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  • Fuck this, I'm gonna swim over there, go in the trees and figure out what the hell is going on

    Because I want him dead.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Forum Users:Jurassic Park Episode 5: In the Face of Death Part 4 Diego Group decision: Diego should be the one to go Diego: Ay! Why

  • Throw Kevin overboard.......i mean QUIET EVERYONE!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Forum Users:Jurassic Park Episode 5: In the Face of Death Part 4 Diego Group decision: Diego should be the one to go Diego: Ay! Why

  • Throw Kevin's racist ass overboard

    Why isn't that an option? At first, I was more on his side in the Hope/Kevin argument, but the last parts made me absolutely despise this guy. Anyway, since this is sadly not an option, I have to settle for

    QUIET EVERYONE!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Forum Users:Jurassic Park Episode 5: In the Face of Death Part 4 Diego Group decision: Diego should be the one to go Diego: Ay! Why

  • Fuck this, I'm gonna go swim over there, go in the trees and figure out what the hell is going on Awesome chapter!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Forum Users:Jurassic Park Episode 5: In the Face of Death Part 4 Diego Group decision: Diego should be the one to go Diego: Ay! Why

  • edited August 2015

    Forum Users: Jurassic Park Episode 5: In the Face of Death Part 5 (Not the last one)

    Auggie

    Auggie: QUIET EVERYONE!!!

    The group stops talking

    Jerry: Shit....I'm afraid we're screwed....

    Auggie: Why? What's gonna happen

    A Carnotaurus comes out of the jungle and makes it's way towards the boat with the reflection of the water revealing its shape

    Jerry: ...

    The Baby starts crying

    Kevin: SHUT THE FUCKING BABY UP!!!! Kevin charges towards Helena but Diego tackles him and they struggle on the ground as the baby cries

    Jerry: HERE IT COMES!!!!

    The Carnotaurus rams into the boat, causing to flip over in the water

    Jane

    Hope: I don't think I can take this rain much longer....I think we found them..... Hope sees a tipped over boat with a Carnotaurus attacking it

    Jane: Oh My God!

    Hope: Shhhhh

    The two see another Carnotaurus come out of the jungle and it starts biting on the bottom of the flipped over boat

    Jane: What are we gonna do?

    Jane sees Hope filming

    Jane: God Dammit Hope! We need to do something!

    Hope: Shuts Camera Right, we need to help them.

    Jane: Any IDEAS?

    Hope: Ummmm Sees Jane glaring at him We could distract the Dinos but that's pretty dangero-

    Jane: Let's do it.....

    THE GROUP

    Jerry: Hold your breath everyone!

    Kyle: I can't!

    Irvin: Yes you can! Remember that time when- One of the Carnotauruses presses the flipped over boat even more under water

    Kyle: Shit! Kyle swims out from under the boat to get some air

    Auggie: KID NO!

    A Carnotaurus picks up Kyle's head with its jaws and tosses Kyle's body to the other Carnotaurus which crunches on his body

    Irvin: KYLE!!!!! NO!!!!! Irvin goes to swim out but Ash grabs him

    Ash: I'm sorry bro...I'm so sorry...

    After bobbing back up, The Carnotaurus goes back to pressing them underwater

    Kevin: It's all the baby's fucking fault!

    Robb: Dude, shut the fuck up!!!!

    Alicia: DADDY!!!!! Alicia starts crying from remembering Geoffrey

    Auggie tries making his way towards Alicia to comfort her

    Helena: DAMMIT, SOMEONE GET THOSE THINGS AWAY!!!!!

    The Two Carnotauruses roar and walk away from the flipped over boat

    Elsa: Thank God....

    Jerry is at an angle where he can see where the Carnotauruses are going

    Jerry: Who the hell is tha-

    Hope

    Hope: HEY!!!!! Standing at the side of the river using his flash on the Carnotauruses HEYYYY!!! COME GET ME SUCKERS!!!!!

    Jane runs out and starts yelling too

    Jane: HEYYYYY

    Hope: Jane, Get out of here!

    Jane: Hell no, I'm helping like it or no-

    Hope: WATCH OUT!!!!!

    One of the Carnotauruses locks its jaws around Jane and throws her up in the air and then crunches her body as it did with Kyle

    Hope: JANE!!!!!

    The other Carnotaurus tries eating Hope but he dives into the deeper water and starts swimming down river but the Carnotaurus sees him and goes after him

    Jerry

    Both Carnotauruses are trying to get Hope who's fumbling around in the deep water

    Jerry: Oh Boy....

    Jerry sees that the person in the river is Hope

    Jerry: It's Hope!

    Kevin: Hope? The Pussy?

    Jerry: I need to help him!

    Robb: Why!? He's one person, and we're a group!

    Alicia: Is Jane with him?

    Jerry: She....didn't make it......

    Alicia: DAMMIT Auggie conforts her

    Jerry feels his backpack fall off his shoulder into the water

    Jerry: Shit....

    I have some stuff in my pocket I can use to get the Carnos away... After all, I know how they work....We're a group...Hope is a nice kid, not perfect but still nice, but my backpack has fallen into the water under the boat....my backpack doesn't have much....but it has the DNA for my creations: The Carnotauruses, If I live through this, I can use that DNA and sell it for millions, or I can use it to create more Carnotaruses and make a new Jurassic Park MY WAY, I don't have to answer to Hammond, Wu, InGen, Masrani, ANYONE...but Hope is a person, he's practically just a boy...... God DAMMIT, I have to choose between a kid and my basic pets in a way...if I could train them imagine the potential...but HOPE.....WHY CAN'T I CHOOSE DAMMIT!!!!

    Save Hope OR Just get the backpack

  • [Just get the backpack]

    Kyle: Shit! Kyle swims out from under the boat to get some air

    Auggie: KID NO!

    A Carnotaurus picks up Ash's head with its jaws and tosses Ash's body to the other Carnotaurus which crunches on his body

    Irvin: KYLE!!!!! NO!!!!! Irvin goes to swim out but Ash grabs him

    One of the Carnotauruses locks its jaws around Jane and throws her up in the air and then crunches her body as it did with Kyle

    So did Ash die or did Kyle die????

    But seriously, damn Carnos. How can we help Hope? Wait, we can't. We have no flares, or anything like that. Plus, the backpack can be a lifesaver if a raptor jumps on his back, it'll rip the pack off, like in The Lost World.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

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  • edited August 2015

    Oh Shit, thanks for putting that out lol, It's Kyle...RIP

    [Just get the backpack] Kyle: Shit! Kyle swims out from under the boat to get some air Auggie: KID NO! A Carnotaurus pic

  • Save Hope

    Oh. Uh-oh.

    Nope. Gotta save Hope.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

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  • edited August 2015

    I'm guessing you don't want another one of your characters to bite the dust

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Save Hope Oh. Uh-oh. Nope. Gotta save Hope.

  • No, sir, I do not.

    Kill Kevin instead.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    I'm guessing you don't want another one of your characters to bite the dust

  • Well the thing is that while Kevin has no brains your characters have....no hope.

    Badum-tiz

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    No, sir, I do not. Kill Kevin instead.

  • Save Hope

    Saltlick123 posted: »

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  • Save Hope

    I have to say, this part marks the part where Hope fully redeemed himself in my eyes for his earlier cowardice. Saving him after he just saved the group should be mandatory. Kevin on the other hand once again proved that he is a terrible person. I mean, he just attempted to kill a fucking baby! Whatever happens in the rest of this episode, he no longer deserves to leave this island alive. Hope on the other hand is now officially a cool guy again.

    Also:

    If I live through this, I can use that DNA and sell it for millions, or I can use it to create more Carnotaruses and make a new Jurassic Park MY WAY, I don't have to answer to Hammond, Wu, InGen, Masrani, ANYONE

    Yeah, Jerry, because making a new Jurassic Park is always a great idea, right?

    Saltlick123 posted: »

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  • edited September 2015

    Save Hope

    Kevin started this story as a pretty kewl dood. Hope started as a picture loving coward.

    Kevin's ending this story as a dickbag (apparently). Hope's ending this story a hero.

    I have hope for both of em (bias bias something Kevin bias), and Hope finally redeemed himself somewhat. Swear to god by the end of this these two will be the broest of bros. After all, Hope really isn't a pussy anymore after this stunt (atleast I hope so in Kevin's eyes xD).

    Saltlick123 posted: »

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  • Sorry for the long wait guys, I just finished up my other fanfic and I was having self-esteem issues whenever I tried writing...

    Forum Users: Jurassic Park Episode 5: In the Face of Death Part 6 (Next one is the last one)

    I can’t leave Hope like this…HOPEfully the group won’t lose HOPE in this dire situation…

    Jerry: HOPE! Jerry gets out of the boat and starts swimming

    Hope: AHHHHHH

    Carnotauruses slash the water intruding to get Hope

    Jerry: I’m coming! Jerry starts running on the side of the river but an arrow flies by his face

    Mr. Craze: Me KILL!!!!!!

    Jerry jumps in the water and starts swimming

    Auggie

    After hearing Mr. Craze’s scream he sees Tomas carrying explosives through the trees

    Auggie: Son of a bitch…. stay here…

    Diego: Si señor

    Kevin: That’s YES in English

    Auggie: Just shut up!Auggie gets out of the boat as Alicia looks on and the group gets closer together

    Tomas: Singing Gonna kill these motherfuckers, piss on any remains of them, and then feed what’s left to the Dinos…

    Auggie: THAT RIGHT!? Auggie tackles Tomas and they start fighting on the river bank

    Tomas: Hey there, you must be that guy who had his little girl fucked up the ass then killed by Hugo, right?

    Auggie: I’ll fucking kill you… Auggie goes for a punch but Tomas grabs hold of his arm and puts him in an arm bar

    Tomas: All of this fighting really gets tiring, doesn’t it?

    Auggie lifts Tomas up and slams him on a rock

    Tomas: Wow, not bad for a tourist…

    Tomas roundhouse kicks Auggie but Auggie comes back with a few punches

    Tomas: CRAZE!!!! Craze turns to look at Auggie and starts shooting arrows at him, and charges allowing Jerry to get to Hope

    Jerry: HEY!!! Shines flashlight and one of the Carnotauruses roar

    Hope: HELPPP!!!

    Caronotaurus roar

    Jerry: I got you! Jerry pulls Hope up and they then go deep into the water again and start swimming away from the Carnotaursues back to the boat as one of the Carnos sees Auggie, Tomas, and Craze

    Auggie: My girls are dead because of you…I’ll take both of you down Auggie uppercuts Tomas and kicks Craze away before Tomas kicks Auggie in the groin and Craze shoots an arrow into Auggies abdomen….

    Auggie: fuck…

    Tomas: You put up a decent fight.. but starts laughing you and all of your friends are going to die!

    Craze: ME MUST EAT!!!

    One of the Carnotauruses charges towards them and eats Craze, this causes Craze’s bow and a few arrows to be dropped and Tomas and Auggie to stumble back

    Tomas runs back up to the tree line and picks up his dropped explosives and starts heading into the boats direction

    Auggie: Shit…

    Auggie picks up Craze’s bow and arrows and aims at Tomas

    Kevin: We’re going to die…

    Robb: Shut up.

    Kevin: It’s fact by now..we’re going to die….

    Robb: Shut up…

    Kevin: Make me…

    Robb: You’ve been looking for a fight haven’t you?

    Elsa: Robb please

    Robb: No, assholes gotta be assholes…

    Kevin: I’m trying to be a realist here…

    Robb: And I’m trying to be a non-douchebag here…

    Kevin: Fuck you…

    Irvin: EVERYONE SHUT THE FUCK UP RIGHT NOW

    Ash stares at irvin

    Hope: well…Thanks Jerry

    Jerry: No problem

    Kevin starts yelling

    Kevin: NO PROBLEM!? YOU COULD HAVE GOTTEN US KILLED!!!

    Hope: That took balls at least

    Robb: Let’s just chill everybody…

    Kevin: CHILL!? CHILL!?!?

    The Carnotauruses hear the yelling and turn back, heading towards the boat

    Jerry: Shut up…

    Kevin: WHAT!?

    Alicia: They’re coming!

    Tomas: HEY SUCKAS!!! Throws a grenade at the boat, causing the boat to bump

    Auggie aims at Tomas’s head

    Tomas: IT WAS REAL NICE KNOWING YOU ALL Auggie headshots Tomas, causing him to drop his explosives and Auggie makes his way to the boat and picks the explosives up as the Carnotauruses roar

    Auggie: come on… GET OUT OF THE BOAT

    Diego: Que?

    Auggie: GET OUT OF THE BOAT AND HEAD TO THE TREES, trust me!!! Auggie throws the bow and arrows over to Jerry

    Jerry, Hope, and Kevin get out- the rest of the group follows them as Auggie starts spreading the explosives and sees the oil in the boat and picks up some matches as the Carnotauruses are almost at the boat

    Auggie is holding his wound as Alicia turns around and makes eye contact with him

    Auggie: this ones for my family...

    Auggie lights up the matches and causes the explosives to go off, causing the Carnotauruses to run away from the resulting light and fire

    Alicia: NO!!!!

    Helena: Shhh hugs Alicia, I know but he's with his family and your father now...

    Kevin and Hope walk a little away from the group

    Kevin: What the fuck just happened!?

    Hope: He just saved us....

    Kevin: And he just died, adding on to the list of other people who's deaths your responsible for... '

    Hope: Oh come on...

    Kevin: Harry, Jane, HIM, FUCK YOU HOPE!!! Kevin picks up a sharpened knife and tackles Hope, trying to drive the rock in his chest

    Jerry: FUCK Jerry pulls an arrow back in the bow and aims at Kevin as he gets closer to Hope's chest with the rock

    Robb: WOAH Robb runs towards the two

    Is Kevin really going to kill Hope!? Is this just a sick joke or something,and if not- will Robb be able to get him off in time?

    Jerry: Shoot Kevin OR Let Robb try and reach the two

  • [Shoot Kevin] Yes, yes, yes. Must kill. Hail Jerry.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

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  • Let Robb reach the two

    Goodbye Mr.Craze. You and Tom will be missed.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

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  • edited November 2015

    Let Robb try and reach the two

    Why can't we be friends? Why can't we be friends? Why can't we be friends? Why can't we be friends?

    Saltlick123 posted: »

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  • edited November 2015

    Shoot Kevin More death. Great Chapter!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

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  • Shoot Kevin

    Seriously, aside from being a racist, Kevin is just an overall piece of shit by now and I want him dead for this. Even if this is just some sick joke to prove once more what a bastard he is, it wouldn't change my decision. I also really grew to like Hope over the last parts and I'm not going to risk his life.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

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  • Shoot Kevin

    Saltlick123 posted: »

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  • How about let's not? Robb pls halp

    Also, that's one weird knife Kevin's got. It's both a knife, AND a rock! :D

    Saltlick123 posted: »

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  • Anyone here?

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    .

  • I've been trying to get it but keep facing difficulties, I will finish it though everybody and I apologize for the delay and disappointment

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    Anyone here?

  • Sweet.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    I've been trying to get it but keep facing difficulties, I will finish it though everybody and I apologize for the delay and disappointment

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