard situation right now and we need to concentrate on the task, finding that cop and try to get out of here.
Amy: I'm just so tired of listening you guys being so angry to me while I'm nice...
Felix looks outside. It's probably midnight already, so it's really dark. All he could see is the lights from the cops car
Felix Hector: Amy. Amy I have an idea.
Amy: What is it?
Felix Hector: Do you see those lights over there? They're coming from the cop's car. We need to go in there. That car has a real police radio. We could send a serious amount of cops here to help us.
Amy: I don't know Felix... Maybe we should go get the others here?
Felix Hector: Amy, I'm sorry to tell you this, but we don't have time. Look at those people behind you. Do you want to end up like that? Because that's going to happen if we don't act fast.
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 1-2
Drake and Jacob
Drake and Jacob are looking for Felix from the third floor
Jacob: I'm so fuck… moreing pissed off right now! We almost got the killer's assistant!
Drake: Yeah, we did. I have to admit, I'm a little scared because I'm walking with you. I mean, you were in the room.
Jacob: What? Are you blaming me? He looks at Drake with an angry face
Drake: I'm not blaming you, but I can't be too sure when walking around with the people that were in that room...
Jacob: You were in that room also...
Drake: But I'm not the assistant.
Jacob: Well me neither! Let's just stop talking about this, okay?
Jacob: I wonder where the cops are? They should've been here ages ago.
Drake: Let's keep our hopes up. They might have some trouble tracking this place down or something.
Jacob: I sure hope so...
Drake: What are we even looking for?
Jacob: I... I don't know. We just need to find … [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 1-2
Drake and Jacob
Drake and Jacob are looking for Felix from the third floor
Jacob: I'm so fuck… moreing pissed off right now! We almost got the killer's assistant!
Drake: Yeah, we did. I have to admit, I'm a little scared because I'm walking with you. I mean, you were in the room.
Jacob: What? Are you blaming me? He looks at Drake with an angry face
Drake: I'm not blaming you, but I can't be too sure when walking around with the people that were in that room...
Jacob: You were in that room also...
Drake: But I'm not the assistant.
Jacob: Well me neither! Let's just stop talking about this, okay?
Jacob: I wonder where the cops are? They should've been here ages ago.
Drake: Let's keep our hopes up. They might have some trouble tracking this place down or something.
Jacob: I sure hope so...
Drake: What are we even looking for?
Jacob: I... I don't know. We just need to find … [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 1-2
Drake and Jacob
Drake and Jacob are looking for Felix from the third floor
Jacob: I'm so fuck… moreing pissed off right now! We almost got the killer's assistant!
Drake: Yeah, we did. I have to admit, I'm a little scared because I'm walking with you. I mean, you were in the room.
Jacob: What? Are you blaming me? He looks at Drake with an angry face
Drake: I'm not blaming you, but I can't be too sure when walking around with the people that were in that room...
Jacob: You were in that room also...
Drake: But I'm not the assistant.
Jacob: Well me neither! Let's just stop talking about this, okay?
Jacob: I wonder where the cops are? They should've been here ages ago.
Drake: Let's keep our hopes up. They might have some trouble tracking this place down or something.
Jacob: I sure hope so...
Drake: What are we even looking for?
Jacob: I... I don't know. We just need to find … [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 1-2
Drake and Jacob
Drake and Jacob are looking for Felix from the third floor
Jacob: I'm so fuck… moreing pissed off right now! We almost got the killer's assistant!
Drake: Yeah, we did. I have to admit, I'm a little scared because I'm walking with you. I mean, you were in the room.
Jacob: What? Are you blaming me? He looks at Drake with an angry face
Drake: I'm not blaming you, but I can't be too sure when walking around with the people that were in that room...
Jacob: You were in that room also...
Drake: But I'm not the assistant.
Jacob: Well me neither! Let's just stop talking about this, okay?
Jacob: I wonder where the cops are? They should've been here ages ago.
Drake: Let's keep our hopes up. They might have some trouble tracking this place down or something.
Jacob: I sure hope so...
Drake: What are we even looking for?
Jacob: I... I don't know. We just need to find … [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 1-2
Drake and Jacob
Drake and Jacob are looking for Felix from the third floor
Jacob: I'm so fuck… moreing pissed off right now! We almost got the killer's assistant!
Drake: Yeah, we did. I have to admit, I'm a little scared because I'm walking with you. I mean, you were in the room.
Jacob: What? Are you blaming me? He looks at Drake with an angry face
Drake: I'm not blaming you, but I can't be too sure when walking around with the people that were in that room...
Jacob: You were in that room also...
Drake: But I'm not the assistant.
Jacob: Well me neither! Let's just stop talking about this, okay?
Jacob: I wonder where the cops are? They should've been here ages ago.
Drake: Let's keep our hopes up. They might have some trouble tracking this place down or something.
Jacob: I sure hope so...
Drake: What are we even looking for?
Jacob: I... I don't know. We just need to find … [view original content]
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Episode 3 - Mind Games, Chapter 1-3
Jacob and Drake
Jacob: I have a bad feeling about this....
Drake: There are still people in t… morehis mansion who don't know about these murders. We need to warn them about this.
Jacob: How do you know?
Drake: Well, I was supposed to be a DJ in a party here. I had a list of names who attented in to the party.
Jacob: So where is it? The list I mean.
Drake: I don't know, I lost it.
Jacob: Fuck. It might have had some important information.
Drake: Yeah maybe...
Jacob: Maybe we should go look for it?
Drake: I don't kn.. WHOAH!
Jacob: What?
Drake: I saw movement in that room...
Jacob: We better check that out...
Jacob films every step he takes towards the room
Jacob: On three.
Jacob: One
Jacob: Two
Jacob: Thr...
A figure kicks the door open and runs downstairs
Drake: Come on, he's getting aw....
BOOM
They hear a big explosion from the parking lots… [view original content]
Episode 3 - Mind Games, Chapter 1-3
Jacob and Drake
Jacob: I have a bad feeling about this....
Drake: There are still people in t… morehis mansion who don't know about these murders. We need to warn them about this.
Jacob: How do you know?
Drake: Well, I was supposed to be a DJ in a party here. I had a list of names who attented in to the party.
Jacob: So where is it? The list I mean.
Drake: I don't know, I lost it.
Jacob: Fuck. It might have had some important information.
Drake: Yeah maybe...
Jacob: Maybe we should go look for it?
Drake: I don't kn.. WHOAH!
Jacob: What?
Drake: I saw movement in that room...
Jacob: We better check that out...
Jacob films every step he takes towards the room
Jacob: On three.
Jacob: One
Jacob: Two
Jacob: Thr...
A figure kicks the door open and runs downstairs
Drake: Come on, he's getting aw....
BOOM
They hear a big explosion from the parking lots… [view original content]
Episode 3 - Mind Games, Chapter 1-3
Jacob and Drake
Jacob: I have a bad feeling about this....
Drake: There are still people in t… morehis mansion who don't know about these murders. We need to warn them about this.
Jacob: How do you know?
Drake: Well, I was supposed to be a DJ in a party here. I had a list of names who attented in to the party.
Jacob: So where is it? The list I mean.
Drake: I don't know, I lost it.
Jacob: Fuck. It might have had some important information.
Drake: Yeah maybe...
Jacob: Maybe we should go look for it?
Drake: I don't kn.. WHOAH!
Jacob: What?
Drake: I saw movement in that room...
Jacob: We better check that out...
Jacob films every step he takes towards the room
Jacob: On three.
Jacob: One
Jacob: Two
Jacob: Thr...
A figure kicks the door open and runs downstairs
Drake: Come on, he's getting aw....
BOOM
They hear a big explosion from the parking lots… [view original content]
Episode 3 - Mind Games, Chapter 1-3
Jacob and Drake
Jacob: I have a bad feeling about this....
Drake: There are still people in t… morehis mansion who don't know about these murders. We need to warn them about this.
Jacob: How do you know?
Drake: Well, I was supposed to be a DJ in a party here. I had a list of names who attented in to the party.
Jacob: So where is it? The list I mean.
Drake: I don't know, I lost it.
Jacob: Fuck. It might have had some important information.
Drake: Yeah maybe...
Jacob: Maybe we should go look for it?
Drake: I don't kn.. WHOAH!
Jacob: What?
Drake: I saw movement in that room...
Jacob: We better check that out...
Jacob films every step he takes towards the room
Jacob: On three.
Jacob: One
Jacob: Two
Jacob: Thr...
A figure kicks the door open and runs downstairs
Drake: Come on, he's getting aw....
BOOM
They hear a big explosion from the parking lots… [view original content]
Episode 3 - Mind Games, Chapter 1-3
Jacob and Drake
Jacob: I have a bad feeling about this....
Drake: There are still people in t… morehis mansion who don't know about these murders. We need to warn them about this.
Jacob: How do you know?
Drake: Well, I was supposed to be a DJ in a party here. I had a list of names who attented in to the party.
Jacob: So where is it? The list I mean.
Drake: I don't know, I lost it.
Jacob: Fuck. It might have had some important information.
Drake: Yeah maybe...
Jacob: Maybe we should go look for it?
Drake: I don't kn.. WHOAH!
Jacob: What?
Drake: I saw movement in that room...
Jacob: We better check that out...
Jacob films every step he takes towards the room
Jacob: On three.
Jacob: One
Jacob: Two
Jacob: Thr...
A figure kicks the door open and runs downstairs
Drake: Come on, he's getting aw....
BOOM
They hear a big explosion from the parking lots… [view original content]
Meryl: Come on kids, we need to check out what happened!
They start running upstairs
Liam falls while running up the stairs
Liam: Ouch, my knee!
Bridgette: Oh come on, don't be such a crybaby!
Meryl: Shut up! How much does it hurt?
Liam: I think I can walk...
Tim: Something's not right...
Bridgette: Yeah no shit, somebody just shot a gun!
Tim: No, I feel like we're being watched...
Everybody looks around them
Bridgette: Stop scaring me and my little brother! There's nobody here!
Meryl: Silence! I think I heard some foot steps from the roof...
They're quiet. They could actually hear some foot steps from the roof
Liam: Let's keep moving, I'm really scared...
Meryl: Yeah, let's go guys...
They head towards the room where the gun shot came from
Bridgette: Why can't we just leave this place?
Tim: We're trapped in here
Liam: Does that mean we're not going to get out of here? His face turns sad
Bridgette: Yeah it does and it also means that we're going to get killed She teases Liam
Meryl: No Liam, we're going to get out of here. Don't worry.
Liam: We need to find our mom.
Bridgette: She's probably fucking the chef in the backr....
Liam: Don't talk about her like that!
Bridgette: Come on Liam you saw the look in her eyes when she saw that chef...
Tim: Who? Leroy?
Bridgette: Yeah I guess. Didn't catch up his name.
They're now in front of the room
Meryl: Wait here, I'll go first.
There's nobody in the room. Sleeve's body isn't there anymore
Meryl: Okay kids, it's safe to come in. There's only blood on the wall...
The kids walk into the room. Tim is just stepping in, when he sees a shadow just behind him
[Hit the figure behind you]
[Run into the room and lock the door]
[Turn around and see who it is]
Felix Davis
GASP
Felix's eyes open. He's really sweaty. He isn't surrounded in blood anymore. He looks around and for some reason, he is in the elevator. He looks at his leg. It's cleaned and bandaged.
What the hell...?
How the hell is my leg fixed? And how did I end up here?
BLINK
The elevator's door opens
I guess it's time for a new test....
Felix gets up. His leg is feeling better already. Seems like this son of a bitch actually wants to keep him alive for some reason. Maybe this is just a test from the police department to test if he's still capable to do his job?
He steps into the room. There's nothing else than multiple buttons with names on them and a voice recorder there.
Felix grabs the voice recorder and pushes play
???: Oh Felix! It's good to see you managed to make it here! This level isn't about torturing you, it's about choices. One of my assistants is in there right now running with a knife, trying to kill someone. It's up to you to decide who it is. You see, there are buttons in the wall with name's of some people I randomly picked. The moment you push some button, you can say good bye to the person you chose. Good luck.
Oh shit..... I don't really have a choice to back up now...
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-1
Tim, Meryl, Liam and Bridgette
Meryl: Come on kids, we need to check out what happened!
They … morestart running upstairs
Liam falls while running up the stairs
Liam: Ouch, my knee!
Bridgette: Oh come on, don't be such a crybaby!
Meryl: Shut up! How much does it hurt?
Liam: I think I can walk...
Tim: Something's not right...
Bridgette: Yeah no shit, somebody just shot a gun!
Tim: No, I feel like we're being watched...
Everybody looks around them
Bridgette: Stop scaring me and my little brother! There's nobody here!
Meryl: Silence! I think I heard some foot steps from the roof...
They're quiet. They could actually hear some foot steps from the roof
Liam: Let's keep moving, I'm really scared...
Meryl: Yeah, let's go guys...
They head towards the room where the gun shot came from
Bridgette: Why can't we just leave this place?
Tim: We're trapped in here
… [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-1
Tim, Meryl, Liam and Bridgette
Meryl: Come on kids, we need to check out what happened!
They … morestart running upstairs
Liam falls while running up the stairs
Liam: Ouch, my knee!
Bridgette: Oh come on, don't be such a crybaby!
Meryl: Shut up! How much does it hurt?
Liam: I think I can walk...
Tim: Something's not right...
Bridgette: Yeah no shit, somebody just shot a gun!
Tim: No, I feel like we're being watched...
Everybody looks around them
Bridgette: Stop scaring me and my little brother! There's nobody here!
Meryl: Silence! I think I heard some foot steps from the roof...
They're quiet. They could actually hear some foot steps from the roof
Liam: Let's keep moving, I'm really scared...
Meryl: Yeah, let's go guys...
They head towards the room where the gun shot came from
Bridgette: Why can't we just leave this place?
Tim: We're trapped in here
… [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-1
Tim, Meryl, Liam and Bridgette
Meryl: Come on kids, we need to check out what happened!
They … morestart running upstairs
Liam falls while running up the stairs
Liam: Ouch, my knee!
Bridgette: Oh come on, don't be such a crybaby!
Meryl: Shut up! How much does it hurt?
Liam: I think I can walk...
Tim: Something's not right...
Bridgette: Yeah no shit, somebody just shot a gun!
Tim: No, I feel like we're being watched...
Everybody looks around them
Bridgette: Stop scaring me and my little brother! There's nobody here!
Meryl: Silence! I think I heard some foot steps from the roof...
They're quiet. They could actually hear some foot steps from the roof
Liam: Let's keep moving, I'm really scared...
Meryl: Yeah, let's go guys...
They head towards the room where the gun shot came from
Bridgette: Why can't we just leave this place?
Tim: We're trapped in here
… [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-1
Tim, Meryl, Liam and Bridgette
Meryl: Come on kids, we need to check out what happened!
They … morestart running upstairs
Liam falls while running up the stairs
Liam: Ouch, my knee!
Bridgette: Oh come on, don't be such a crybaby!
Meryl: Shut up! How much does it hurt?
Liam: I think I can walk...
Tim: Something's not right...
Bridgette: Yeah no shit, somebody just shot a gun!
Tim: No, I feel like we're being watched...
Everybody looks around them
Bridgette: Stop scaring me and my little brother! There's nobody here!
Meryl: Silence! I think I heard some foot steps from the roof...
They're quiet. They could actually hear some foot steps from the roof
Liam: Let's keep moving, I'm really scared...
Meryl: Yeah, let's go guys...
They head towards the room where the gun shot came from
Bridgette: Why can't we just leave this place?
Tim: We're trapped in here
… [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-1
Tim, Meryl, Liam and Bridgette
Meryl: Come on kids, we need to check out what happened!
They … morestart running upstairs
Liam falls while running up the stairs
Liam: Ouch, my knee!
Bridgette: Oh come on, don't be such a crybaby!
Meryl: Shut up! How much does it hurt?
Liam: I think I can walk...
Tim: Something's not right...
Bridgette: Yeah no shit, somebody just shot a gun!
Tim: No, I feel like we're being watched...
Everybody looks around them
Bridgette: Stop scaring me and my little brother! There's nobody here!
Meryl: Silence! I think I heard some foot steps from the roof...
They're quiet. They could actually hear some foot steps from the roof
Liam: Let's keep moving, I'm really scared...
Meryl: Yeah, let's go guys...
They head towards the room where the gun shot came from
Bridgette: Why can't we just leave this place?
Tim: We're trapped in here
… [view original content]
After everyone went looking for another way in, Hope was left alone in the room to try to open the door. He tried to open the door for about 5 minutes, when he gave up. He didn't actually even try to open it, because he knew it was hopeless. The door was made of iron and it was locked up tight, so a little man like him could never open it.
Hope looked at Sleeve's body.
Hope: I should probably get rid off that before she gets angry...
Hope grabs Sleeve's legs and drags him out of the room
Hope: Why do I have to do all dirty work for her? Desinging the traps for Felix, ma......
Hope sees the cop entering the building
Hope: Oh crap... It seems like it's time for the last task for me....
Hope walks in the shadows, approaching the cop. He takes a knife out of his pocket
The cop: Hello!? Is anyone here?
Hope steps in front of him
Hope: Oh god, help me please! I got stabbed!
The cop: Holy crap, let me have a look!
The cop comes close to Hope
The cop: Wait a second.. Where's the w..... Urgh
Hope stabbed the cop in the stomach. The cop falls to the ground. Hope takes the knife out of his stomach
Hope takes a walkie-talkie out of his pocket.
Speaking to the walkie-talkie: Okay now. I've done everything you asked me to do, can I go now?
???: You're free now...
Hope: I'm going to write that stupid quote to the wall now. Then I'll g... Gasp
Hope sees Leroy staring at him at the other side of the hallway. He has a scared look on his face
Leroy: I.. I know what you've done Hope! Stay away from me!
Hope: Look, I found him like this!
Leroy: Don't you bullshit me! I saw everything!
Hope: Leroy w....
Leroy starts to run to the second floor
Hope: sigh Fuck me and my life...
Hope runs after Leroy. Hope's faster than Leroy, so he catches him pretty fast.
Hope: You just had to stick your nose into this huh?
Leroy: Fuck you Hope! I wouldn't ever thought it was you! You were the assistant!
Hope: Just for you to know, there are more. Hope grabs Leroy's hand
Leroy: What are you doing?
Hope: A favor. He throws Leroy downstairs. Leroy dies when hitting the ground
Hope gets down and writes the quote to the wall. ”Live as if you were to die tomorrow ”
Hope: Hah... I'm finally free...
Hope gets up to get his stuff. When walking to his room, he sees Tim and the others going to the room where Sleeve was killed
Hope: I'm just going to say that I'm going to look for my phone... They won't notice anything.
Hope gets behind Tim just when he's going into the room. While he's about to touch Tim to his shoulder, Tim suddenly runs into the room and locks the door.
Hope: Heh, dumbass... Well, now I don't have to make more lies to these people. My jobs done h...
A figure dressed in black runs from upstairs with Drake and Jacob chasing it
Hope: Hey what the h... Urgh
A giant pain hits Hope's stomach. He looks down to it. The figure stabbed Hope as it ran past him. Hope looks at the figure as it runs away.
Jacob: Holy shit Drake, it stabbed Hope! Come here!
Drake: Wake up dude! Stay alive!
Hope's sight goes blurry as he watches the door open and Liam screaming when he sees Hope
Hope still had a little time left to tell them that he was one of the assistants
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-2
Hope Ricky
After everyone went looking for another way in, Hope was left alone in the room to tr… morey to open the door. He tried to open the door for about 5 minutes, when he gave up. He didn't actually even try to open it, because he knew it was hopeless. The door was made of iron and it was locked up tight, so a little man like him could never open it.
Hope looked at Sleeve's body.
Hope: I should probably get rid off that before she gets angry...
Hope grabs Sleeve's legs and drags him out of the room
Hope: Why do I have to do all dirty work for her? Desinging the traps for Felix, ma......
Hope sees the cop entering the building
Hope: Oh crap... It seems like it's time for the last task for me....
Hope walks in the shadows, approaching the cop. He takes a knife out of his pocket
The cop: Hello!? Is anyone here?
Hope steps in front of him
Hope: Oh god, help me please! I got… [view original content]
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name: Sydney Harris
age:24
appearance: long brown hair. blue eyes.
personality: kind and friendly, very open to others, bubbly and happy.
came here to check on her boyfriend, Felix Davis...
Thank you! Btw I'm sorry guys, I've been spending time with my family in christmas so I haven't been able to write a new part yet :>
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 1-2
Drake and Jacob
Drake and Jacob are looking for Felix from the third floor
Jacob: I'm so fucking pissed off right now! We almost got the killer's assistant!
Drake: Yeah, we did. I have to admit, I'm a little scared because I'm walking with you. I mean, you were in the room.
Jacob: What? Are you blaming me? He looks at Drake with an angry face
Drake: I'm not blaming you, but I can't be too sure when walking around with the people that were in that room...
Jacob: You were in that room also...
Drake: But I'm not the assistant.
Jacob: Well me neither! Let's just stop talking about this, okay?
Jacob: I wonder where the cops are? They should've been here ages ago.
Drake: Let's keep our hopes up. They might have some trouble tracking this place down or something.
Jacob: I sure hope so...
Drake: What are we even looking for?
Jacob: I... I don't know. We just need to find some other way into that place or something.
Jacob: Where the fuck did Tim disappear? I've been filming this whole shit, but I haven't seen a clue of him afer he went looking for Felix from the library.
Drake: Tim? Do you know what his last name was?
Jacob: Frost. His name was Tim Frost.
Drake: Holy shit. How... How is he here?
Jacob: What do you mean?
Drake: Don't you know who he is? He brutally murdered a boy 12 years ago. Poor boy he killed was found in a forest with his guts out and his fucking brains splattered to a tree! He was sent to insane asylum for his entire life. How the hell is he here?
Jacob: I have a bad feeling about this....
Felix Hector and Amy
Felix and Amy are looking for another way in from the second floor
Amy: I'm sorry Felix... I didn't know what he was up to..
Felix Hector: There's no need to apogilize. You did what you had to. It was a messed up situation.
Amy: But without me we would know who the assistant would be.
Felix Hector: Come on now Amy, don't blame yourself. It wasn't your fault.
Amy: sigh
They're walking trough the hallway
Amy: Oh my god Felix look! Amy is staring at a wall
Felix Hector: sigh what n.... What the fuck!?
There's a message in the wall which is written in human blood
Felix Hector: ”Live as if you were to die tomorrow” What does that mean?
Amy: F...Fel....Felix! Look! She points at the floor
Felix Hector: Felix turns his head down and looks at the floor ….... And I thought it couldn't get any more worse...
In the ground there a two bodies. The other one is a cop's body. The other one is Leroy, the chef
Amy: How did Leroy end up dead? Looks like the cop you guys called here didn't make it...
Felix Hector: How the fuck am I supposed to know?
Amy: Why are everybody being so mean!? I try to be nice to everyone, but all I get back is shit from you! I know, that it's probably hard to keep calm right now, but can't you even talk nicely to someone?
Felix Hector: Look Amy.... I'm sorry. It's just a hard situation right now and we need to concentrate on the task, finding that cop and try to get out of here.
Amy: I'm just so tired of listening you guys being so angry to me while I'm nice...
Felix looks outside. It's probably midnight already, so it's really dark. All he could see is the lights from the cops car
Felix Hector: Amy. Amy I have an idea.
Amy: What is it?
Felix Hector: Do you see those lights over there? They're coming from the cop's car. We need to go in there. That car has a real police radio. We could send a serious amount of cops here to help us.
Amy: I don't know Felix... Maybe we should go get the others here?
Felix Hector: Amy, I'm sorry to tell you this, but we don't have time. Look at those people behind you. Do you want to end up like that? Because that's going to happen if we don't act fast.
[Go call some cops here now]
[Go find the others and then call the cops]
[Don't do anything]
[Go call police now]
Awesome chapter as always!
[Go call some cops here now]
[Go call some cops here now]
[Don't do anything]
Awesome Chapter!!!!
[Go call some cops here now]
Voting closed!
[Go call some cops here now]
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Thanks for the shout out
No dude, thank you for giving me a shout out when you did (Back when Raining 1 was still being written), without that this thread would probably be pretty dead.
I'm glad i got to help.
Amy: Wait Felix... What is that?
Felix: RUN!
Stay tuned
Episode 3 - Mind Games, Chapter 1-3
Jacob and Drake
Jacob: I have a bad feeling about this....
Drake: There are still people in this mansion who don't know about these murders. We need to warn them about this.
Jacob: How do you know?
Drake: Well, I was supposed to be a DJ in a party here. I had a list of names who attented in to the party.
Jacob: So where is it? The list I mean.
Drake: I don't know, I lost it.
Jacob: Fuck. It might have had some important information.
Drake: Yeah maybe...
Jacob: Maybe we should go look for it?
Drake: I don't kn.. WHOAH!
Jacob: What?
Drake: I saw movement in that room...
Jacob: We better check that out...
Jacob films every step he takes towards the room
Jacob: On three.
Jacob: One
Jacob: Two
Jacob: Thr...
A figure kicks the door open and runs downstairs
Drake: Come on, he's getting aw....
BOOM
They hear a big explosion from the parking lots
Jacob: What the fuck was that?
Drake: I DON'T CARE MAN, THAT GUY IS ESCAPING!
Jacob: But we need to check out what that explosion was!
[Run after the figure]
[Go investigate the explosion]
I recommend reading this part to the end before making any decisions
Felix Hector and Amy
Amy: Yeah... You're right. There's no time left to waste...
Felix Hector: Come on, let's go.
Felix opens the door leading outside. They don't have a flashlight so they just have to walk really carefully to the car
Amy: That Felix man was really nice you know... He had to choose between me and some guy called Daniel.
Felix Hector: So... That kind of means that Felix was the one who killed him?
Amy: No! I wouldn't be here if he'd done otherwise!
Felix Hector: Come on Amy, I'm just joking He laughs
Amy: We need to find him.
Felix Hector: That's what we're doing right now. We just need to call the cops here first so they can help. If they make it here...
Amy: We need to call more than one cop this time. I mean, that cop you guys called earlier didn't make it...
Felix Hector: Don't worry, I will call as many as I can.
They're approaching the car
Felix Hector: Wait here, I'll call the cops.
Amy: Be careful Felix...
Felix opens the car's door and gets in
Felix: Hmmm... Let's see... Wait... What?
Amy: What is it?
Felix: The radio is not here...
Amy: What?
Felix: You heard me.
They're both silent for a moment
Amy: Felix.... What is that ticking noise?
Felix: I don't hear anything?
Amy: No Felix, I'm pretty sure I hear some noise.
Felix steps out of the car
Felix: You're right.. What is that?
Amy: Uhh...Felix? Do you know what that is?
Felix: Amy.... Amy that looks like a time bomb.
CLICK
Felix: RUN!
BOOOOM
The end of chapter.
[Go investigate explosion]
I have a feeling someone's dead...
[Run after the figure]
[Go investigate the explosion]
Amazing Chapter!!!!!
[Run after the figure]
[Run after the figure] - I feel like someone's going to get stabbed...But...
Voting closed!
[Run after the figure]
Ch. 1 is finished.
Body count in this chapter = 2
How many more do you think there will be in this episode?
I don't know... If I have to guess, three or more.
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-1
Tim, Meryl, Liam and Bridgette
Meryl: Come on kids, we need to check out what happened!
They start running upstairs
Liam falls while running up the stairs
Liam: Ouch, my knee!
Bridgette: Oh come on, don't be such a crybaby!
Meryl: Shut up! How much does it hurt?
Liam: I think I can walk...
Tim: Something's not right...
Bridgette: Yeah no shit, somebody just shot a gun!
Tim: No, I feel like we're being watched...
Everybody looks around them
Bridgette: Stop scaring me and my little brother! There's nobody here!
Meryl: Silence! I think I heard some foot steps from the roof...
They're quiet. They could actually hear some foot steps from the roof
Liam: Let's keep moving, I'm really scared...
Meryl: Yeah, let's go guys...
They head towards the room where the gun shot came from
Bridgette: Why can't we just leave this place?
Tim: We're trapped in here
Liam: Does that mean we're not going to get out of here? His face turns sad
Bridgette: Yeah it does and it also means that we're going to get killed She teases Liam
Meryl: No Liam, we're going to get out of here. Don't worry.
Liam: We need to find our mom.
Bridgette: She's probably fucking the chef in the backr....
Liam: Don't talk about her like that!
Bridgette: Come on Liam you saw the look in her eyes when she saw that chef...
Tim: Who? Leroy?
Bridgette: Yeah I guess. Didn't catch up his name.
They're now in front of the room
Meryl: Wait here, I'll go first.
There's nobody in the room. Sleeve's body isn't there anymore
Meryl: Okay kids, it's safe to come in. There's only blood on the wall...
The kids walk into the room. Tim is just stepping in, when he sees a shadow just behind him
[Hit the figure behind you]
[Run into the room and lock the door]
[Turn around and see who it is]
Felix Davis
GASP
Felix's eyes open. He's really sweaty. He isn't surrounded in blood anymore. He looks around and for some reason, he is in the elevator. He looks at his leg. It's cleaned and bandaged.
What the hell...?
How the hell is my leg fixed? And how did I end up here?
BLINK
The elevator's door opens
I guess it's time for a new test....
Felix gets up. His leg is feeling better already. Seems like this son of a bitch actually wants to keep him alive for some reason. Maybe this is just a test from the police department to test if he's still capable to do his job?
He steps into the room. There's nothing else than multiple buttons with names on them and a voice recorder there.
Felix grabs the voice recorder and pushes play
???: Oh Felix! It's good to see you managed to make it here! This level isn't about torturing you, it's about choices. One of my assistants is in there right now running with a knife, trying to kill someone. It's up to you to decide who it is. You see, there are buttons in the wall with name's of some people I randomly picked. The moment you push some button, you can say good bye to the person you chose. Good luck.
Oh shit..... I don't really have a choice to back up now...
So... Who do I want to ”kill”
[Meryl]
[Tim]
[Drake]
[Hope]
[Bridgette]
Damn, that's a hard choice...
[Run into the room and lock the door]
And
[Drake]
These are hard choices...
Felix is a total badass BTW.
Haha, I always try to make the choices hard so it's glad to hear that :>
And yeah your character submission made Felix like that
[Run into the room and lock the door]
[Hope]
Excellent Chapter!!!!!!!
[Run into the room and lock the door] - It's better to try to survive by hiding then just standing in the open.
[Hope] - I volunteer as tribute!
[Hit the figure behind you]
Why not? I vote for [Do nothing].
[Run into the room and lock the door]
Fighting won't work very well![:\](https://community.telltale.com/resources/emoji/confused.png ":\")
[Hope]
Kill Hope, because there is No Hope Left.
>:c
(Not because you voted for me, but because you made that pun)
It was a good pun!
Sure...
;P
He isn't going to get out of there if he doesn't do anything.
Voting closed!
[Run into the room and lock the door]
[The assistant will try to kill Hope]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-2
Hope Ricky
After everyone went looking for another way in, Hope was left alone in the room to try to open the door. He tried to open the door for about 5 minutes, when he gave up. He didn't actually even try to open it, because he knew it was hopeless. The door was made of iron and it was locked up tight, so a little man like him could never open it.
Hope looked at Sleeve's body.
Hope: I should probably get rid off that before she gets angry...
Hope grabs Sleeve's legs and drags him out of the room
Hope: Why do I have to do all dirty work for her? Desinging the traps for Felix, ma......
Hope sees the cop entering the building
Hope: Oh crap... It seems like it's time for the last task for me....
Hope walks in the shadows, approaching the cop. He takes a knife out of his pocket
The cop: Hello!? Is anyone here?
Hope steps in front of him
Hope: Oh god, help me please! I got stabbed!
The cop: Holy crap, let me have a look!
The cop comes close to Hope
The cop: Wait a second.. Where's the w..... Urgh
Hope stabbed the cop in the stomach. The cop falls to the ground. Hope takes the knife out of his stomach
Hope takes a walkie-talkie out of his pocket.
Speaking to the walkie-talkie: Okay now. I've done everything you asked me to do, can I go now?
???: You're free now...
Hope: I'm going to write that stupid quote to the wall now. Then I'll g... Gasp
Hope sees Leroy staring at him at the other side of the hallway. He has a scared look on his face
Leroy: I.. I know what you've done Hope! Stay away from me!
Hope: Look, I found him like this!
Leroy: Don't you bullshit me! I saw everything!
Hope: Leroy w....
Leroy starts to run to the second floor
Hope: sigh Fuck me and my life...
Hope runs after Leroy. Hope's faster than Leroy, so he catches him pretty fast.
Hope: You just had to stick your nose into this huh?
Leroy: Fuck you Hope! I wouldn't ever thought it was you! You were the assistant!
Hope: Just for you to know, there are more. Hope grabs Leroy's hand
Leroy: What are you doing?
Hope: A favor. He throws Leroy downstairs. Leroy dies when hitting the ground
Hope gets down and writes the quote to the wall. ”Live as if you were to die tomorrow ”
Hope: Hah... I'm finally free...
Hope gets up to get his stuff. When walking to his room, he sees Tim and the others going to the room where Sleeve was killed
Hope: I'm just going to say that I'm going to look for my phone... They won't notice anything.
Hope gets behind Tim just when he's going into the room. While he's about to touch Tim to his shoulder, Tim suddenly runs into the room and locks the door.
Hope: Heh, dumbass... Well, now I don't have to make more lies to these people. My jobs done h...
A figure dressed in black runs from upstairs with Drake and Jacob chasing it
Hope: Hey what the h... Urgh
A giant pain hits Hope's stomach. He looks down to it. The figure stabbed Hope as it ran past him. Hope looks at the figure as it runs away.
Jacob: Holy shit Drake, it stabbed Hope! Come here!
Drake: Wake up dude! Stay alive!
Hope's sight goes blurry as he watches the door open and Liam screaming when he sees Hope
Hope still had a little time left to tell them that he was one of the assistants
[Tell them]
[Die as a hero] (Don't tell them)
LOL
[Tell them]
Awesome Chapter!!!!!!!!
Thanks!