Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 1
The Final Fight Begins.....
Jacob
Holy shit, I nearly died, and Lynne came out of… more no where and killed Rick!
Lynne: Fine, I'll walk away, I've never cared about them, I don't even know two of these guys
Jacob: What the fuck! You heartless bitch!
Lynne: I'm not sorry Jacob, If anything I should come over there and kick your balls
Ethan: I think he's had enough of Ball torture....
Sparker: WOOHA!!! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!! Dials Number Vicente spread the guards out, Deploy all of them! As much as I love seeing your "friends" in agony, I like you so DON'T YOU DARRRREEEEEE WALK AWAY FROM ME LYNNE!!!
Lynne: Okay, Fine Pulls out pistol
Sparker: Move and you're dead
Lynne: You sure about that? Fires Shot
Sparker: Ahhh Shiat!!!!!!!!!!!! You missed Biiiatchh,
Lynne: No I didn't.....
Sparker: ...
Elsa picks up a gun and aims at Sparker...
Sparker: Oh Shit..… [view original content]
Holy shit Rebecca! I knew that she was capable of that but still... no comfortable prison cell for poor Vicente
And for Javier: Nah, Adios Bitch
Great part, probably one of my favourites in the story.
Hopeless din't have to die.........You guys sealed his fate with that choice though...... And I feel like people have forgotten about Arin lol, And I never planned to send Vicente there, From the moment I saw him and Rebeccas character, I knew she was gonna kill him at some point....
To be honest i did'nt see much for hopeless in fact i predicted his/her death would be the first
And arins death was AWESOME......ly sad … moreyes thats what i meant....... awesomely sad
Yeah im kinda sad Vicente isent joining the party at Limbo ....... But wat eves
Hopeless din't have to die.........You guys sealed his fate with that choice though...... And I feel like people have forgotten about Arin l… moreol, And I never planned to send Vicente there, From the moment I saw him and Rebeccas character, I knew she was gonna kill him at some point....
From the moment I wrote her, I knew she would play a part in Vics downfall. Still took me by surprise
Well, Becs put her tust in the wrong psychotic clown-terrorist IMO. Twilight Sparker can't be trust!
Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 1
The Final Fight Begins.....
Jacob
Holy shit, I nearly died, and Lynne came out of… more no where and killed Rick!
Lynne: Fine, I'll walk away, I've never cared about them, I don't even know two of these guys
Jacob: What the fuck! You heartless bitch!
Lynne: I'm not sorry Jacob, If anything I should come over there and kick your balls
Ethan: I think he's had enough of Ball torture....
Sparker: WOOHA!!! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!! Dials Number Vicente spread the guards out, Deploy all of them! As much as I love seeing your "friends" in agony, I like you so DON'T YOU DARRRREEEEEE WALK AWAY FROM ME LYNNE!!!
Lynne: Okay, Fine Pulls out pistol
Sparker: Move and you're dead
Lynne: You sure about that? Fires Shot
Sparker: Ahhh Shiat!!!!!!!!!!!! You missed Biiiatchh,
Lynne: No I didn't.....
Sparker: ...
Elsa picks up a gun and aims at Sparker...
Sparker: Oh Shit..… [view original content]
Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 1
The Final Fight Begins.....
Jacob
Holy shit, I nearly died, and Lynne came out of… more no where and killed Rick!
Lynne: Fine, I'll walk away, I've never cared about them, I don't even know two of these guys
Jacob: What the fuck! You heartless bitch!
Lynne: I'm not sorry Jacob, If anything I should come over there and kick your balls
Ethan: I think he's had enough of Ball torture....
Sparker: WOOHA!!! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!! Dials Number Vicente spread the guards out, Deploy all of them! As much as I love seeing your "friends" in agony, I like you so DON'T YOU DARRRREEEEEE WALK AWAY FROM ME LYNNE!!!
Lynne: Okay, Fine Pulls out pistol
Sparker: Move and you're dead
Lynne: You sure about that? Fires Shot
Sparker: Ahhh Shiat!!!!!!!!!!!! You missed Biiiatchh,
Lynne: No I didn't.....
Sparker: ...
Elsa picks up a gun and aims at Sparker...
Sparker: Oh Shit..… [view original content]
Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 1
The Final Fight Begins.....
Jacob
Holy shit, I nearly died, and Lynne came out of… more no where and killed Rick!
Lynne: Fine, I'll walk away, I've never cared about them, I don't even know two of these guys
Jacob: What the fuck! You heartless bitch!
Lynne: I'm not sorry Jacob, If anything I should come over there and kick your balls
Ethan: I think he's had enough of Ball torture....
Sparker: WOOHA!!! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!! Dials Number Vicente spread the guards out, Deploy all of them! As much as I love seeing your "friends" in agony, I like you so DON'T YOU DARRRREEEEEE WALK AWAY FROM ME LYNNE!!!
Lynne: Okay, Fine Pulls out pistol
Sparker: Move and you're dead
Lynne: You sure about that? Fires Shot
Sparker: Ahhh Shiat!!!!!!!!!!!! You missed Biiiatchh,
Lynne: No I didn't.....
Sparker: ...
Elsa picks up a gun and aims at Sparker...
Sparker: Oh Shit..… [view original content]
Sparker: Good to see you too babe Kisses HmmHmmmHmmm now let's do this....
Rebecca: What about Alex and Zack?
Sparker: Hopefully they can take out a few of the Skrubs but if it comes down to it, they're Expendable. We stick to the plan, Vicente's or more of our men are charging this place so the skrubs shouldn't last for long...
Rebecca: Sweet
Sparker: Not as sweet as you HaHa Oh He Ha Ha,and I thought my jokes were bad....
Lynne Bowen
I may not act like it a lot, But I care for these guys....
Lynne: Ah! Punches Henchman then turns around and stabs another Hey Jordan
Jordan: Hey Lynne, What are you doing here? Punches and Snaps henchman's Throat
Lynne: Told you, it's a Long Story.... Shoots another Henchman in the head Who are the other guys? And is Arin here?
Lynne: Sorry to hear that, Ah! Shoots a few Henchman that enter the room Told you I fight better Solo.....
Jordan: Damn....
Audrey: Sorry to break up the Romance, But can we get going Charges out Room
Jordan and Lynne look at each other
Lynne: Hell No....
Jordan: That's what I was thinking....
Ethan Willows
Ethan: Let's go guys!
Anslem: Fuck Yeah Jumps out of Corner and shoots incoming Henchman with Shotgun
Ethan: Where's Jacob?
Anslem: Tech Boy can take care of himself HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Starts Shooting Shotgun
Agent 123
Looks like I'm late to the Party
Agent 123: Here we go guys! Tanks on bottom Shoots Missiles
Constance: Could let us have some fun
Agent 123: Fine, Fine, Goons entering the building get em Constance! Constance Starts Shooting Machine Gun
Constance: EHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Agent 123: Yeah!
Anthanasius: Bye Guys!
Agent 123: Rope's down
Anthanasius: Thanks for the lift!
Anthanasius slides down rope on to the roof
Constance: Don't look at me, I'm having fun right here Starts Shooting Machine Gun
Wilson Smith
Wilson: Oh Shiat! You missed Shorty!
Zack: No....No... HIYYAHAHAHAHAHHAHA Charges with Knife
Wilson dodges Zack's charge once again
Wilson: Let's even this up a bit,....... Pulls out Knife
Jacob
Aw Shit, I fell and hurt my Leg I think
Jacob: Hey you! Help me up Ethan....
Harry: I'm not Ethan...
Jacob: Aw Shit.... Pulls out Tazer
Harry: I'm a tech guy too, So I also have a Tazer! bring it Pussy
Jacob: AHHHHHH
Jacob and Harry charge at each other with their Tazers
Javier Mendoza
Javier: Nah, Adios Bitch....
Alex Mason: Piece of Pussy, Sparker told me if you had any balls you would fight me like a man, Guess I will have to use this
Javier: Comprende?
Alex Mason shoots Javier
Javier: Ay Ay Ay!
Alex Mason: Kevlar saved your life, Good, Good, I'm gonna have fun with this.... Alex picks up Javier and throws him
Sparker
Sparker: Becs, go with Diana, I have some "business" to attend to, Get the briefcase... Pulls out Tommy Gun
Jordan: SPARKER GET OUT HERE!!! NOW!
Sparker: Hey Bra, Wanna Tussle! Now we can do this one or two ways, Considering that we both have weapons... But our people are busy killing each other, Wanna do a old style draw! Or a Brawl! Your Choice.....
Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 2
Rebecca Saunders
Rebecca: Good to see you Sparker....
Sparker: Good to see you to… moreo babe Kisses HmmHmmmHmmm now let's do this....
Rebecca: What about Alex and Zack?
Sparker: Hopefully they can take out a few of the Skrubs but if it comes down to it, they're Expendable. We stick to the plan, Vicente's or more of our men are charging this place so the skrubs shouldn't last for long...
Rebecca: Sweet
Sparker: Not as sweet as you HaHa Oh He Ha Ha,and I thought my jokes were bad....
Lynne Bowen
I may not act like it a lot, But I care for these guys....
Lynne: Ah! Punches Henchman then turns around and stabs another Hey Jordan
Jordan: Hey Lynne, What are you doing here? Punches and Snaps henchman's Throat
Lynne: Told you, it's a Long Story.... Shoots another Henchman in the head Who are the other guys? And is Arin here?
Jordan: Arin's dead, Sparker killed him.… [view original content]
Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 2
Rebecca Saunders
Rebecca: Good to see you Sparker....
Sparker: Good to see you to… moreo babe Kisses HmmHmmmHmmm now let's do this....
Rebecca: What about Alex and Zack?
Sparker: Hopefully they can take out a few of the Skrubs but if it comes down to it, they're Expendable. We stick to the plan, Vicente's or more of our men are charging this place so the skrubs shouldn't last for long...
Rebecca: Sweet
Sparker: Not as sweet as you HaHa Oh He Ha Ha,and I thought my jokes were bad....
Lynne Bowen
I may not act like it a lot, But I care for these guys....
Lynne: Ah! Punches Henchman then turns around and stabs another Hey Jordan
Jordan: Hey Lynne, What are you doing here? Punches and Snaps henchman's Throat
Lynne: Told you, it's a Long Story.... Shoots another Henchman in the head Who are the other guys? And is Arin here?
Jordan: Arin's dead, Sparker killed him.… [view original content]
Comments
Mine too
Btw whats the fad with the :P simbol..........wait OMG IT LOOKS LIKE A................omg
Ehh still liked him
Not as much as Sparker but still
My stomach is full of replies XD
Maybe
I think you guys are caring about this more than Hopeless and Arin dying xD
Holy shit Rebecca! I knew that she was capable of that but still... no comfortable prison cell for poor Vicente
And for Javier: Nah, Adios Bitch
Great part, probably one of my favourites in the story.
Wait, You're talking about Lynne now? xD She was a major part in the Prologue and first part, then she left, lol
Thank You!
Her and Sparker got Vicente..... It's the Beginning of the End....
To be honest i did'nt see much for hopeless in fact i predicted his/her death would be the first
And arins death was AWESOME......ly sad yes thats what i meant....... awesomely sad
Yeah im kinda sad Vicente isent joining the party at Limbo ....... But wat eves
I never knew that Lynne even existed XD
Who replied that?
Agreeing with Lord_EEA. Vicente had it coming and it felt really karmic, but still I liked his role in the story.
XD. Arin death was amazing. Hopeless death was Fantastic :P
Hopeless din't have to die.........You guys sealed his fate with that choice though...... And I feel like people have forgotten about Arin lol, And I never planned to send Vicente there, From the moment I saw him and Rebeccas character, I knew she was gonna kill him at some point....
Should have known
@Saltlick123
Say Whaaaa XD and i meant the Crooked Man living was not the point.
Yeah a women doesent sleep with mobsters unless they want something
Well you could say Vicente was more than a Mobster
Was he really ..... I dont think so and if he was the it was really never shown ............... at all
What do you mean? xD In the first parts he was revealed to be more than a typical mobster
Becouse he........ did what exactly that was outside mobster behavior?
Kind of, He was basically one of the worlds top arms dealers, In the end they're similar to mobsters
yep
btw why are you in such hurry to end Dark Angels?
I wouldn't call it in a "hurry" but idk actually, I guess maybe for the Holidays? Good point though....
well you posted 2 parts for the same fic and arent prolonging it so yeah.....
From the moment I wrote her, I knew she would play a part in Vics downfall. Still took me by surprise
Well, Becs put her tust in the wrong psychotic clown-terrorist IMO. Twilight Sparker can't be trust!
Yeah...... I think
Once I finish the story, I should do another Dark Angels Awards and I bet that would get some votes for "most shocking moment", We'll see what happens
Btws i HAVE to add this in
Vicente: Means more money for us....
Sparker: THIS IS NOT ABOUT THE MONEY!!!!!!! its about sending a message.........
XD I thought about that but Sparker wasn't in that scene, I think Sparker said that earlier somewhere though
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Still it HAD to be said
btw if sparker lives do the "I think were destined...." line ( im not ordering you i just think it would be cool)
You're on!
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next! BTW are you on the final part of the story?
You're on... Good chapter!
Nah, Adios Bitch
Awesome twist! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Yep, The beginning of the End....
Dark Angels Part 5: The Will to Survive Chapter 2
Rebecca Saunders
Rebecca: Good to see you Sparker....
Sparker: Good to see you too babe Kisses HmmHmmmHmmm now let's do this....
Rebecca: What about Alex and Zack?
Sparker: Hopefully they can take out a few of the Skrubs but if it comes down to it, they're Expendable. We stick to the plan, Vicente's or more of our men are charging this place so the skrubs shouldn't last for long...
Rebecca: Sweet
Sparker: Not as sweet as you HaHa Oh He Ha Ha,and I thought my jokes were bad....
Lynne Bowen
I may not act like it a lot, But I care for these guys....
Lynne: Ah! Punches Henchman then turns around and stabs another Hey Jordan
Jordan: Hey Lynne, What are you doing here? Punches and Snaps henchman's Throat
Lynne: Told you, it's a Long Story.... Shoots another Henchman in the head Who are the other guys? And is Arin here?
Jordan: Arin's dead, Sparker killed him. That's why we're here.....
Lynne: Sorry to hear that, Ah! Shoots a few Henchman that enter the room Told you I fight better Solo.....
Jordan: Damn....
Audrey: Sorry to break up the Romance, But can we get going Charges out Room
Jordan and Lynne look at each other
Lynne: Hell No....
Jordan: That's what I was thinking....
Ethan Willows
Ethan: Let's go guys!
Anslem: Fuck Yeah Jumps out of Corner and shoots incoming Henchman with Shotgun
Ethan: Where's Jacob?
Anslem: Tech Boy can take care of himself HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Starts Shooting Shotgun
Agent 123
Looks like I'm late to the Party
Agent 123: Here we go guys! Tanks on bottom Shoots Missiles
Constance: Could let us have some fun
Agent 123: Fine, Fine, Goons entering the building get em Constance! Constance Starts Shooting Machine Gun
Constance: EHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Agent 123: Yeah!
Anthanasius: Bye Guys!
Agent 123: Rope's down
Anthanasius: Thanks for the lift!
Anthanasius slides down rope on to the roof
Constance: Don't look at me, I'm having fun right here Starts Shooting Machine Gun
Wilson Smith
Wilson: Oh Shiat! You missed Shorty!
Zack: No....No... HIYYAHAHAHAHAHHAHA Charges with Knife
Wilson dodges Zack's charge once again
Wilson: Let's even this up a bit,....... Pulls out Knife
Jacob
Aw Shit, I fell and hurt my Leg I think
Jacob: Hey you! Help me up Ethan....
Harry: I'm not Ethan...
Jacob: Aw Shit.... Pulls out Tazer
Harry: I'm a tech guy too, So I also have a Tazer! bring it Pussy
Jacob: AHHHHHH
Jacob and Harry charge at each other with their Tazers
Javier Mendoza
Javier: Nah, Adios Bitch....
Alex Mason: Piece of Pussy, Sparker told me if you had any balls you would fight me like a man, Guess I will have to use this
Javier: Comprende?
Alex Mason shoots Javier
Javier: Ay Ay Ay!
Alex Mason: Kevlar saved your life, Good, Good, I'm gonna have fun with this.... Alex picks up Javier and throws him
Sparker
Sparker: Becs, go with Diana, I have some "business" to attend to, Get the briefcase... Pulls out Tommy Gun
Jordan: SPARKER GET OUT HERE!!! NOW!
Sparker: Hey Bra, Wanna Tussle! Now we can do this one or two ways, Considering that we both have weapons... But our people are busy killing each other, Wanna do a old style draw! Or a Brawl! Your Choice.....
Fist-Fight Sparker OR Draw with Sparker
Draw with Sparker - We've already seen that Sparker can take a punch, lots of them.
Hmmmmm We'll see
Aw thanks, I feel like it might not be as good as the last one though
Draw with Sparker
THE BEST CHAPTER!!!!!!