Episode 3 - Beyond The Fear [Episode 4/5]
(?) You chose to fight the bandits.
"We're risking everyday now just because we live." I sai… mored. "We cannot let them get these kids." I took my gun out. Everyone prepared their weapons. I heard noisy feet outside.
"They are here. Prepare you weapons! When they will come too close, jump out and try to get them." said Devyn.
"Jesus, where the fuck did they go?" asked one of the bandits. We could hear their voices pretty near to us - it means that they are passing the corridor. I held my gun tightly. They're getting closer...
"I doubt they hid that good. Jordan and his people are already searching for the kids. They are boneless, I'm sure they will raise the white flag once he'll find them." another bandit replied. Now's the time!
I jumped out and shot at those guys. I got one right in the head, and the other one took a bullet in his neck. In a fit of rage, another bandit took a pistol an… [view original content]
Alright, the voting is closed. It's pretty obvious that Gregory and his crew will save camp members. I'll have lunch soon and probably start writing the LAST chapter of Episode 3 after this. I'm really excited! Perhaps I'll start Episode 4 today, who knows.
Alright, the voting is closed. It's pretty obvious that Gregory and his crew will save camp members. I'll have lunch soon and probably start… more writing the LAST chapter of Episode 3 after this. I'm really excited! Perhaps I'll start Episode 4 today, who knows.
Emiline:
Age of death: Mid to late teens.
Status: Dead.
Cause of death: Shot point black in the head by a bandit. The group appears to be saddened after her death.
Killed by: Bandit. Group (indirectly caused.) Herself (caused.)
Rachelle:
Age of death: Mid teens to early 20s.
Status: Undead.
Cause of death: devoured by walkers.
Killed by: walkers (caused.)
Fredo:
Age of death: Late teens.
Status: Presumed dead.
Cause of death: Brutally massacred by spark.
Killed by: The group (indirectly caused.) Spark.
Spark:
Age of death: Late teens to mid 20s.
Status: Dead.
Cause of death: Shot in the brain by Gregory, as a form of revenge.
Killed by: The group (caused) Gregory. Fredo (indirectly caused.)
Alright, the voting is closed. It's pretty obvious that Gregory and his crew will save camp members. I'll have lunch soon and probably start… more writing the LAST chapter of Episode 3 after this. I'm really excited! Perhaps I'll start Episode 4 today, who knows.
Hi so I submitted a character quite a while ago and they still haven't appeared on the characters waiting bit.
Do you just accept certain people or something I was just wondering!
Emiline:
Age of death: Mid to late teens.
Status: Dead.
Cause of death: Shot point black in the head by a bandit. The group appears to be… more saddened after her death.
Killed by: Bandit. Group (indirectly caused.) Herself (caused.)
Rachelle:
Age of death: Mid teens to early 20s.
Status: Undead.
Cause of death: devoured by walkers.
Killed by: walkers (caused.)
Fredo:
Age of death: Late teens.
Status: Presumed dead.
Cause of death: Brutally massacred by spark.
Killed by: The group (indirectly caused.) Spark.
Spark:
Age of death: Late teens to mid 20s.
Status: Dead.
Cause of death: Shot in the brain by Gregory, as a form of revenge.
Killed by: The group (caused) Gregory. Fredo (indirectly caused.)
Hi so I submitted a character quite a while ago and they still haven't appeared on the characters waiting bit.
Do you just accept certain people or something I was just wondering!
Emiline:
Age of death: Mid to late teens.
Status: Dead.
Cause of death: Shot point black in the head by a bandit. The group appears to be… more saddened after her death.
Killed by: Bandit. Group (indirectly caused.) Herself (caused.)
Rachelle:
Age of death: Mid teens to early 20s.
Status: Undead.
Cause of death: devoured by walkers.
Killed by: walkers (caused.)
Fredo:
Age of death: Late teens.
Status: Presumed dead.
Cause of death: Brutally massacred by spark.
Killed by: The group (indirectly caused.) Spark.
Spark:
Age of death: Late teens to mid 20s.
Status: Dead.
Cause of death: Shot in the brain by Gregory, as a form of revenge.
Killed by: The group (caused) Gregory. Fredo (indirectly caused.)
I approached the nearest bandit that was trying to shoot James and put a bullet in his leg and stomach. I tried to aim for the head, but it was hard to make a headshot because of all the mess around. James walked to me trying to say something, but suddenly he screamed and fell down. Few bullets came through his body from a gun of dying raider and he shaked on the ground in pain and agony. Bernard whined and jumped on the bandit in a fit of rage. Husky ripped out his throat in a moment.
"Bernard, here!" I yelled. Dog ran to me, helping me to fight the others. I've shot another one, and now I got him right in the head. I could see Arabella and Tess stabing another bandits.
"YOU WILL FUCKING REGRET IT!" shouted brigand and pointed gun at young Josh that he still held. Before Sips could take bandit down, little boy fell down with a stream of blood coming down his hand. Another stream swept from his neck.
"ASSWIPE!" screamed Chris, pushing down raider ad beating the shit out of him. I dragged Sips away right before creeper clamped his teeth on man's shoulder. "NOOO! LET ME DIE!" he cried in misery and despair. I saw two bandits running away through the crowd of monsters. I throwed gun to Chris.
"Do whatever you want. I don't care." I said and left him. I knew, that however depressed he would be, he wouldn't kill himself. He is just shocked. I ran to the teens and saw Elian trying to save Kevin from a grip of creeper, but they both were pushed down and buried under rotten bodies. I saw Ben, Travis, Erica and Mr Parker fighting with all means at hand.
"GET OVER HERE! WE'RE LEAVING!" I shouted. Tess, Zed, Arabella and Devyn with Devin already went through the horde and they were waving to us. We all ran to them, but Erica stumpled and went down. Ben, the closest person to her, turned around.
"BEN! HELP HER!" I begged. But he panicked and wuickly got back to us. Suddenly, when creeper was about to tear her apart, Chris shot it right in the head. Erica got in hysteria, but he grabbed her and reached us.
"Come on, let's go!" he said.
All that was in front of our eyes are symmetrical rows of pines, towering above us. Crows croaked, flying in the treetops. And somewhere down below, on a filthy ground, eleven tired people and one dog were plodding forward into the creepy maze of tall trunks and green leaves. We decided to stop and catch our breath, discuss everything that happened.
"Why did they even come here? Why did they need you?" Zed asked Travis.
"Those bandits... they used us. We are young and weak. They took all the food we had and started to scoff us. I guess they were just sadists. They were hurting us, using our girls for.. Well, you know what I mean... They forced us to watch." quietly spoke Travis. I shivered. God, that's horrible!
"Why didn't you just leave?" Zed continued asking.
"You think we never tried it? We did. But all those guys you've seen today is just a small part of everything. They have bigger organisation. They are more powerful then you think they are. Most people left those area, they were the only left and it was easy for them to control us. You think they would loose their little toys so easy?" replied Ben.
"That's still not right. You could try to do something before we got you!" said Tess.
"I know. We've been too stupid. All we did was gaining problems and now we piled them on you. We should care about eachother, do everything we can to survive." answered Ben with a deep sigh in the end. I frowned.
"Care about eachother, huh? Why didn't you step in for Erica then?" I asked angrily. Boy just receded, mumbling something.
"I-, I-, I had to s-save myself! I'm sorry! I just panicked" he begged. I looked at him severely.
"Well, be ready to save yourself now." I said.
"Guys, stop! Judging everyone is now the least thing we should do. We need to move forward. That's it. We live in times where past doesn't mean anything, even if this past was five minutes ago." replied Arabella.
And everyone went silent. Only crows could be heard. We all were agitated, but at the same time we were to tired to argue or just say something. Sun slowly sat down and we knew that we have to spend the night here.
"Guys, I have to tell you something." suddenly said Devin.
"What is it?" asked Arabella.
"I'm bitten."
[YOUR CHOICES]
Stubborn - You waited and kept unlocking the door.
"Physical and mental health are different things, Gregory. People can have clear mind and dirty wounds. But they can also have damaged mind and sound body. You understand what I'm talking about." spoke Zed.
"Are you trying to say...?" I asked in a shock. Zed sighed.
"She's driving insane, Greg."
Woman looked at us with indulgence. She smiled.
"All I can do - is to offer you. Your choice is to accept or not. I'm not pushing you. I can give you some time to think." she said. We moved enough far from people, ready to discuss everything.
"We cannot say no. This is a chance of our lives!" said Ben.
"Sounds like a trap." disagreed Sips.
"This is the only direction we can follow. What else can we do? Just keep moving on every time? I think this offer worths a try." said Tess.
I big puddle of blood flowed on the floor. Loud screams of pain filled this place with horror and agony. Erica closed her eyes, sobbing in the corner. Mr Parker tried to comfort her.
"ARRRRRGH STOP! I CAN'T! NO!" yelled the guy.
"Stop this shit! Be patient! That's the only way!" I answered. I saw a grimace of hurt on his face.
NEXT TIME ON A BRAVE NEW WORLD
"Physical and mental health are different things, Gregory. People can have clear mind and dirty wounds. Bu… moret they can also have damaged mind and sound body. You understand what I'm talking about." spoke Zed.
"Are you trying to say...?" I asked in a shock. Zed sighed.
"She's driving insane, Greg."
Woman looked at us with indulgence. She smiled.
"All I can do - is to offer you. Your choice is to accept or not. I'm not pushing you. I can give you some time to think." she said. We moved enough far from people, ready to discuss everything.
"We cannot say no. This is a chance of our lives!" said Ben.
"Sounds like a trap." disagreed Sips.
"This is the only direction we can follow. What else can we do? Just keep moving on every time? I think this offer worths a try." said Tess.
I big puddle of blood flowed on the floor. Loud screams of pain filled this place with horror and agony. Erica clo… [view original content]
Episode 3 - Beyond Our Fear [Part 5/5]
(?) You chose to save camp members.
No, I won't let my friends die!
I approached the nearest… more bandit that was trying to shoot James and put a bullet in his leg and stomach. I tried to aim for the head, but it was hard to make a headshot because of all the mess around. James walked to me trying to say something, but suddenly he screamed and fell down. Few bullets came through his body from a gun of dying raider and he shaked on the ground in pain and agony. Bernard whined and jumped on the bandit in a fit of rage. Husky ripped out his throat in a moment.
"Bernard, here!" I yelled. Dog ran to me, helping me to fight the others. I've shot another one, and now I got him right in the head. I could see Arabella and Tess stabing another bandits.
"YOU WILL FUCKING REGRET IT!" shouted brigand and pointed gun at young Josh that he still held. Before Sips could take bandit down, little boy fell down w… [view original content]
Jesus, like half people died! Where's Megan gone? I noticed you mixed up Ep 3-4 of TWD, Erica was Clem when Ben did not help her...And devin is bitten now! Maybe we will cut the bit Anywa, is Eric the only lid alive? Exept for Ben and Trevis.anyway...well now you can feed 11 people lol
Comments
I want the bandits to die the same way Carver died.
[Fight bandits and save camp members]
[Fight the bandit and save camp member]
We are kids! Camon! Ben is going to leave anyway LOL
[Fight creepers and save teens]
You aren't being a good one. You are thinking about youself and not kids
Hope at least some kids leave. Ben and Mr. Parker are going to live THIS for sure.
Alright, the voting is closed. It's pretty obvious that Gregory and his crew will save camp members. I'll have lunch soon and probably start writing the LAST chapter of Episode 3 after this. I'm really excited! Perhaps I'll start Episode 4 today, who knows.
You should make a list of the deceased.
Please do.
Emiline:
Age of death: Mid to late teens.
Status: Dead.
Cause of death: Shot point black in the head by a bandit. The group appears to be saddened after her death.
Killed by: Bandit. Group (indirectly caused.) Herself (caused.)
Rachelle:
Age of death: Mid teens to early 20s.
Status: Undead.
Cause of death: devoured by walkers.
Killed by: walkers (caused.)
Fredo:
Age of death: Late teens.
Status: Presumed dead.
Cause of death: Brutally massacred by spark.
Killed by: The group (indirectly caused.) Spark.
Spark:
Age of death: Late teens to mid 20s.
Status: Dead.
Cause of death: Shot in the brain by Gregory, as a form of revenge.
Killed by: The group (caused) Gregory. Fredo (indirectly caused.)
Hi so I submitted a character quite a while ago and they still haven't appeared on the characters waiting bit.
Do you just accept certain people or something I was just wondering!
This story is consuming my life right now.
I'll do it in the end of the Season, don't worry.
You should check in the description, see if his or her name is on the "waiting to be introduced" section.
Actually, Fredo is 28 years old, but I didn't point that out in the fanfic, so yeah.
What is your character's name? Maybe I just missed it. And sadly, submission box is closed for now.
Maybe Josh and Emiline would have survived if we gave those kids over.
Goddammit, Ben.
Hue.
I said try and be a good person.
Way to burst my bubble.
Joshua died. starts to tear up
nice man
so spark shot joan leg?
Charlie
Its not a problem if you cannot include her but if you can then thank you!
SOON.
Episode 3 - Beyond Our Fear [Part 5/5]
(?) You chose to save camp members.
No, I won't let my friends die!
I approached the nearest bandit that was trying to shoot James and put a bullet in his leg and stomach. I tried to aim for the head, but it was hard to make a headshot because of all the mess around. James walked to me trying to say something, but suddenly he screamed and fell down. Few bullets came through his body from a gun of dying raider and he shaked on the ground in pain and agony. Bernard whined and jumped on the bandit in a fit of rage. Husky ripped out his throat in a moment.
"Bernard, here!" I yelled. Dog ran to me, helping me to fight the others. I've shot another one, and now I got him right in the head. I could see Arabella and Tess stabing another bandits.
"YOU WILL FUCKING REGRET IT!" shouted brigand and pointed gun at young Josh that he still held. Before Sips could take bandit down, little boy fell down with a stream of blood coming down his hand. Another stream swept from his neck.
"ASSWIPE!" screamed Chris, pushing down raider ad beating the shit out of him. I dragged Sips away right before creeper clamped his teeth on man's shoulder. "NOOO! LET ME DIE!" he cried in misery and despair. I saw two bandits running away through the crowd of monsters. I throwed gun to Chris.
"Do whatever you want. I don't care." I said and left him. I knew, that however depressed he would be, he wouldn't kill himself. He is just shocked. I ran to the teens and saw Elian trying to save Kevin from a grip of creeper, but they both were pushed down and buried under rotten bodies. I saw Ben, Travis, Erica and Mr Parker fighting with all means at hand.
"GET OVER HERE! WE'RE LEAVING!" I shouted. Tess, Zed, Arabella and Devyn with Devin already went through the horde and they were waving to us. We all ran to them, but Erica stumpled and went down. Ben, the closest person to her, turned around.
"BEN! HELP HER!" I begged. But he panicked and wuickly got back to us. Suddenly, when creeper was about to tear her apart, Chris shot it right in the head. Erica got in hysteria, but he grabbed her and reached us.
"Come on, let's go!" he said.
All that was in front of our eyes are symmetrical rows of pines, towering above us. Crows croaked, flying in the treetops. And somewhere down below, on a filthy ground, eleven tired people and one dog were plodding forward into the creepy maze of tall trunks and green leaves. We decided to stop and catch our breath, discuss everything that happened.
"Why did they even come here? Why did they need you?" Zed asked Travis.
"Those bandits... they used us. We are young and weak. They took all the food we had and started to scoff us. I guess they were just sadists. They were hurting us, using our girls for.. Well, you know what I mean... They forced us to watch." quietly spoke Travis. I shivered. God, that's horrible!
"Why didn't you just leave?" Zed continued asking.
"You think we never tried it? We did. But all those guys you've seen today is just a small part of everything. They have bigger organisation. They are more powerful then you think they are. Most people left those area, they were the only left and it was easy for them to control us. You think they would loose their little toys so easy?" replied Ben.
"That's still not right. You could try to do something before we got you!" said Tess.
"I know. We've been too stupid. All we did was gaining problems and now we piled them on you. We should care about eachother, do everything we can to survive." answered Ben with a deep sigh in the end. I frowned.
"Care about eachother, huh? Why didn't you step in for Erica then?" I asked angrily. Boy just receded, mumbling something.
"I-, I-, I had to s-save myself! I'm sorry! I just panicked" he begged. I looked at him severely.
"Well, be ready to save yourself now." I said.
"Guys, stop! Judging everyone is now the least thing we should do. We need to move forward. That's it. We live in times where past doesn't mean anything, even if this past was five minutes ago." replied Arabella.
And everyone went silent. Only crows could be heard. We all were agitated, but at the same time we were to tired to argue or just say something. Sun slowly sat down and we knew that we have to spend the night here.
"Guys, I have to tell you something." suddenly said Devin.
"What is it?" asked Arabella.
"I'm bitten."
[YOUR CHOICES]
Stubborn - You waited and kept unlocking the door.
Hospitality - You let teens spend the night.
Daring - You fought bandits.
Loyality - You saved camp members.
NEXT TIME ON A BRAVE NEW WORLD
"Physical and mental health are different things, Gregory. People can have clear mind and dirty wounds. But they can also have damaged mind and sound body. You understand what I'm talking about." spoke Zed.
"Are you trying to say...?" I asked in a shock. Zed sighed.
"She's driving insane, Greg."
Woman looked at us with indulgence. She smiled.
"All I can do - is to offer you. Your choice is to accept or not. I'm not pushing you. I can give you some time to think." she said. We moved enough far from people, ready to discuss everything.
"We cannot say no. This is a chance of our lives!" said Ben.
"Sounds like a trap." disagreed Sips.
"This is the only direction we can follow. What else can we do? Just keep moving on every time? I think this offer worths a try." said Tess.
I big puddle of blood flowed on the floor. Loud screams of pain filled this place with horror and agony. Erica closed her eyes, sobbing in the corner. Mr Parker tried to comfort her.
"ARRRRRGH STOP! I CAN'T! NO!" yelled the guy.
"Stop this shit! Be patient! That's the only way!" I answered. I saw a grimace of hurt on his face.
Arabella looked at this with a pitiful glance.
EPISODE 4 - EVERYTHING WE LOST
Sorry brah, but she's not submitted. Maybe you did something wrong, I dunno. Don't worry, you can submit your character for Season 2 later.
NOOOO MY CHARACTER GOT SHOT (AND PROBABLY NOW DEAD)
Great Episode. Can't wait for Episode 4!!
We could've prevented those people dying. I fuckin' liked that guy Josh...
Guilt...
Thanks. Well, we still have Bernard!
Look after him haha
Another great episode! Need the next one!
JK, take your time. :-)
Goodbye.. Son... I'll frickin' miss ya alright.. I'll.. InKennyWeTrust why do you do everything I say? All I can do now is wait for Sips to die.
So did Ellian and Kevin die?
Megan wasn't mentioned after she fell. Did she die along those teens?
Jesus, like half people died! Where's Megan gone? I noticed you mixed up Ep 3-4 of TWD, Erica was Clem when Ben did not help her...And devin is bitten now! Maybe we will cut the bit
Anywa, is Eric the only lid alive? Exept for Ben and Trevis.anyway...well now you can feed 11 people lol
This episode was AWESOME! I loved the choices, they were kind of difficult.
Now, on to the next cool episode!
Full speed ahead!
Oh thought I did.
awkward
Thanks for your comments. I'm so happy! I'm not sure yet, but MAYBE new Episode will be today. Or maybe not. I need some rest, so probably not.
Get some rest, Kenny.
Being tired = worse episodes.