Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-2
Hope Ricky
After everyone went looking for another way in, Hope was left alone in the room to tr… morey to open the door. He tried to open the door for about 5 minutes, when he gave up. He didn't actually even try to open it, because he knew it was hopeless. The door was made of iron and it was locked up tight, so a little man like him could never open it.
Hope looked at Sleeve's body.
Hope: I should probably get rid off that before she gets angry...
Hope grabs Sleeve's legs and drags him out of the room
Hope: Why do I have to do all dirty work for her? Desinging the traps for Felix, ma......
Hope sees the cop entering the building
Hope: Oh crap... It seems like it's time for the last task for me....
Hope walks in the shadows, approaching the cop. He takes a knife out of his pocket
The cop: Hello!? Is anyone here?
Hope steps in front of him
Hope: Oh god, help me please! I got… [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-2
Hope Ricky
After everyone went looking for another way in, Hope was left alone in the room to tr… morey to open the door. He tried to open the door for about 5 minutes, when he gave up. He didn't actually even try to open it, because he knew it was hopeless. The door was made of iron and it was locked up tight, so a little man like him could never open it.
Hope looked at Sleeve's body.
Hope: I should probably get rid off that before she gets angry...
Hope grabs Sleeve's legs and drags him out of the room
Hope: Why do I have to do all dirty work for her? Desinging the traps for Felix, ma......
Hope sees the cop entering the building
Hope: Oh crap... It seems like it's time for the last task for me....
Hope walks in the shadows, approaching the cop. He takes a knife out of his pocket
The cop: Hello!? Is anyone here?
Hope steps in front of him
Hope: Oh god, help me please! I got… [view original content]
Hope looked at everyone. They look really worried... but they shouldn't. He had to tell them the truth.
Hope: I'm one of the assistants....
But nobody heard him yet
Hope: I'M ONE OF THE ASSISTANTS!
Hope yelled with his last powers
Jacob: Y...You?
Hope: Me....
Tim and the others step out of the room they locked themselves into.
Jacob whispers to Drake: Look, there he is...
Drake whispers to Jacob: Let's deal with that later...
Meryl: What did I just hear?
Drake: He's one of the assistants who help the killer...
Liam: So there are more?
Hope: Y... Yes...
Jacob: Why man? We were becoming friends, and now this happens...
Hope: I... I can assure you that I didn't want this. They made me to...
Bridgette: Who are they? Who the fuck are you talking about you piece of shit!?
Hope takes his last breaths and passes away
Jacob: Fuuuckh.....
Drake: Tim... We need to ask you something... How are you here?
Tim: I'm on a vacation here?
Drake: Did you umm..... Did you attend a party here?
Tim: Uhh.. Yes.
Drake: Why wasn't your name on the list that I had of the people who attented the party? Or why wasn't your name on the list of the people who came here for the vacation huh?
Tim: I uhh...
Drake: How the hell are you even here!? Aren't you supposed to be in the insane asylum for brutally murdering that little boy?
Tim: They let me go...
Liam: B...But they can't let people out of there if they have brutally murdered someone...
Bridgette: Shut up Liam, the adults are talking now...
Liam: It's true! I have spent time on internet and you can't believe how much you can learn from there! That man should be there right now!
Tim has a worried look on his face
Meryl: Tim... Is that true?
Tim: They.... uhh..
Tim starts running upstairs
Meryl: Fuck, go after him!
Jacob: Tim, stop running god damn it!
They run upstairs, but they can't see Tim anywhere. The door leading to the roof is open, but one of the doors in the same floor is open.
Drake: Where the hell did he run?
[Go check the roof]
[Go check the room]
[Half of them goes to the roof and the other half to the room]
[Don't go anywhere]
Felix Davis
This isn't right... But I have to do something to get out of here. I'm just going to choose someone randomly.
He pushes the button which says Hope. When he pushes it, a voice recorder turns on
Ohh, you chose the person who desinged these traps for you! Even though Hope's tests are a bit... How do you describe them... They seem like they're from movies, they are pretty good. That kid surely did come up with good ideas when I threathened him.... Well, too bad for him.
The door opens
How many of these tests is there going to be?
The door closes after him. He comes into a room with an electric chair with two buttons attached to it. And of course, there's a voice recorder.
Felix pushes play
Welcome to the new test Felix! I'm actually pretty surprised that you made it here! You're almost done. Almost. But yeah, let's get to it. Once you sit on that chair it locks your legs and hands, but your fingers can still move to press those two buttons. You'll hear 3 questions and you have to answer them by pressing those buttons. If you answer right, you have nothing to worry. But if you answer wrong it will give you an electirc shock with the power of 1500 Volts for 5 seconds. Good luck...
Fuck... I guess the questions can't be too hard...
Felix sits on the chair. His hands and legs get locked so he can't move. But his fingers, what's left of them, can reach the buttons
Question 1: Who do you love more, your daughter, or your wife?
[Wife]
[Daughter]
Question 2: Which has more power, love or fear?
[Love]
[Fear]
Question 3: Are you a man enough to pass these tests?
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-3
Hope looked at everyone. They look really worried... but they shouldn't. He had to tell them the tr… moreuth.
Hope: I'm one of the assistants....
But nobody heard him yet
Hope: I'M ONE OF THE ASSISTANTS!
Hope yelled with his last powers
Jacob: Y...You?
Hope: Me....
Tim and the others step out of the room they locked themselves into.
Jacob whispers to Drake: Look, there he is...
Drake whispers to Jacob: Let's deal with that later...
Meryl: What did I just hear?
Drake: He's one of the assistants who help the killer...
Liam: So there are more?
Hope: Y... Yes...
Jacob: Why man? We were becoming friends, and now this happens...
Hope: I... I can assure you that I didn't want this. They made me to...
Bridgette: Who are they? Who the fuck are you talking about you piece of shit!?
Hope takes his last breaths and passes away
Jacob: Fuuuckh.....
Drake: Tim... We … [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-3
Hope looked at everyone. They look really worried... but they shouldn't. He had to tell them the tr… moreuth.
Hope: I'm one of the assistants....
But nobody heard him yet
Hope: I'M ONE OF THE ASSISTANTS!
Hope yelled with his last powers
Jacob: Y...You?
Hope: Me....
Tim and the others step out of the room they locked themselves into.
Jacob whispers to Drake: Look, there he is...
Drake whispers to Jacob: Let's deal with that later...
Meryl: What did I just hear?
Drake: He's one of the assistants who help the killer...
Liam: So there are more?
Hope: Y... Yes...
Jacob: Why man? We were becoming friends, and now this happens...
Hope: I... I can assure you that I didn't want this. They made me to...
Bridgette: Who are they? Who the fuck are you talking about you piece of shit!?
Hope takes his last breaths and passes away
Jacob: Fuuuckh.....
Drake: Tim... We … [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-3
Hope looked at everyone. They look really worried... but they shouldn't. He had to tell them the tr… moreuth.
Hope: I'm one of the assistants....
But nobody heard him yet
Hope: I'M ONE OF THE ASSISTANTS!
Hope yelled with his last powers
Jacob: Y...You?
Hope: Me....
Tim and the others step out of the room they locked themselves into.
Jacob whispers to Drake: Look, there he is...
Drake whispers to Jacob: Let's deal with that later...
Meryl: What did I just hear?
Drake: He's one of the assistants who help the killer...
Liam: So there are more?
Hope: Y... Yes...
Jacob: Why man? We were becoming friends, and now this happens...
Hope: I... I can assure you that I didn't want this. They made me to...
Bridgette: Who are they? Who the fuck are you talking about you piece of shit!?
Hope takes his last breaths and passes away
Jacob: Fuuuckh.....
Drake: Tim... We … [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-3
Hope looked at everyone. They look really worried... but they shouldn't. He had to tell them the tr… moreuth.
Hope: I'm one of the assistants....
But nobody heard him yet
Hope: I'M ONE OF THE ASSISTANTS!
Hope yelled with his last powers
Jacob: Y...You?
Hope: Me....
Tim and the others step out of the room they locked themselves into.
Jacob whispers to Drake: Look, there he is...
Drake whispers to Jacob: Let's deal with that later...
Meryl: What did I just hear?
Drake: He's one of the assistants who help the killer...
Liam: So there are more?
Hope: Y... Yes...
Jacob: Why man? We were becoming friends, and now this happens...
Hope: I... I can assure you that I didn't want this. They made me to...
Bridgette: Who are they? Who the fuck are you talking about you piece of shit!?
Hope takes his last breaths and passes away
Jacob: Fuuuckh.....
Drake: Tim... We … [view original content]
My laptop's (Yeah, I have a laptop now) charger broke just when I was about to finish the next part, so I really wouldn't want to write it again on my tablet so it will take some time before the next part is here because I have to buy a new one.
My laptop's (Yeah, I have a laptop now) charger broke just when I was about to finish the next part, so I really wouldn't want to write it again on my tablet so it will take some time before the next part is here because I have to buy a new one.
I could make the thread for my second story now, but it will take some time until it starts (after ep.3 is finished (It was supposed to start after ep.4 but I changed it))
So do you guys want me to publish it now or later?
Ps. The next part might even take a week before it's out. Fucking charger ;_;
I could make the thread for my second story now, but it will take some time until it starts (after ep.3 is finished (It was supposed to star… moret after ep.4 but I changed it))
So do you guys want me to publish it now or later?
Ps. The next part might even take a week before it's out. Fucking charger ;_;
I could make the thread for my second story now, but it will take some time until it starts (after ep.3 is finished (It was supposed to star… moret after ep.4 but I changed it))
So do you guys want me to publish it now or later?
Ps. The next part might even take a week before it's out. Fucking charger ;_;
I could make the thread for my second story now, but it will take some time until it starts (after ep.3 is finished (It was supposed to star… moret after ep.4 but I changed it))
So do you guys want me to publish it now or later?
Ps. The next part might even take a week before it's out. Fucking charger ;_;
I've just been writing character introdutions to my second story now on my tablet, but I'll write the next part to this on my laptop as soon as I have time.
Officer Phillips: A possible murder case huh? I can take it! I've been working on with too much paper work lately, I need some work on the field too!
Detective Avery: Hah, maybe you should keep on with the paper work. You're too young and too stupid to be out there if we're honest. And this is a murder case. All of your other cases have been about some kids stealing lollipops from the nearby store. All the other cops laugh
Officer Phillips: Come on Monica, you can't judge me for being too young to be there. You're a fossil compared to me. You're like 50 Again everyone laughs
Detective Avery: At least I'm a detective. I have worked hard to get here. Unlike you, I didn't eat donuts and watch ice hockey when I was your age, I actually solved crimes.
Officer Phillips: I can do this! Trust me! I can't move forward on my career if you don't give me a chance.
Detective Avery: I suppose you are ready. But you need to remember that there's a lunatic running around here. His real name is Peter Tyler, but we know that he has changed his name after bailing out from the insane asyulum. He was last seen running into the forest near to the mansion you're heading, so be careful.
Officer Phillips: Yeah mom, I'll be careful...
Officer Phillips goes out and heads to his car
After Officer Phillips leaves, one of the other police officers comes to speak to Monica
Officer Carney: You're not really letting him go by himself are you?
Monica: Don't worry, I'll go after him. He's going to get himself in trouble if he goes there by himself
Officer Carney: Good. That kid sure as hell isn't as smart as he looks like
Monica: Hah, you're right about that. Well, I better go now before he hurts himself.
Monica puts her jacket on and heads to her car
A murder in that mansion? I don't think so...
She drives the way to the mansion. It's in the middle of the forest, so it is not easy to get there by car. The road is very dangerous to drive, especially now when there's a maniac on the loose. She turns on the radio and switches to a country music station
Monica: Retirement is just around the corner. I just need to keep working h.... OH MY GOD! She kicks the brake with her foot so the car would stop
Heavy breathing
She almost hit a young woman on the road. She's a beautiful young woman who looks like she's lost. The look on the woman's face is terrified
Monica steps out of the car
Monica: What were you thinking? I almost hit you with my car!
The woman: I.. I'm sorry I didn't see you...
Monica: What are you doing out here?
The woman: I'm looking for a mansion here. I'm already late from there, but I can't find it.
Monica: Do you mean the Ford's mansion? I'm actually heading there.
The woman: Would you mind giving me a ride? It cost a lot of money to attend there, but I can't even find the place... It's also scary to be here alone.
Monica: I don't know... I've been reported that there's been a possible murder there, but it's probably just bullshit. Okay then, come into the car.
The woman: Thank you so much. She goes into the car
Monica: So... What's your name?
The woman: Anne Shier.
Monica: Well hello mrs. Shier. I'm detective Monica Avery.
Anne: What did you mean by that murder thing?
Monica: Someone contacted the police station that there's been a murder in the mansion your headed. That mansion is the oldest building around here.The building has been rebuilt twice, but it still has some of the old rooms left in it. The only murders there were in the 20th century when some people were found there brutally murdered. The killer got away and the case has been closed already. It's just funny to think that someone would like to kill anyone in the same day and the same month as in 1915. And I've heard there are a lot of kids there now, so they could be just prank calling us.
Anne: That's creepy... I hope it's just a joke.
Monica: I'm pretty sure it is, don't worry.
Anne: I'm just so pissed off right now. I have been walking around here for like 16 hours and I haven't seen any sign of that mansion.
Monica: That's pretty understandable. The mansion is pretty hard to find without a map or a gps.
Anne: This just seems like waste of time and money.
Monica: You can talk to the owner of the mansion, I'm sure he'll figure something out.
Anne: Maybe I will.
Anne sees something really odd
Anne: Uhh.. Hey detective, is that an explosion or something?
Monica looks at the sky and sees a big explosion
Boom
Monica: Yeah. Yeah it is. What the hell is going on there?
Anne: Why did the sound come so late?
Monica: Because we're still a mile away from that mansion.
Anne: That doesn't really answer my question...
Monica: sigh It's because the speed of sound is a mile in 4.7 seconds
Anne: Well that explains a lot. Thanks!
Monica: That's really not important right now. We need to get to the mansion, immediately.
She speeds up
Anne: So, how fast does this car g...
Monica: Could you please be quiet for a moment?
Anne: Yeah... Sorry.
They're almost at the gate to the mansion
Monica: Holy shit...
There's a car that has exploded and two persons lying on the ground
Monica: Wait here.
She gets out of the car
Monica: Hello!? Are you alive!?
Anne steps out of the car
Anne: Open the gate and go see if they're alive!
Monica: I can't, the guards are somewhere.
The gate opens
Monica: Who the hell was that?
[Go check the bodies]
[Go investigate the gate opener's booth]
Felix Davis
Question 1: Who do you love more, your daughter, or your wife?
Felix takes a deep breath and pushes the first button
Well done Felix, at least you understand what kind of a husband you are. You don't give any of your time to your wife, you just spend it working or with your daughter
Question 2: Which has more power, love or fear?
Felix: How can you actually answer to these questions? What ever, I'll just choose fear...
I didn't expect this answer from you. Well, it's true though. You aren't really a fearful man, but you're neither an easy man to love, judging by your past relationships
Question 3: Are you a man enough to pass these tests?
Felix: To be honest... I don't really think so anymore.
BZZZZZZZZT
Felix: AAARGH! STOP!
You aren't giving up are you? I just wanted to give you a little cheer up for thinking like that. Well, go on then
The locks open and Felix falls to the ground. What if he had answered wrong to those 2 other questions? He'd probably be dead by now
The door to the next room opens
Felix drags himself to the next room and prepares for the worst
The end of the part
Hah, it's finally here! I hope you guys are still interested in this story :P
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 3-1
Police department, 10 miles away from the mansion
Officer Phillips: A possible murder case huh? … moreI can take it! I've been working on with too much paper work lately, I need some work on the field too!
Detective Avery: Hah, maybe you should keep on with the paper work. You're too young and too stupid to be out there if we're honest. And this is a murder case. All of your other cases have been about some kids stealing lollipops from the nearby store. All the other cops laugh
Officer Phillips: Come on Monica, you can't judge me for being too young to be there. You're a fossil compared to me. You're like 50 Again everyone laughs
Detective Avery: At least I'm a detective. I have worked hard to get here. Unlike you, I didn't eat donuts and watch ice hockey when I was your age, I actually solved crimes.
Officer Phillips: I can do this! Trust me! I can't move forward on my career if you don't giv… [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 3-1
Police department, 10 miles away from the mansion
Officer Phillips: A possible murder case huh? … moreI can take it! I've been working on with too much paper work lately, I need some work on the field too!
Detective Avery: Hah, maybe you should keep on with the paper work. You're too young and too stupid to be out there if we're honest. And this is a murder case. All of your other cases have been about some kids stealing lollipops from the nearby store. All the other cops laugh
Officer Phillips: Come on Monica, you can't judge me for being too young to be there. You're a fossil compared to me. You're like 50 Again everyone laughs
Detective Avery: At least I'm a detective. I have worked hard to get here. Unlike you, I didn't eat donuts and watch ice hockey when I was your age, I actually solved crimes.
Officer Phillips: I can do this! Trust me! I can't move forward on my career if you don't giv… [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 3-1
Police department, 10 miles away from the mansion
Officer Phillips: A possible murder case huh? … moreI can take it! I've been working on with too much paper work lately, I need some work on the field too!
Detective Avery: Hah, maybe you should keep on with the paper work. You're too young and too stupid to be out there if we're honest. And this is a murder case. All of your other cases have been about some kids stealing lollipops from the nearby store. All the other cops laugh
Officer Phillips: Come on Monica, you can't judge me for being too young to be there. You're a fossil compared to me. You're like 50 Again everyone laughs
Detective Avery: At least I'm a detective. I have worked hard to get here. Unlike you, I didn't eat donuts and watch ice hockey when I was your age, I actually solved crimes.
Officer Phillips: I can do this! Trust me! I can't move forward on my career if you don't giv… [view original content]
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 3-1
Police department, 10 miles away from the mansion
Officer Phillips: A possible murder case huh? … moreI can take it! I've been working on with too much paper work lately, I need some work on the field too!
Detective Avery: Hah, maybe you should keep on with the paper work. You're too young and too stupid to be out there if we're honest. And this is a murder case. All of your other cases have been about some kids stealing lollipops from the nearby store. All the other cops laugh
Officer Phillips: Come on Monica, you can't judge me for being too young to be there. You're a fossil compared to me. You're like 50 Again everyone laughs
Detective Avery: At least I'm a detective. I have worked hard to get here. Unlike you, I didn't eat donuts and watch ice hockey when I was your age, I actually solved crimes.
Officer Phillips: I can do this! Trust me! I can't move forward on my career if you don't giv… [view original content]
Comments
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Hmm...So it was me...Kinda...Anyway, great chapter!
Thanks!
[Tell them]
I guess you get what you give...
Nice one
Thank you!
Voting closed!
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I'm having some hard time putting these new characters to the story :<
Let's see what I can come up with
Sometimes it's hard to find roles for them, but I'm sure you'll come up with something good for them c:
Thank you, I appreciate it :]
No problem.
Well, I'd rather wait (maybe someone would rescue me later?) than have blood on my hands, but I guess that's just me.
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 2-3
Hope looked at everyone. They look really worried... but they shouldn't. He had to tell them the truth.
Hope: I'm one of the assistants....
But nobody heard him yet
Hope: I'M ONE OF THE ASSISTANTS!
Hope yelled with his last powers
Jacob: Y...You?
Hope: Me....
Tim and the others step out of the room they locked themselves into.
Jacob whispers to Drake: Look, there he is...
Drake whispers to Jacob: Let's deal with that later...
Meryl: What did I just hear?
Drake: He's one of the assistants who help the killer...
Liam: So there are more?
Hope: Y... Yes...
Jacob: Why man? We were becoming friends, and now this happens...
Hope: I... I can assure you that I didn't want this. They made me to...
Bridgette: Who are they? Who the fuck are you talking about you piece of shit!?
Hope takes his last breaths and passes away
Jacob: Fuuuckh.....
Drake: Tim... We need to ask you something... How are you here?
Tim: I'm on a vacation here?
Drake: Did you umm..... Did you attend a party here?
Tim: Uhh.. Yes.
Drake: Why wasn't your name on the list that I had of the people who attented the party? Or why wasn't your name on the list of the people who came here for the vacation huh?
Tim: I uhh...
Drake: How the hell are you even here!? Aren't you supposed to be in the insane asylum for brutally murdering that little boy?
Tim: They let me go...
Liam: B...But they can't let people out of there if they have brutally murdered someone...
Bridgette: Shut up Liam, the adults are talking now...
Liam: It's true! I have spent time on internet and you can't believe how much you can learn from there! That man should be there right now!
Tim has a worried look on his face
Meryl: Tim... Is that true?
Tim: They.... uhh..
Tim starts running upstairs
Meryl: Fuck, go after him!
Jacob: Tim, stop running god damn it!
They run upstairs, but they can't see Tim anywhere. The door leading to the roof is open, but one of the doors in the same floor is open.
Drake: Where the hell did he run?
[Go check the roof]
[Go check the room]
[Half of them goes to the roof and the other half to the room]
[Don't go anywhere]
Felix Davis
This isn't right... But I have to do something to get out of here. I'm just going to choose someone randomly.
He pushes the button which says Hope. When he pushes it, a voice recorder turns on
Ohh, you chose the person who desinged these traps for you! Even though Hope's tests are a bit... How do you describe them... They seem like they're from movies, they are pretty good. That kid surely did come up with good ideas when I threathened him.... Well, too bad for him.
The door opens
How many of these tests is there going to be?
The door closes after him. He comes into a room with an electric chair with two buttons attached to it. And of course, there's a voice recorder.
Felix pushes play
Welcome to the new test Felix! I'm actually pretty surprised that you made it here! You're almost done. Almost. But yeah, let's get to it. Once you sit on that chair it locks your legs and hands, but your fingers can still move to press those two buttons. You'll hear 3 questions and you have to answer them by pressing those buttons. If you answer right, you have nothing to worry. But if you answer wrong it will give you an electirc shock with the power of 1500 Volts for 5 seconds. Good luck...
Fuck... I guess the questions can't be too hard...
Felix sits on the chair. His hands and legs get locked so he can't move. But his fingers, what's left of them, can reach the buttons
Question 1: Who do you love more, your daughter, or your wife?
[Wife]
[Daughter]
Question 2: Which has more power, love or fear?
[Love]
[Fear]
Question 3: Are you a man enough to pass these tests?
[Yes]
[No]
The end of the Chapter
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[Fear]
[No]
Awesome Chapter!!!!!
Thanks!
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awesome chapter!
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[Fear]
[No]
My laptop's (Yeah, I have a laptop now) charger broke just when I was about to finish the next part, so I really wouldn't want to write it again on my tablet so it will take some time before the next part is here because I have to buy a new one.
I've had that problem to. It sucks.
You might want to check out this interactive story made by @mr.quality
I could make the thread for my second story now, but it will take some time until it starts (after ep.3 is finished (It was supposed to start after ep.4 but I changed it))
So do you guys want me to publish it now or later?
Ps. The next part might even take a week before it's out. Fucking charger ;_;
I would recommend you publish only after finishing the episode 3, but since you will take a week to continue, I'd rather be right now.
Do as you want , i have no problem , just tell me when you make the thread :P
If you make a thread I'll be sure to submit either way. You can make the thread when ever you want too!
Okay guys, it's here. It's nothing really new but I'm really excited to try this
It's been almost a month ;_;
I've just been writing character introdutions to my second story now on my tablet, but I'll write the next part to this on my laptop as soon as I have time.
I'll write the rest of the episode 3 this weekend (Or sooner if possible)
Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 3-1
Police department, 10 miles away from the mansion
Officer Phillips: A possible murder case huh? I can take it! I've been working on with too much paper work lately, I need some work on the field too!
Detective Avery: Hah, maybe you should keep on with the paper work. You're too young and too stupid to be out there if we're honest. And this is a murder case. All of your other cases have been about some kids stealing lollipops from the nearby store. All the other cops laugh
Officer Phillips: Come on Monica, you can't judge me for being too young to be there. You're a fossil compared to me. You're like 50 Again everyone laughs
Detective Avery: At least I'm a detective. I have worked hard to get here. Unlike you, I didn't eat donuts and watch ice hockey when I was your age, I actually solved crimes.
Officer Phillips: I can do this! Trust me! I can't move forward on my career if you don't give me a chance.
Detective Avery: I suppose you are ready. But you need to remember that there's a lunatic running around here. His real name is Peter Tyler, but we know that he has changed his name after bailing out from the insane asyulum. He was last seen running into the forest near to the mansion you're heading, so be careful.
Officer Phillips: Yeah mom, I'll be careful...
Officer Phillips goes out and heads to his car
After Officer Phillips leaves, one of the other police officers comes to speak to Monica
Officer Carney: You're not really letting him go by himself are you?
Monica: Don't worry, I'll go after him. He's going to get himself in trouble if he goes there by himself
Officer Carney: Good. That kid sure as hell isn't as smart as he looks like
Monica: Hah, you're right about that. Well, I better go now before he hurts himself.
Monica puts her jacket on and heads to her car
A murder in that mansion? I don't think so...
She drives the way to the mansion. It's in the middle of the forest, so it is not easy to get there by car. The road is very dangerous to drive, especially now when there's a maniac on the loose. She turns on the radio and switches to a country music station
Monica: Retirement is just around the corner. I just need to keep working h.... OH MY GOD! She kicks the brake with her foot so the car would stop
Heavy breathing
She almost hit a young woman on the road. She's a beautiful young woman who looks like she's lost. The look on the woman's face is terrified
Monica steps out of the car
Monica: What were you thinking? I almost hit you with my car!
The woman: I.. I'm sorry I didn't see you...
Monica: What are you doing out here?
The woman: I'm looking for a mansion here. I'm already late from there, but I can't find it.
Monica: Do you mean the Ford's mansion? I'm actually heading there.
The woman: Would you mind giving me a ride? It cost a lot of money to attend there, but I can't even find the place... It's also scary to be here alone.
Monica: I don't know... I've been reported that there's been a possible murder there, but it's probably just bullshit. Okay then, come into the car.
The woman: Thank you so much. She goes into the car
Monica: So... What's your name?
The woman: Anne Shier.
Monica: Well hello mrs. Shier. I'm detective Monica Avery.
Anne: What did you mean by that murder thing?
Monica: Someone contacted the police station that there's been a murder in the mansion your headed. That mansion is the oldest building around here.The building has been rebuilt twice, but it still has some of the old rooms left in it. The only murders there were in the 20th century when some people were found there brutally murdered. The killer got away and the case has been closed already. It's just funny to think that someone would like to kill anyone in the same day and the same month as in 1915. And I've heard there are a lot of kids there now, so they could be just prank calling us.
Anne: That's creepy... I hope it's just a joke.
Monica: I'm pretty sure it is, don't worry.
Anne: I'm just so pissed off right now. I have been walking around here for like 16 hours and I haven't seen any sign of that mansion.
Monica: That's pretty understandable. The mansion is pretty hard to find without a map or a gps.
Anne: This just seems like waste of time and money.
Monica: You can talk to the owner of the mansion, I'm sure he'll figure something out.
Anne: Maybe I will.
Anne sees something really odd
Anne: Uhh.. Hey detective, is that an explosion or something?
Monica looks at the sky and sees a big explosion
Boom
Monica: Yeah. Yeah it is. What the hell is going on there?
Anne: Why did the sound come so late?
Monica: Because we're still a mile away from that mansion.
Anne: That doesn't really answer my question...
Monica: sigh It's because the speed of sound is a mile in 4.7 seconds
Anne: Well that explains a lot. Thanks!
Monica: That's really not important right now. We need to get to the mansion, immediately.
She speeds up
Anne: So, how fast does this car g...
Monica: Could you please be quiet for a moment?
Anne: Yeah... Sorry.
They're almost at the gate to the mansion
Monica: Holy shit...
There's a car that has exploded and two persons lying on the ground
Monica: Wait here.
She gets out of the car
Monica: Hello!? Are you alive!?
Anne steps out of the car
Anne: Open the gate and go see if they're alive!
Monica: I can't, the guards are somewhere.
The gate opens
Monica: Who the hell was that?
[Go check the bodies]
[Go investigate the gate opener's booth]
Felix Davis
Question 1: Who do you love more, your daughter, or your wife?
Felix takes a deep breath and pushes the first button
Well done Felix, at least you understand what kind of a husband you are. You don't give any of your time to your wife, you just spend it working or with your daughter
Question 2: Which has more power, love or fear?
Felix: How can you actually answer to these questions? What ever, I'll just choose fear...
I didn't expect this answer from you. Well, it's true though. You aren't really a fearful man, but you're neither an easy man to love, judging by your past relationships
Question 3: Are you a man enough to pass these tests?
Felix: To be honest... I don't really think so anymore.
BZZZZZZZZT
Felix: AAARGH! STOP!
You aren't giving up are you? I just wanted to give you a little cheer up for thinking like that. Well, go on then
The locks open and Felix falls to the ground. What if he had answered wrong to those 2 other questions? He'd probably be dead by now
The door to the next room opens
Felix drags himself to the next room and prepares for the worst
The end of the part
Hah, it's finally here! I hope you guys are still interested in this story :P
[Go investigate the gate opener's booth]
[Go check the bodies] I ain´t going to get someone else killed
Awesome Chapter!!!!!!!
Thanks! :>
Go check the bodies.
Great chapter!
Thanks bro :>
[Go investigate the gate opener's booth]
Yes, it's returned! >:D
I'm glad I finally wrote it
Expect the rest in the weekend.
Yus!
Voting closed!
[Go investigate the gate opener's booth]
But... It's 2 vs 2.