Name: Tim Frost
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Appearance: 6ft 2, Ice-blue eyes, wears whatever is comfortable.
Personality: Bipolar, will… more sometimes just completely forget what is going on around him, can take a high amount of physical pain, tough
Background: Spent 12 years in a mental hospital after he brutally murdered a pupil who bullied him to an extreme extent.
Anna jumps out of her bed, she runs trough the mansion only wearing her night dress. She tries to find some other people but the mansion is bigger than she imagined. After running for 3 minutes, she finds Lloyd Morgan, Hope Ricky and Jacob in the dining room.
Anna: Has any of you seen my daughter?
Lloyd: I don't know. What does she look like?
Anna: She has black curly hair, brown eyes, she's pretty small Anna tries to speak calmly
Hope: I haven't seen her. Where did you see her last time?
Anna: In my bed last night! I read her a story and the she fell asleep and after that I went to sleep.
Lloyd: Uhm, so what? You don't think she just went somewhere by herself?
Anna: She would never go anywhere without telling me!
Jacob: I've heard stories that this place is haunted, maybe she saw a ghost and went after it?
Lloyd: A GHOST? He starts to laugh loudly I don't know what drugs you're using but you should probably get rid of them..
Jacob: I'm not joking. I even have my video camera with me so I could document all the paranormal actions.
Lloyd: Hah, good luck with that.
Anna: Anna gives them an angry look Let's just focus on the real task here, finding my girl. If you see her anywhere, please tell me.
Lloyd: I think she's just playing somewhere with his ghost friend, He says in a really annoying voice. If she's not back before the evening, then you should be worried.
Anna: If it was your child you would be worried. But please, if you see him, come talk to me. I'll try to find her
Anna goes looking for Valerie in the cellar
Anna is in front of the door to the cellar. It's the only place in this mansion that looks really old, like it would have been there before the mansion was built. She opens the door, and puts the lights on. She sees stairs to the cellar. She walks slowly and carefully down the stairs because they were really sticky and for some reason. She opens the door, and yells
Anna: Valerie, honey are you there? Please answer me if you are.
Not after long, Anna hears a noise from the darkness.
[Go investigate the noise]
[Run the hell out of there]
Now, this part didn't have so much action or anything in it, I'm sorry. But don't worry, after this part things will get crazy.
Episode 1, Chapter 1-2
[Go tell the others]
8.02 A.M, Saturday morning
Anna jumps out of her bed, she runs trough the mansion only … morewearing her night dress. She tries to find some other people but the mansion is bigger than she imagined. After running for 3 minutes, she finds Lloyd Morgan, Hope Ricky and Jacob in the dining room.
Anna: Has any of you seen my daughter?
Lloyd: I don't know. What does she look like?
Anna: She has black curly hair, brown eyes, she's pretty small Anna tries to speak calmly
Hope: I haven't seen her. Where did you see her last time?
Anna: In my bed last night! I read her a story and the she fell asleep and after that I went to sleep.
Lloyd: Uhm, so what? You don't think she just went somewhere by herself?
Anna: She would never go anywhere without telling me!
Jacob: I've heard stories that this place is haunted, maybe she saw a ghost and went after it?
Lloyd: A GHOST? He starts to l… [view original content]
Episode 1, Chapter 1-2
[Go tell the others]
8.02 A.M, Saturday morning
Anna jumps out of her bed, she runs trough the mansion only … morewearing her night dress. She tries to find some other people but the mansion is bigger than she imagined. After running for 3 minutes, she finds Lloyd Morgan, Hope Ricky and Jacob in the dining room.
Anna: Has any of you seen my daughter?
Lloyd: I don't know. What does she look like?
Anna: She has black curly hair, brown eyes, she's pretty small Anna tries to speak calmly
Hope: I haven't seen her. Where did you see her last time?
Anna: In my bed last night! I read her a story and the she fell asleep and after that I went to sleep.
Lloyd: Uhm, so what? You don't think she just went somewhere by herself?
Anna: She would never go anywhere without telling me!
Jacob: I've heard stories that this place is haunted, maybe she saw a ghost and went after it?
Lloyd: A GHOST? He starts to l… [view original content]
Episode 1, Chapter 1-2
[Go tell the others]
8.02 A.M, Saturday morning
Anna jumps out of her bed, she runs trough the mansion only … morewearing her night dress. She tries to find some other people but the mansion is bigger than she imagined. After running for 3 minutes, she finds Lloyd Morgan, Hope Ricky and Jacob in the dining room.
Anna: Has any of you seen my daughter?
Lloyd: I don't know. What does she look like?
Anna: She has black curly hair, brown eyes, she's pretty small Anna tries to speak calmly
Hope: I haven't seen her. Where did you see her last time?
Anna: In my bed last night! I read her a story and the she fell asleep and after that I went to sleep.
Lloyd: Uhm, so what? You don't think she just went somewhere by herself?
Anna: She would never go anywhere without telling me!
Jacob: I've heard stories that this place is haunted, maybe she saw a ghost and went after it?
Lloyd: A GHOST? He starts to l… [view original content]
Episode 1, Chapter 1-2
[Go tell the others]
8.02 A.M, Saturday morning
Anna jumps out of her bed, she runs trough the mansion only … morewearing her night dress. She tries to find some other people but the mansion is bigger than she imagined. After running for 3 minutes, she finds Lloyd Morgan, Hope Ricky and Jacob in the dining room.
Anna: Has any of you seen my daughter?
Lloyd: I don't know. What does she look like?
Anna: She has black curly hair, brown eyes, she's pretty small Anna tries to speak calmly
Hope: I haven't seen her. Where did you see her last time?
Anna: In my bed last night! I read her a story and the she fell asleep and after that I went to sleep.
Lloyd: Uhm, so what? You don't think she just went somewhere by herself?
Anna: She would never go anywhere without telling me!
Jacob: I've heard stories that this place is haunted, maybe she saw a ghost and went after it?
Lloyd: A GHOST? He starts to l… [view original content]
Anna: Valerie honey if you're here, please come here, it's mommy!
But still the only thing you could hear was the noise. After walking a little while to there where the noise came, she could hear that it was someone whispering something.
It's almost impossible to see something down there. She walks a little further and sees a light switch on the wall. She pushes it and a tiny lamp turns on. It isn't very good, but at least it's something.
Seems like the noise is coming from a closet. Once she's getting closer, she regonizes the noise. It's Valerie's.
Valerie: "Please, let me out of here"
Anna: Valerie, honey, oh my god! Hang on there sweetie, I'll let you out! Anna tries to open the closet, but it's locked
Anna: Fucking fuck! She desperately tries to find something to open it.
She starts looking from the drawers next to the closet. Anna sees an axe and takes it.
Anna hits the lock with the axe
The lock brakes
Anna: Don't worry honey I'm coming!
Anna opens the closet
Anna: What the hell? *She sees a voice recorder taped to the closet.
Anna: What the fuck is this shit!?
The lights go off
Anna: Wh.. Who's there?
9 P.M, Saturday evening, dining room.
Everyone who has paid for the food services are in the dining room enjoying dinner. So the people who are there: Hope Ricky, Daniel Milton, Lloyd Morgan, Jacob, Leroy Peterson (The chef), Tim Frost, Felix Hector, Felix Davis
Felix Davis: So, Mr. Milton, why were you hitting that woman yesterday?
Daniel: None of your business.
Felix Davis: Actually, it is. I'm a police officer. And what you were doing was a crime. So, do you want to have a nice holiday here, or in the jail. If you just tell me, I'll just give you a warning.
Daniel: Dude, I don't even care. My lawyers would get me out of there. They are the best that you can get.
Jacob: So, Mr. Davis, where exactly is the woman you guys were talking about? Anna? I remember her saying that she would go look for her daughter, but it's been over 12 hours since she left looking for her.
Lloyd: Oh, I know, I know! It must be the ghosts who took her he's looking at Jacob, and again saying this in an incredibly annoying voice.
Tim: Don't joke about ghosts. They are all over us. We can't stop them. he's looking at the wall with an empty look
Jacob: See? At least this guy agrees with me..
Felix Davis: Come on guys, stop it. But are you serious? She's been missing for that long? I better go looking for her after the dinner.
Jacob: Yeah, for real. She just..... The chef comes in with the food
Leroy: So, tonight our main food is grilled pork. everyone looks very hungry
The chef drags the cloth off of the tray.
Leroy: Wait, what the hell?
Felix Hector: Holy fucking shit he pukes
You could see people puking on the ground after seeing it.
*Anna's sliced body is on the tray in tens of pieces. There's a message attached to her mouth.
Hello, dear people. As you may have noticed, Anna has had a little surgery. But she's still not happy you have to open her stomach to make her happy. You'll also find a clue about where that little girl is and who I am. It's unnecessary to try to call the police or get out, since the guards are sleeping a never ending dream and your phones don't have signal here. Have fun playing my little game! Ps. The girl has 24 hours left to live.
Felix Davis reads the letter aloud.
Hope: That's just some sick shit. That looks so much grosser in real life than in the movies. Oh god.
Hope: Yo chef, is this some sick joke?
Leroy: No, no, I swear! The real food was in it just a minute ago!
Felix Davis: People, people, we have to relax! This is not over yet. You heard what that sick bastard wanted, if we're gonna get out of here and save that little girl's life, someone has to open her stomach. So, any volunteers?
Who's going to open her stomach? (This will affect the character mentally)
Felix Davis, Felix Hector, Tim Frost, Daniel Milton, Leroy Peterson, Hope Ricky, Jacob or Lloyd Morgan
Now, this part was a huge pain in the ass for me. I had to write it 3 times because my tablet lagged just when it would've been finished like an hour ago. Then I decided to try again, and it happened again. I seriously would've lost my temper if it would've lagged now
Episode 1, Part 1-3
8.04 A.M, Saturday morning
[Go investigate the noise]
Anna: Who's there?
There's no answer. Just the noise.
… more
Anna: Valerie honey if you're here, please come here, it's mommy!
But still the only thing you could hear was the noise. After walking a little while to there where the noise came, she could hear that it was someone whispering something.
It's almost impossible to see something down there. She walks a little further and sees a light switch on the wall. She pushes it and a tiny lamp turns on. It isn't very good, but at least it's something.
Seems like the noise is coming from a closet. Once she's getting closer, she regonizes the noise. It's Valerie's.
Valerie: "Please, let me out of here"
Anna: Valerie, honey, oh my god! Hang on there sweetie, I'll let you out! Anna tries to open the closet, but it's locked
Anna: Fucking fuck! She desperately tries to find something to open it.
She… [view original content]
Episode 1, Part 1-3
8.04 A.M, Saturday morning
[Go investigate the noise]
Anna: Who's there?
There's no answer. Just the noise.
… more
Anna: Valerie honey if you're here, please come here, it's mommy!
But still the only thing you could hear was the noise. After walking a little while to there where the noise came, she could hear that it was someone whispering something.
It's almost impossible to see something down there. She walks a little further and sees a light switch on the wall. She pushes it and a tiny lamp turns on. It isn't very good, but at least it's something.
Seems like the noise is coming from a closet. Once she's getting closer, she regonizes the noise. It's Valerie's.
Valerie: "Please, let me out of here"
Anna: Valerie, honey, oh my god! Hang on there sweetie, I'll let you out! Anna tries to open the closet, but it's locked
Anna: Fucking fuck! She desperately tries to find something to open it.
She… [view original content]
Episode 1, Part 1-3
8.04 A.M, Saturday morning
[Go investigate the noise]
Anna: Who's there?
There's no answer. Just the noise.
… more
Anna: Valerie honey if you're here, please come here, it's mommy!
But still the only thing you could hear was the noise. After walking a little while to there where the noise came, she could hear that it was someone whispering something.
It's almost impossible to see something down there. She walks a little further and sees a light switch on the wall. She pushes it and a tiny lamp turns on. It isn't very good, but at least it's something.
Seems like the noise is coming from a closet. Once she's getting closer, she regonizes the noise. It's Valerie's.
Valerie: "Please, let me out of here"
Anna: Valerie, honey, oh my god! Hang on there sweetie, I'll let you out! Anna tries to open the closet, but it's locked
Anna: Fucking fuck! She desperately tries to find something to open it.
She… [view original content]
Episode 1, Part 1-3
8.04 A.M, Saturday morning
[Go investigate the noise]
Anna: Who's there?
There's no answer. Just the noise.
… more
Anna: Valerie honey if you're here, please come here, it's mommy!
But still the only thing you could hear was the noise. After walking a little while to there where the noise came, she could hear that it was someone whispering something.
It's almost impossible to see something down there. She walks a little further and sees a light switch on the wall. She pushes it and a tiny lamp turns on. It isn't very good, but at least it's something.
Seems like the noise is coming from a closet. Once she's getting closer, she regonizes the noise. It's Valerie's.
Valerie: "Please, let me out of here"
Anna: Valerie, honey, oh my god! Hang on there sweetie, I'll let you out! Anna tries to open the closet, but it's locked
Anna: Fucking fuck! She desperately tries to find something to open it.
She… [view original content]
Episode 1, Part 1-3
8.04 A.M, Saturday morning
[Go investigate the noise]
Anna: Who's there?
There's no answer. Just the noise.
… more
Anna: Valerie honey if you're here, please come here, it's mommy!
But still the only thing you could hear was the noise. After walking a little while to there where the noise came, she could hear that it was someone whispering something.
It's almost impossible to see something down there. She walks a little further and sees a light switch on the wall. She pushes it and a tiny lamp turns on. It isn't very good, but at least it's something.
Seems like the noise is coming from a closet. Once she's getting closer, she regonizes the noise. It's Valerie's.
Valerie: "Please, let me out of here"
Anna: Valerie, honey, oh my god! Hang on there sweetie, I'll let you out! Anna tries to open the closet, but it's locked
Anna: Fucking fuck! She desperately tries to find something to open it.
She… [view original content]
Now, this part was a huge pain in the ass for me. I had to write it 3 times because my tablet lagged just when it would've been finished lik… moree an hour ago. Then I decided to try again, and it happened again. I seriously would've lost my temper if it would've lagged now
Episode 1, Part 1-3
8.04 A.M, Saturday morning
[Go investigate the noise]
Anna: Who's there?
There's no answer. Just the noise.
… more
Anna: Valerie honey if you're here, please come here, it's mommy!
But still the only thing you could hear was the noise. After walking a little while to there where the noise came, she could hear that it was someone whispering something.
It's almost impossible to see something down there. She walks a little further and sees a light switch on the wall. She pushes it and a tiny lamp turns on. It isn't very good, but at least it's something.
Seems like the noise is coming from a closet. Once she's getting closer, she regonizes the noise. It's Valerie's.
Valerie: "Please, let me out of here"
Anna: Valerie, honey, oh my god! Hang on there sweetie, I'll let you out! Anna tries to open the closet, but it's locked
Anna: Fucking fuck! She desperately tries to find something to open it.
She… [view original content]
Appearance: Wears a snapback, and a tank top and shorts. Always has headphones around him neck or around his ears.
Personality: He is always hyped up, he likes to party. He is confident in his music and he is a showoff, but he has a good heart and likes to impress people.
The reason why your character is here: DJ of the party.
Some other things you want to tell: He gets mad at others who disrespect his music, He does not mind playing for free as long as he gets known by others. He is a low profile DJ and is not that famous.
Name: Drake Andrews.
Gender: Male
Age:18
Appearance: Wears a snapback, and a tank top and shorts. Always has headphones around him … moreneck or around his ears.
Personality: He is always hyped up, he likes to party. He is confident in his music and he is a showoff, but he has a good heart and likes to impress people.
The reason why your character is here: DJ of the party.
Some other things you want to tell: He gets mad at others who disrespect his music, He does not mind playing for free as long as he gets known by others. He is a low profile DJ and is not that famous.
Episode 1, Part 1-3
8.04 A.M, Saturday morning
[Go investigate the noise]
Anna: Who's there?
There's no answer. Just the noise.
… more
Anna: Valerie honey if you're here, please come here, it's mommy!
But still the only thing you could hear was the noise. After walking a little while to there where the noise came, she could hear that it was someone whispering something.
It's almost impossible to see something down there. She walks a little further and sees a light switch on the wall. She pushes it and a tiny lamp turns on. It isn't very good, but at least it's something.
Seems like the noise is coming from a closet. Once she's getting closer, she regonizes the noise. It's Valerie's.
Valerie: "Please, let me out of here"
Anna: Valerie, honey, oh my god! Hang on there sweetie, I'll let you out! Anna tries to open the closet, but it's locked
Anna: Fucking fuck! She desperately tries to find something to open it.
She… [view original content]
Episode 1, Part 1-3
8.04 A.M, Saturday morning
[Go investigate the noise]
Anna: Who's there?
There's no answer. Just the noise.
… more
Anna: Valerie honey if you're here, please come here, it's mommy!
But still the only thing you could hear was the noise. After walking a little while to there where the noise came, she could hear that it was someone whispering something.
It's almost impossible to see something down there. She walks a little further and sees a light switch on the wall. She pushes it and a tiny lamp turns on. It isn't very good, but at least it's something.
Seems like the noise is coming from a closet. Once she's getting closer, she regonizes the noise. It's Valerie's.
Valerie: "Please, let me out of here"
Anna: Valerie, honey, oh my god! Hang on there sweetie, I'll let you out! Anna tries to open the closet, but it's locked
Anna: Fucking fuck! She desperately tries to find something to open it.
She… [view original content]
Wait until the story goes on and your character will get some development. You may have noticed that some of the characters haven't got so much attention in my story, but don't worry, they will.
Name: Drake Andrews.
Gender: Male
Age:18
Appearance: Wears a snapback, and a tank top and shorts. Always has headphones around him … moreneck or around his ears.
Personality: He is always hyped up, he likes to party. He is confident in his music and he is a showoff, but he has a good heart and likes to impress people.
The reason why your character is here: DJ of the party.
Some other things you want to tell: He gets mad at others who disrespect his music, He does not mind playing for free as long as he gets known by others. He is a low profile DJ and is not that famous.
Nice to know! Don't worry if your character hasn't had so much development yet, since the story is just starting to begin your character will have some soon
Comments
Hey guys! if you like this one, go check out My first Interactive story!
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/86035/the-walking-dead-no-safety-an-interactive-story?new=1
Well, looks like we are gonna have a lilly/kenny type character. yeah, your probably the murderer.
Episode 1, Chapter 1-2
[Go tell the others]
8.02 A.M, Saturday morning
Anna jumps out of her bed, she runs trough the mansion only wearing her night dress. She tries to find some other people but the mansion is bigger than she imagined. After running for 3 minutes, she finds Lloyd Morgan, Hope Ricky and Jacob in the dining room.
Anna: Has any of you seen my daughter?
Lloyd: I don't know. What does she look like?
Anna: She has black curly hair, brown eyes, she's pretty small Anna tries to speak calmly
Hope: I haven't seen her. Where did you see her last time?
Anna: In my bed last night! I read her a story and the she fell asleep and after that I went to sleep.
Lloyd: Uhm, so what? You don't think she just went somewhere by herself?
Anna: She would never go anywhere without telling me!
Jacob: I've heard stories that this place is haunted, maybe she saw a ghost and went after it?
Lloyd: A GHOST? He starts to laugh loudly I don't know what drugs you're using but you should probably get rid of them..
Jacob: I'm not joking. I even have my video camera with me so I could document all the paranormal actions.
Lloyd: Hah, good luck with that.
Anna: Anna gives them an angry look Let's just focus on the real task here, finding my girl. If you see her anywhere, please tell me.
Lloyd: I think she's just playing somewhere with his ghost friend, He says in a really annoying voice. If she's not back before the evening, then you should be worried.
Anna: If it was your child you would be worried. But please, if you see him, come talk to me. I'll try to find her
Anna goes looking for Valerie in the cellar
Anna is in front of the door to the cellar. It's the only place in this mansion that looks really old, like it would have been there before the mansion was built. She opens the door, and puts the lights on. She sees stairs to the cellar. She walks slowly and carefully down the stairs because they were really sticky and for some reason. She opens the door, and yells
Anna: Valerie, honey are you there? Please answer me if you are.
Not after long, Anna hears a noise from the darkness.
[Go investigate the noise]
[Run the hell out of there]
Now, this part didn't have so much action or anything in it, I'm sorry. But don't worry, after this part things will get crazy.
Yeah, I'm sorry that this part is so short and it doesn't have so much action in it. But like I said,the next part will change some things.
[Run the hell out of there]
I think is better with less action
[Go investigate the noise]
You want Ann to get killed , right? xd
[Go investigate the noise]
No...Not really...I want to find Valerie and i think this the best way to do that. :P
Anna is a unsubmitted character...so, i don't think this is going to end well either way. :P
VOTING CLOSED - [Go investigate the noise]
The next part will be up maybe in 30 minutes.
Somebody needs to die first. :-P
Sorry guys, my tablet lagged and I lost all my progress -_- I try to do it again but if it lags again i'm just going to have to wait until tomorrow
Take all the time you need. :P
Can't wait for a new part! Just got a new part on mine up.
Episode 1, Part 1-3
8.04 A.M, Saturday morning
[Go investigate the noise]
Anna: Who's there?
There's no answer. Just the noise.
Anna: Valerie honey if you're here, please come here, it's mommy!
But still the only thing you could hear was the noise. After walking a little while to there where the noise came, she could hear that it was someone whispering something.
It's almost impossible to see something down there. She walks a little further and sees a light switch on the wall. She pushes it and a tiny lamp turns on. It isn't very good, but at least it's something.
Seems like the noise is coming from a closet. Once she's getting closer, she regonizes the noise. It's Valerie's.
Valerie: "Please, let me out of here"
Anna: Valerie, honey, oh my god! Hang on there sweetie, I'll let you out! Anna tries to open the closet, but it's locked
Anna: Fucking fuck! She desperately tries to find something to open it.
She starts looking from the drawers next to the closet. Anna sees an axe and takes it.
Anna hits the lock with the axe
The lock brakes
Anna: Don't worry honey I'm coming!
Anna opens the closet
Anna: What the hell? *She sees a voice recorder taped to the closet.
Anna: What the fuck is this shit!?
The lights go off
Anna: Wh.. Who's there?
9 P.M, Saturday evening, dining room.
Everyone who has paid for the food services are in the dining room enjoying dinner. So the people who are there: Hope Ricky, Daniel Milton, Lloyd Morgan, Jacob, Leroy Peterson (The chef), Tim Frost, Felix Hector, Felix Davis
Felix Davis: So, Mr. Milton, why were you hitting that woman yesterday?
Daniel: None of your business.
Felix Davis: Actually, it is. I'm a police officer. And what you were doing was a crime. So, do you want to have a nice holiday here, or in the jail. If you just tell me, I'll just give you a warning.
Daniel: Dude, I don't even care. My lawyers would get me out of there. They are the best that you can get.
Jacob: So, Mr. Davis, where exactly is the woman you guys were talking about? Anna? I remember her saying that she would go look for her daughter, but it's been over 12 hours since she left looking for her.
Lloyd: Oh, I know, I know! It must be the ghosts who took her he's looking at Jacob, and again saying this in an incredibly annoying voice.
Tim: Don't joke about ghosts. They are all over us. We can't stop them. he's looking at the wall with an empty look
Jacob: See? At least this guy agrees with me..
Felix Davis: Come on guys, stop it. But are you serious? She's been missing for that long? I better go looking for her after the dinner.
Jacob: Yeah, for real. She just..... The chef comes in with the food
Leroy: So, tonight our main food is grilled pork. everyone looks very hungry
The chef drags the cloth off of the tray.
Leroy: Wait, what the hell?
Felix Hector: Holy fucking shit he pukes
You could see people puking on the ground after seeing it.
*Anna's sliced body is on the tray in tens of pieces. There's a message attached to her mouth.
Hello, dear people. As you may have noticed, Anna has had a little surgery. But she's still not happy
you have to open her stomach to make her happy. You'll also find a clue about where that little girl is and who I am. It's unnecessary to try to call the police or get out, since the guards are sleeping a never ending dream and your phones don't have signal here. Have fun playing my little game! Ps. The girl has 24 hours left to live.
Felix Davis reads the letter aloud.
Hope: That's just some sick shit. That looks so much grosser in real life than in the movies. Oh god.
Hope: Yo chef, is this some sick joke?
Leroy: No, no, I swear! The real food was in it just a minute ago!
Felix Davis: People, people, we have to relax! This is not over yet. You heard what that sick bastard wanted, if we're gonna get out of here and save that little girl's life, someone has to open her stomach. So, any volunteers?
Who's going to open her stomach? (This will affect the character mentally)
Felix Davis, Felix Hector, Tim Frost, Daniel Milton, Leroy Peterson, Hope Ricky, Jacob or Lloyd Morgan
Now, this part was a huge pain in the ass for me. I had to write it 3 times because my tablet lagged just when it would've been finished like an hour ago. Then I decided to try again, and it happened again. I seriously would've lost my temper if it would've lagged now
Felix Davis, he's a police officer and better equipt to handle it then the others.
Felix Davis
Davis seems to be more friendly with Anna and careful.
Felix Davis
If he's so eager to open her stomach then he should do it.
Lloyd Morgan
Have you read his character submission? I try to make the characters like they're introduced
We should have put a medical specialist into the story, this would have been a lot easier.
Felix Davis
That is... gross. ;~;
Anyway i'm enjoying your story.
Name: Drake Andrews.
Gender: Male
Age:18
Appearance: Wears a snapback, and a tank top and shorts. Always has headphones around him neck or around his ears.
Personality: He is always hyped up, he likes to party. He is confident in his music and he is a showoff, but he has a good heart and likes to impress people.
The reason why your character is here: DJ of the party.
Some other things you want to tell: He gets mad at others who disrespect his music, He does not mind playing for free as long as he gets known by others. He is a low profile DJ and is not that famous.
My character also has the last name Marsh xd
Lol, I picked it randomly without looking at the other profiles. I can switch that though.
Felix Hector
I can do it, i hope...
Oh my god. I AM THE BEST CHARACTER IN ANYTHING EVER!!! XD
True
Wait until the story goes on and your character will get some development. You may have noticed that some of the characters haven't got so much attention in my story, but don't worry, they will.
Thanks for submitting! :]
Lol. Yup.
Nice to know!
Don't worry if your character hasn't had so much development yet, since the story is just starting to begin your character will have some soon
Voting closed - Felix Davis will open her stomach
Poor him...
The new part will be up soon
Can't wait
I'm sorry, this part will be a little longer so it will still take some time, but now it's safe to say that it will come out in 30 minutes or less